Case Files: I Am a Brocade Guard

I've read Chapter Seventy-Eight. How should I put it? It's a low-end version of "Da Feng's Watcher". It can be regarded as an upper-middle-class monster-slaying novel. Overall, the characters are quite distinct. Li Yunxiao is decisive, witty and handsome, which makes me feel very involved 😜. Weng Datou's old-fashioned attributes and Su Qianyu's foodie attributes can add a bit of laughter. The supporting characters are also well-shaped. It looks a bit like a light novel. Let's drive separately in daily life and make some jokes. It's just that some of the jokes are older. The case-solving part. Overall, it was pretty good. There were twists and turns, there was a climax, and the part where the results of the first case were revealed was pretty good. In the second case, I roughly guessed what happened, but I don't know if I'm right. 😃 The writing is okay, but I guess I am a newbie and I am not able to grasp some things smoothly enough. Overall it's pretty good, you can keep it, look forward to it. Big cheers for the author. Don't delete it if you don't like it.

The first chapter "The Case of the Little Man in the Ear" is adapted from the chapter "The Man in the Ear" in "Liao Zhai". The original text is attached: Tan Jinxuan is a scholar in this county. He believed in a kind of qigong technique and practiced it every day, winter and summer. After practicing for several months, I feel like I have gained something. One day, while he was sitting cross-legged, he heard a small voice in his ears, like the cry of flies, saying, "Can I see you?" As soon as he opened his eyes, he couldn't hear it anymore. He closed his eyes again, held his breath and listened, and heard the voice just now again. He thought: This may be because he has mastered his skills, and he was secretly happy. From then on, he sat down and listened every day, thinking that when he heard something speak again, he should say yes and open his eyes to see what it was. One day, sure enough, he heard the little voice saying "Can we see you?", And he quietly agreed: "We can see you." Soon he felt a rustling sound in his ears, as if something was crawling out. He slowly opened his eyes and took a peek, and sure enough he saw a little man, more than three inches tall, with a ferocious face and as ugly as a yaksha, walking around on the ground. He was secretly surprised and thought that no matter what, let's see what changes happen in him first. While I was watching, I suddenly heard someone calling from my neighbor calling to borrow something. When the villain heard this, he looked very panicked and wandered around the house, as if a mouse couldn't find its nest. Tan Xiucai also felt confused, as if he had lost his soul, and he didn't know where the villain had gone. Then he became insane and cried incessantly. His family consulted a doctor and took medicine for him. After half a year of treatment, he gradually recovered.

According to readers' opinions, because Weng Datou was too weak, his strength was adjusted, and Weng Datou was demoted from the Xuan realm to the Yellow realm. In order to balance his strength, Su Qianyu was reduced from the earth realm to the mysterious realm. 😀As for why Weng Datou became the chief prosecutor, it is because of his background, which will be mentioned in the story later. 😜Thanks to Song Qingcheng and other readers for their suggestions.

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Almost meaningless. It feels like the author is trying to imitate "The Watcher". The protagonist is not afraid of power, insists on speaking based on evidence, and pleads for the innocent. But how to put it, I have now seen the end of Liu San's case. One important difference between this book and The Watcher is that no matter how the Watcher behaves, there is still a trace of kindness in his heart. Seeing the protagonist's concern for the case, he will also do the kindness to the people, and will be inspired by the protagonist's words and actions. In this book, I have not found a trace of kindness among people other than the important supporting characters. Personally, I feel that the author can describe more about the common people and petty officials while handling the case, and see the big picture from the small, and write that they still have good thoughts in their hearts and are not unscrupulous in their actions. Anyway, that's what I mean This is my first time writing such a long comment, and there are many things I can't express, so I apologize.

It can be seen that the author has made full preparations to write this novel. The road to becoming a god must be very difficult. I support the author greatly!

Happy New Year😁

The author has a message for you. What I saw from other authors No matter how poorly conceived the plot of a book is, it is still a complete plot. But if you revise it hurriedly after hearing the opinions, the result will be a strange monster. There can only be one person holding the steering wheel. Otherwise, it will overturn And what readers said We are here to see you (the author) write novels, not to see readers write novels In short, don't change the outline, plot, or plot just because of some readers' opinions Remember that it is you who write the book, not the readers Come on!

The author is above me😌😌

What I like about this case-by-case approach is that the case can be written shorter and the pace faster. Come on.