Peerless Tang Sect Yuhao, You Have Changed

Author, if you write a novel without dividing it into paragraphs, then I personally think there is no need to write it down, because it is meaningless and no one will read this kind of thing, except for people who are really poor at reading.

I found a few peerless fanfics, but they all liked the idea of ​​Brother Tianmeng being written as a female.

Reading the comments, it seems that the author has done a bad job, so I'll take a look at it.

You can't afford to offend the Blood Chakra Eye, let it go

What's the point of not having a prophet? Watch the rise of another Huo Yuhao? Persuade to quit persuade to quit

The author's writing style makes people look ten years younger all of a sudden. It feels like a junior high school student who has been in the dead house for 15 years.

What a middle schooler, I can dig out three bedrooms and one living room with my feet

I finished reading it in less than a minute. Author, you are so short.

I don't care who the heroine is, but I don't want Dong'er to become Tang Wutong.

There is no woman in the heart to draw a sword and the god of nature. I hope that the male protagonist will take the route of a ruthless strong man and show off. Never fall in love. If you love and leave, you will hate and hate, and you will not be able to seek. There is no self, no one, no sentient beings. The appearance of a lifeless person, a red and pink skull, white bones and flesh!

Can the author allow Huo Yuhao to join the Noumenon Sect and worship Poison Immortal as his master, but still retain his identity as a Shrek student and a member of the Tang Sect, so that Huo Yuhao can have a triple identity as a member of these three forces? , Hoping that Huo Yuhao, who would be highly valued if he could not die from poison, asked him to agree to Huo Yuhao's method, and so did the old guy,

After reading a few chapters I couldn't stand it anymore. . .

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns. The stone man in Danghun Mountain sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders the demon to the north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, but love cannot match the persistence of tears. Destiny means success or failure. The immortal regrets but I don't. I knew at an early age that the world would be difficult, but I was still able to fly like a hero in the clouds. The cold wind blows all the way, causing the sea to rise and fall, and the traveler walks alone. Thousands of times of hard work and painstaking efforts cast iron, and exhaustive efforts are devoted to forging a sword. Now the sword is pointing at the clouds, refining Gu, refining people, and refining heaven.

A bit poisonous, a lot of weird settings

God of Emotions, Master of the Spirit Pagoda, Ice Spirit Douluo, Disciple of the Moon ... These are the identities and statuses that I, the Son of Destiny, once had. Some fates that I don't care about but can't get rid of. ... Others call me Huo Yuhao. A person who has been plagued by worries and missions all his life. ... In order to bring peace back to the mainland, I did things I didn't like, fell in love with a Tang Wutong who I shouldn't have fallen in love with, and trusted a Tang San who I shouldn't have trusted: causing the mainland to suffer for thousands of years... The word failure seems to be linked to my destiny. ... Even if I got master Electrolux's true inheritance and peerless magical skills, I still missed an opportunity to escape from Tang San's control. ... It made my master Electrolux make a fatal sacrifice and give me the final element of victory... Leaving a Necronomicon Holy Spell God, Brother Tianmeng said that it was God's will that I must face Tang San, and it was a fate that could not be avoided no matter what... It's just that I don't believe in fate. Even if some of the predictions came true, I still convinced myself that they were just coincidences. Something that can be figured out with wisdom and patience. I will not intentionally do the opposite just because of misfortune. No matter what God's will, fate, fate and destiny are, I, Huo Yuhao, will only do what my reason tells me is the right thing to do. If you want me to lead, I will lead. If I need to lie, I will lie. If my life allows the existence of love, I will definitely love. No matter what other people say, regardless of whether they can preserve their true self, I, Huo Yuhao, will do the right thing. Fight the right battle with Tang San! Fight for the safety of Dong'er and Qiu'er. To fight for the ideals of the world and to avenge my mother. Fight for my master. To fight for my son. Fight for the people of mainland China, regardless of whether they understand it or not! Fight, fight—fight! Today, the Son of Destiny will fight his last battle! ! !

You said you have the inheritance of the Hokage, but I saw you using the Sharingan and Earth Release, and you could have used the Triple Rashomon to defeat Senrei, but you would have been beaten if you didn't use it. The Hokage's Release Technique was not used much, so you might as well not write it!

It's like lying to an author to reply

😡Author, have you retracted a comment you made on my last post? 😡Why take it back? Even if you directly say that there will be no more updates, it's still a good thing😭