The Storyteller Who Walks in the Heavens

Why did this book become more and more awkward for me as I read it? Later, I finally found out after reading the comments in book circles. The author is writing a novel in the territory of a male channel but in the style of a female channel!

The protagonist is not a time traveler, but the protagonist's mother is a time traveler, so the protagonist still understands some modern civilized words.

Isn't the protagonist a yandere?

The introduction is very interesting, I hope the plot and writing are worthy of it

The first poisonous point: The identity of the protagonist is only revealed in more than ten chapters. How the protagonist and the heroine know each other is not explained. Reading Point 2: There is a single female protagonist, and the most important thing is that the single female protagonist is the successor. In Qin Shi, where there are many beauties, there is a single female protagonist who is the successor. Poisonous Point 3: Coward, if you say it sounds nice, you are tolerant, if you say it sounds bad, you mean to be sincere. The author's writing style is actually very good and solid. I'm pretty sure the female video writer is here.

When I saw this synopsis, I really wanted to read it, especially the Fox Demon Matchmaker Bamboo Industry chapter. The first chapter looked really good to me. Although some people say water, I think it's pretty good. I personally feel that if this kind of storytelling is continued as the main line. No matter what, I will keep watching. But what are all the rest of it? After reading more than a dozen chapters, except for the first chapter that fits the introduction, does the rest have much to do with your introduction? Storytellers ask you to at least tell stories. What's the point of creating so many self-created plots? (▼ Dishes ▼#) Of course everyone has their own preferences, I can only represent my point of view. If someone is dissatisfied, it is best not to criticize me, because I will definitely not be able to criticize you.

The plot is too protracted and the protagonist is indecisive, which is indeed suitable for a female channel. This kind of protagonist is scolded in male channels.

Interesting, but I haven't watched Tianxing Jiuge and Fox Demon Matchmaker

The protagonist's face is a reference to the Yamata Evil God in Thunderbolt. It's not a mother, but a monster. Maybe I didn't describe it well, so I misunderstood. Readers can search for the Yamata Evil God! !

There is a strong aura of Nvwang, and the books written by Nvwang have a small-minded spirit, just like the poor Eight Banners children of old Beijing who were poor and particular about food.

I thought it was a cultural invasion, but I was a little disappointed. Besides, you used the original plot to mix up the word count. Why not just paste and copy the original text and drag it to the shelf?

To be honest, this book is okay in female channels, but it is just disgusting in male channels. The author did not understand the difference between male channels and female channels. In male channel novels, boys usually put themselves as the protagonists, which may not be satisfactory in real life. How can you feel aggrieved when reading a novel? Most boys in "Jipanxia" can't accept it. In female channels, boys can carelessly pamper the female protagonist, because in male channels, boys act as the male protagonist, and in female channels, girls act as the female protagonist. The introduction of the novel is very attractive at the beginning, and so are the first few chapters. The Taker is really poisonous to boys.

The type is really good, but the name and character description are suitable for female channels to write fictitious and base stories. In comparison, Zhao Gao is a better man than this guy.

I feel that the author's style is more suitable for women's novels

The protagonist is too feminine. I guess the author is a woman. I have watched too many romantic dramas and the writing has a romantic style. It gave me goosebumps all over my body.

Is the author a girl? Why is there such a trend of female channels that female channels can no longer survive and come to test the waters on male channels? It makes me feel really awkward, but what about you...

After reading forty chapters, I always felt that the author's writing was getting worse and worse, and it felt more like the author was preparing for the abuse of the master.

Send it to female channel

Are you writing a Qiong Yao drama? What a vicious attack!

I chose the wrong world for the first time. Tian Xing Jiu Ge is not very popular in the novel. Even the poorly written Dou Po Douluo is more popular than him.