
Douluo Zhibei Luoxia
斗罗之极北落霞
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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421Chapters
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Let me talk about the problems.
After reading part of this novel, I felt that the author wanted to use God's perspective, but sometimes he didn't. In the beginning, it was said that the "Son of Destiny" was Huo Yuhao. . . (Fatalism) A series of arrangements such as the million-year soul ring and the subsequent Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor were all arranged by Tang San, and both the Ming and Ming dynasties knew about them. Let me just say, there is a very crucial point. If you ask a friend to help with something, will you explain it clearly to your friend at all? Note that everyone knows everything about it. It would be outrageous if the Ming Dynasty and the Ming Dynasty knew everything about the future direction. Then I knew that Huo Yuhao could solve the soul ring problem before the plot even started. I would say, Huo Yuhao invented the soul after Electrolux sacrificed it, right? How did Ming Dynasty and Ming Dynasty know? (Even if it was arranged by Tang San, why should he tell Ming and Erming) In fact, the plot is not reasonable. To be honest, if the author wants to reduce the influence of the original work, he should not use God's perspective. He wants to use God's perspective to highlight the protagonist's intelligence, but does not want to give the protagonist a God's perspective, and then gives the supporting character a God's perspective. This is very contradictory, and it is unreasonable for the supporting character to know this. Then the interpersonal relationships of these supporting characters are not handled well. Those who are in the enemy camp with the protagonist must be the kind who bully others, and their character must be very bad, and they must be the unjust party at a glance (the conflict with Shrek Academy was inexplicable at the beginning), that's why I didn't watch it. Based on the above, it is found that the author writes the book based on preconceptions, which is a common problem.
Hurry up. Update quickly. When will it be updated?
I'm just curious about one thing. Why does the Silver Dragon King have such a huge advantage? After his body is injured and has the strength of at least a level 1 quasi-god king, he steals technology from humans, especially the technology of soul-guided artillery shells, while the gods are not around. He steals a level 12 soul-guided artillery shell as a nuclear deterrent, then gathers a group of senior researchers, and then goes directly to Tang Wulin to kill the God of Destruction core, and then drains the golden ancient tree in To suppress Tang Hao, a second-level god, drain the source of the Douluo Continent, break through to the Dragon God level, take the remaining soul beasts to colonize the interstellar world, and then fully develop the technology of soul-guided artillery shells to find the location of the black hole in the God Realm. Ten thousand years have passed. There must be fifteen or sixteen level soul-guided cannonballs that can hurt the God King. Prepare a dozen rounds and give Tang San a big hit when the God Realm is about to come out? ,,
Douluo II, the position of the soul beast, I have never seen anything better than what the author wrote. Some fellow Douluo people were reincarnated into soul beasts or descendants of angels, and ended up running to Shrek happily to be Huo Yuhao's father and mother. Those who watched it literally spat out a mouthful of blood. It's not that it's not good to go to Shrek. I actually don't have that much objection to changing my identity. But his identity and mission were completely forgotten. Extremely uncomfortable. Judging from the current plot, the stalemate will probably last for some time. According to the original plot line, the auspicious beast is not far from death! Don't know what will happen next?
Even though Rakshasa is an evil god, with Bibi Dong's character, it is impossible for him to like Ye Xishui. Not to mention similar experiences, the Soul-eating Spider Emperor can also devour souls, but apart from Qian Xunji, Bibi Dong has never devoured another person. Bibi Dong is ambitious, but her bottom line is also there. If you really want to find an heir, Orange is the only one who can do it! There are also nine-headed bats, which were killed by Shura God Tang San. Bibi Dong may not even know the existence of this thing at all, so he doesn't want to pour all dirty water on them. My dear, you designed the plot so that before Tang San ascended to the God Realm, he did not want to see the Wuhun Palace appear again, so it would be better to place the nine-headed bats he killed at the Wuhun Palace ruins to prevent anyone from getting the Wuhun Palace inheritance, and at the same time to discredit the Wuhun Palace.
What a disgusting plot, it feels like eating shit! !
Come on, kill Yakuza quickly 🙂
Protagonist, you are a real bastard, forget it in the early stage, I can't bear it, md. Why did you use so many precious metals to help a Shrek student make a humanoid soul guide in the fallen forest? She also said that because she saved Meng Hongchen, who killed Meng Hongchen's guiding crow? Don't you have some idea in your mind? As soon as we met If it wasn't her who wanted to kill you, you would have gone out a long time ago. Saving Meng Hongchen can't even be considered as making up for it. At most, it can be regarded as a little help. She is still unwilling to accept that her Golden Crow Martial Spirit is not the ultimate martial spirit. You are really yours. A person who scolds you the first time he meets you and wants to kill you the second time he meets you is so kind.
Rubbish, rubbish, rubbish. I'm so angry. It's boring. Let's destroy it.
To be honest, judging from Wang Qiu'er's current performance, he deserves to die. At that time, let Xing Dou eliminate the beast tide. Isn't it good for you to be in the extreme north and develop?
In his previous life, as a monster who could fight against gods, he didn't even know his spiritual will! What a fucking nonsense!
The subject matter is good, but after reading so many chapters, I still have a very depressing feeling, and some parts feel like they are inserted for the purpose of forced penetration.
It suppresses the protagonist so much that he constantly suffers losses. The special Tang San is so strong that he is hopelessly strong. The protagonist upgrades too slowly. It is so disgusting. The book is definitely a good book, but the protagonist's explosion requires too much and too long of preparation, which makes the readers angry.
This Silver Dragon King is disgusting, right?
The plots and analysis of Far North and Destruction of the Tang Sect are the most fluently written ones I have ever read, and they are not too clever, and they are basically on par with the original works. The plot alone is much better than those mindless dual-standard system bulldozers. It is a breath of fresh air among the fandom. Although it is slightly flawed, I feel that it is not a big problem. When I saw the place where I joined the Holy Spirit Academy, I felt that it was too easy for the protagonist to get information about some high-level soul masters and forces. Although it seems reasonable to use the disguise of a hidden family, I personally think it is a bit far-fetched, maybe for personal reasons. I haven't read it yet. It's a pity that I didn't sign the contract. The author really uses his love to generate electricity👍. Above.
Finally, remember to come to Bo Judgment, Xiao Wu, A Yin, Da Ming, Er Ming, these four soul beast scum, remember not to let them die, just extract their souls and light the magic lamp, and repent forever.
In the same article, you are quite genius in writing the main character in such a bad way. What a great idea! !
Don't try to create a soul, that thing is the killer of the soul beast.
It's intermittent, and it's okay to write poorly. But it's written so well. It can be seen that you are one of the few people with brains... Don't let me know where you live.
The comment section is so polarized that I don't know if I can read it.
Shennong passed by this place and tasted the grass. However, it was extremely poisonous. I hope everyone who passes by this place will spread the word!
There isn't much poison, but every bite is lethal.
I looked at the catalog and sent it based on experience, but there are always exceptions to everything, so check out the comment section. Ah! ! ! ! OK! The speed of light is smooth! We all meet in the mountains and rivers, Pindao will withdraw first, bye!
It does give people a distorted feeling, and it feels like a routine from a novel from a few years ago. It's a pity that the subject matter is so good.
It's very vicious at the beginning, but the plot gets much better as you get to the end, and it's quite enjoyable.
Damn it, he has become so vicious since he helped Wu Ming sew the wound. You are already standing on the side of the soul beast. There is no one around. Why don't you take the opportunity to eradicate the human genius 😒😒😒, and later gave you a human guide device (note I agree with the previous one and emphasized that Shrek should not be allowed to obtain the technology of mixing human beings into weapons), and the most poisonous thing is that he also emphasizes that it is a proud work, and I don't understand what it is intended to do 🙄🙄🙄🙄
Just read some of the torture three chapters later.
Exploding 💩 Lai Ke, Niu A Yin, and killing Tang San, his father, and his descendants were well written. The ending of Huo Gua and Gu Yuena was better than the original work. After all, they deserved their punishment. I have never seen a woman who can't walk. She leads the soul beast to torture three people wholeheartedly, which is worthy of her position. Unfortunately, there are too few parts of torture three, and they are basically the middle and rear parts.
After reading the catalog, I vomited three liters of poison and was seriously injured. It was so terrifying. .
There are a lot of wrong sentences, I suggest you revise them when you have time.
It's so procrastinating. I've said one thing over and over again, and I'm trying to force my wits out😿