Life and Death Arbitration

Fortunately, write more and practice more. It's hard to get ahead in fantasy, so go for it.

The plot progress is off-kilter, the sentence processing is too dense, and the characters appear suddenly, but the title is fresh.

The plot is a bit off-kilter, it would be better if more details could be described at every transition of the plot. Come on

If you stick to it, your writing will gradually become more proficient. Come on＾0＾~

After reading the introduction, I was inexplicably reminded of the routine of Grandpa Goldfinger. I haven't read it yet. Let's collect it first.

After reading the first page, I think the writing is okay. It may be a problem with the plot and setting. Come on, duck.

Come on! It's still ok🙂🙂

Saw Chapter 5! Personal suggestion: The opening chapter can describe the scene where the male protagonist's mother was brutally murdered and left an orphan on her deathbed, half hidden and half hidden, leaving some clues of conspiracy. The male protagonist's father's self-blame, decadence, and sense of responsibility for the country, as well as his daily suffering, can be designed to wake him up from the curse of his wife's soul in his soul. Or maybe a strange creature was designed to enter, endangering the male protagonist who should have awakened. After his father went to save him, he cheered up and returned to the battlefield. Or a combination of the two. In short, everyone has his own ideas. Come on, encourage each other, I am also in the middle of the game and can't see clearly.

I like this book very much. At the same time, I also wrote a book, Seven Women in a Group, hoping to reach the level of this book.

Newcomers are here, please give me your advice.

{"NickName":"mundane good","UserId":361420770}[fn==③③]Creativity is to be good at connecting unrelated and impossible things together, revealing the meaning of the correlation between the two, and creating a related association.

I flipped through it a few times and found it unattractive and the plot was too bland.

The title and introduction of the book are a big problem

The Lantern Festival is here. I wish everyone a happy reunion, a happy family and good health. 😁😁😁

I looked at the title and saw that this was an outline from ten years ago...

Because the writing is really not good, I decided to stop updating and start accumulating literature. Special thanks to some friends for their daily recommendation votes. I left briefly to see you better, and thank you again for your support during this time.

Here comes the book😁