Douluo Phoenix Fire God

The author talked like fart, saying that he would not tear down the original CP, but ended up directly making Dai Mubai a villain, and an original heroine. The original heroine had no sense of existence, and I didn't know how to add it. Also, when the author wrote the outline, he was sure to steal Zhu Zhuqing, why did he add an original heroine? But the subsequent plot directly poisoned me, who was preparing to become the Poison King.

I hope it's not too poorly written. Just don't cheat too seriously. Then it's really impossible to watch. The heroine should not mess with Zhu Zhuqing and Rongrong. I hope the author can change it to something else. The original one is not good either, that would be too miserable. I think Shui Bing'er is good. After all, they are all Phoenix. Personal opinion

I have read several of Ma Hongjun's novels, and they are all just dog-licking. I hope you won't write like them.

Is it okay for the heroine Zhu Zhuqing

The original heroine is so smart. Why don't you make Shui Bing'er, Ice Phoenix Spirit, Qian Renxue, or Zhu Zhuqing? The original is a hammer.

If you don't understand, just ask, why don't you look for a soul beast with Phoenix bloodline to make the soul ring? People look for dragons for their dragon souls. It's outrageous for you not to look for a phoenix.

In the end, the phoenix became a god, and it was a pity that the agarwood lost its soul. What the hell is an original heroine, a bunch of mosaics.

I've finished reading it and would like to share my thoughts. First, the author's writing style is very good and well-organized. It can be regarded as one of the more thoughtful novels in Douluo. Second, as for the current trend, the heroine of the novel is probably the original heroine of the author, and it seems that she won't be able to dismantle CP. Maybe she can make the Shrek Eight Monsters and combine them one-on-one. To be honest, this is a bit unacceptable to most people. The purpose of fan fiction is change and fantasy. If the author wants to create an original heroine , this is no problem, but if there are no female characters in Douluo, or if it is written as a single heroine, then it is estimated that no matter how well written it is, few people will follow it. After all, Shrek in the original work has become a god. No matter how good your writing style is, your direction will never change. This will easily offend people, and the gain will outweigh the loss. Therefore, the biggest problem I am concerned about is the female protagonist issue. If it is just an original female protagonist, can the author tell me, or I hope the author can tell me which female protagonists there are.

Ice and fire eyes, grab it! Not to Tang San! ! !

The heroine Bai Chenxiang, the original work is a pity

What kind of bullshit is this level 1 God of Fire? Phoenix directly destroys the life of the God King. It perfectly matches the fire that destroys everything and the fire that creates life.

I read the comments and said it is an original heroine. Is that true? Reading the comments before reading the book is really poisonous. If it is really an original heroine, it really does not meet my personal preferences. If it is a harem and an original heroine is added, it is still acceptable.

The original heroine of this book is called Leng Shuang'er. Enter if you can see, run if you can't.

If it is not a single heroine, I suggest that Shui Bing'er and Bai Chenxiang and Shui Bing'er have martial soul fusion skills

Under the protection of the Fire God Spear, go and get the soul bone and soul ring from under the eyes of Binghuo Liangyi! ! ! Eating two herbs will make you invulnerable to water and fire, and you can evolve the ultimate fire! If possible, let's have a phoenix in the dual form of ice and fire, with the same twin attributes as the twin martial spirits! ! !

The harem is okay, but it depends on whether you can handle it. 98% Of the authors can't handle the emotional drama, otherwise they will look like a pile driver to the readers. Not to mention disgusting, they will definitely get angry. In fact, the harem seems to be the most enjoyable, but most authors cannot control it and make women feel flesh and blood and full of soul.

They have already added Sister Leng forcibly, are you still going to fuck Zhu Zhuqing? Sure enough, I still can't resist big breasts 😅

Suddenly I thought of Xiao H's same article, Ma Hongjun's counterattack 😰

The heroine Farewell Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong and so on, I'm tired of seeing these, it's boring!

I hope there won't be so many women. It's normal to travel to another world and want to have sex with a goddess. But if it's a stallion, it's impossible for all girls to take care of it. I think it's irresponsible to them. Also, even if it's a fan, you can make the original characters a little bit more sexy, but don't make them all scum. Even if the male protagonist has the aura of the protagonist, he can't do everything smoothly. I hope the author can listen to the readers' suggestions.

How can I put it? The writing of the master and Dai Linbai is too silly. It is too different from the original work. It is really a drama. Even if you hate the master, you should write it more normally. You write the person who is the first theory to compete with each other like a child. Is it really good?

Why is it all Zhu Zhuqing? Isn't Zhu Zhuyun fragrant

The heroine Qian Renxue is the most beautiful woman. She also fucked the three Shrek girls but refused to accept them. She tortured the three Shrek girls.

I remember that Ma Hongjun was asked to be his apprentice by Flanders just after he awakened his martial spirit.

It would be nice if the two soul rings were one hundred years old, or one hundred years and one thousand years old. Two thousand years old, why don't you look at them to your liking?

I have a question, why did the author choose to cut it in half and write something else?

I have to complain. The author's writing style is really not that good.

Isn't this latest chapter weird? Why is it the same as the previous chapter? The word count is the same?

Readers of the original novel who have come to read the fic all know that it is impossible to woo Zhu Zhuqing among the three Shrek girls. The Star Luo royal family has long-standing rules of life and death competition. You, a soul master of about level 30, want to intervene, but you are afraid that you will not die fast enough. Xiao Wu is even more impossible. Ning Rongrong is fine. Once you get her, just wait to become your son-in-law.

The author is not really wanted 😢