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It is now 10.52 Pm on March 19th, and today the author has not updated a chapter yet, let's dress up in women's clothing! Author!

Pluto in Super Beast gives me a domineering and mature feeling. And the Pluto here gives me the feeling of being a loser + a nouveau riche.

Can the author stop writing, Pluto is a great wise man, I only see garbage (le. Se) in your book.

I got poisoned after reading a few chapters.

I don't know if it's my imagination, but I always feel that the protagonist looks a bit like a loser.

Shennong complained First, I feel that the author has never read these original works at all. The characters are written randomly, not to mention the character design of Xiao Yan, and even the character designs of several female characters are completely ruined😅A few women start to buckle when they see the protagonist, saying that the protagonist is so handsome, right, what kind of rice circle girl Second, the three views and logic are not correct. It does not mean that the three views and logic are very important, but you must be logical in doing things. What is the logic of the protagonist? I can't see it😅 Readers and Xiao Yan, who has always despised the author, do things more logically than you. In the early stage, it was for the sake of the family, in the middle stage, it was for the master and father who were almost dead, in the later stage, for the peace of the continent, and in the period of the Great Overlord, for the peace of all the worlds, they gave up their generous resources and guarded the borders.

It can be said that Douluo's training system is simply an unreasonable system. Breakthroughs can only be achieved by hunting soul beasts and obtaining soul rings. It is simply ridiculous. First of all, the logic is inconsistent. What is the main function of the training system? Cultivation means that great power is attributed to oneself. I have never heard that such great power is attributed to oneself and requires the help of soul beasts. If you don't even understand the principle of such great power being attributed to oneself and controlling one's own destiny, what kind of cultivation system do you have? Isn't this nonsense? The setting of Douluo's worldview is also quite unreasonable. How many soul beasts can there be in a world where humans are the masters? The growth of soul beasts is based on thousands or ten thousand years. As a result, if you humans want to grow to the peak in just a few decades, you have to kill at least ten soul beasts. I asked how the soul beasts have not been exterminated in this situation? Do you think Douluo Continent is huge, and humans only account for one ten thousandth of it? Isn't it inconsistent? As mentioned before, humans are the masters of the Douluo Continent. In this case, you still claim that the soul beasts have not been exterminated. Do you think that the soul beasts are wild monsters in the game, and they can be refreshed regularly?

Carrots and cabbage, everyone has their own preferences. I can only say this, the beginning of what I wrote was okay, but starting from Xiao Yan's section, I felt like an old man on the subway. 40,000 years. . After practicing for 40,000 years, it is enough. . . . It gives people a feeling of being a nouveau riche. . . Forget it,,, it's a fast food invincible article after all. Too much emphasis on writing. . It's a bit overwhelming. Maybe I have a favorable impression of Xiao Yan and Tang San, which affected my impression of this book. Seriously, if you have a brain, you can enter by mistake, but you can't enter without a brain. Finally, come on. There are always people who love to read your books. I'm just taking the first step Farewell

How to say? It feels like the protagonist's character is not like a time traveler. It feels like you are scolding the protagonist's character and bringing it to the original Pluto, but you can't write that feeling. It's disgusting to watch.

The author did not write out the character of the protagonist. He has been imitating the character of Pluto. The key is that he has not imitated it yet.

Damn it, you deserve to be called "Pluto"

The main character is a mortal, and Pluto's evening party is ruined. Oh my god, you can't write that philosophical, philosophical Pluto.

No, I can't stand it anymore. After reading a few chapters I saw Pluto slap Xiao Yan on the face. This is too low. Pluto, you slap your mouth, you are so far away from this society.

Why don't you consider resurrecting the phoenix at all if you have a daughter but not a mother?

It's highly toxic and if you don't have strong antibodies, don't read it. Don't be fooled by the title

Write the protagonist as a wage earner. Write the supporting character as the protagonist. Change the title of the book to "I Became Pluto at the Beginning and Became a wage earner."

This novel, except for being a little bit toxic, Pluto turned into a loser, the writing is poor, and the personalities of all the original characters have been rewritten, everything else is pretty good.

The protagonist wants to spend 600 million points to unlock the 60,000-year seal, which persuaded me. The protagonist doesn't want to strengthen himself. With so many points, he relies on the functions of the group. Even if you just practice for thousands of years, you can become a great emperor. Tens of thousands of years have passed, and you can't afford to wait for thousands of years. After a thousand years, you can easily break the Xuanming coffin, practice Chen Dong's skills, and fiddle with the timeline. Isn't it good for him? I have so many points and don't want to arm myself.

It's just a slap in the face for showing off, it's the kind of nouveau riche thing, it's disgusting

That's it? ? Don't update this book again! If you don't have the skills, don't write about the super beast Pluto! I have read so many books, and this is the first time I want to review them so much! !

This is not Hades, just a loser with power.

It is all your contribution that I can write this down. , So outrageous. Can read. I can even write novels.

The writing is okay, but why is it a eunuch?

May I ask, is this book about two protagonists? Or who is the protagonist?

It's really a bit toxic, so I just brag about it. The character of the supporting character has been completely wiped out.

It's good-looking, but the author doesn't have the feel of Pluto when writing it.

I personally recommend not to watch it😱, I almost got poisoned to death

The main reason is that there is a magic stick group leader with an aura of subduing wisdom. It feels weird. Wouldn't it be embarrassing for a modern person? There is a kind of two immortal emperors beating from the entrance to the end of the village. A few people on the side couldn't stand it and pushed the wheelchair to beat the two people half to death. . . .

Are there any super beast or related novels?

Is there a group? The uploaded one cannot be added at all.