Douluo's Death God Wonderland

Now some of the protagonists

After reading the first few chapters, I would like to express my thoughts: 1. I feel that there are a bit too many swear words, so I need to be more appropriate. I think most readers don't like too many swear words, and I didn't feel very comfortable reading it. 2. I feel that Tang San will not fall in love with Xiao Wu so quickly as soon as he sees her (personal opinion)

Why do I feel that this ranking is a bit fake? There are always some inexplicable things, or the book of the eunuch suddenly becomes the top one. It used to be funny enough in the Four Sacred Books, but it feels like it hasn't changed much now. It's still the same starting point and the same attitude.

Why are the rankings all for Douluo Douluo?

I changed the name of my work to Douluo: Death God Wonderland because I found a work with the same name as me. This is my first time writing a novel. If you correct me if there is anything wrong, I will definitely change it.

I feel like I should introduce Chu Feng's soul skills in detail. If the author has already thought of a way to solve this problem, then pretend I didn't.

Out of curiosity, does the author plan to finish writing this book?

Good guy, is the name of this protagonist the reincarnation of Chu Luoli, the Emperor of Heaven? Or a ray of true spirit?

? ? ? Confused, I sent a red envelope for recommendation votes and planned to receive one myself, but it was gone in an instant!

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Renew? ! ? ! ? ! ? !

The boss's data is much better than mine. I'm jealous of my real name. Please py it.

The plot is dragging, especially today's chapters, and although there are several updates every day, the word count is worrying

I think this book may be more marketable if it is classified into the light novel genre.

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The writing is good, better than what the original author wrote. There may be other reasons for not being able to sign the contract, but the author's writing style is very tonal. Of course, this type of subject matter is too homogenized and it is all written badly.