Dragon God Lord of Global Gods

Baicai's writing has improved again. The writing and plot are good, but there are a few typos. Then the writing technique is still a bit green, and the distribution of paragraphs is not appropriate. The battle scene is very exciting, I watched it and I am also learning. There are also some vocabulary words that need to be noted, and they may be used incorrectly. ——Shen Yuanwen 2021.2.5

How can I put it this way? I suddenly saw your question in Discovery about whether to give up on starting a new book. I couldn't help but click in and read a chapter. There are too many areas that need improvement. The writing style is still relatively immature, wordy, and unclear in description.

The author's article is really wonderful, just like the mountain water, gurgling continuously, flowing through my heart drop by drop, nourishing my heart, making me feel the beauty and magnificence of the world, and I can't help but be full of hope for the future. So I want to... Sacrifice cabbage and you will become a god!

Moshang is like jade, and his son is unparalleled in the world.

When I saw the introduction of Qie Qie Qie, it seemed that the front part of emmm was pretty good, but that exclamation point and the dragon eyebrows really hit the mark.

Let's cut it, it's not a blow. In fact, you signed the contract more because of the popularity. You can look back and see that the protagonist is a bit middle-aged and immature. Of course, you must be young. In fact, you can still write it, but you remember to practice your pen well. Don't hold on to the idea that you will get up. Come on, take your time. There are indeed many problems.

The Black Pearl Familia are social, and the individual demons have good qualifications. The former can easily form large-scale followers. Flower demons, vine demons, and tiger demons have few tribesmen, and they usually walk alone. Group demons are not like the Western Familia in the sense of the word, but they are not as strong as the gods and tyranny of the East. The spider demons only have six sisters and three brothers: tiger, sheep, and deer. In theory, they can become immortals even if they are not weak, but their combat power is average among monks. Dungeon Spiderwomen are both a magical race and mortal beings. They are subject to birth, old age, illness and death, but their numbers are considerable. Generally speaking, movies and TV shows cannot balance the charm of Eastern and Western monsters. The filming of gods, demons, myths and heroes is like a copycat of Middle-earth or Potato Spirit, but it doesn't have an epic feel. It doesn't have the flavor of A Song of Ice and Fire or DND or WOW.

System, and becoming a god? This is what I am interested in. Come on, the author. I look forward to your next content.

The second grade atmosphere is too strong. From the title to the introduction, I have no interest in reading the main text.

From Dot Circle. I have already written my evaluation of the first chapter in the chapter review. It is recommended that you practice narrative writing first. It does not require too much glamor, but at least tells the story clearly. As for character, when I first started writing, I also encountered the problem of abrupt transitions (not making a living from writing, not writing on a writing platform, just writing short stories) Write a scene with a character you like and his background (based on the original work or a fan of the same person). You can use three description methods (action, language, consciousness) [you can try the first person]

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

What I dare to write all the time is good!

Come and support, the good article has been collected.

The hero and I have the same birthday🥺

I've read five chapters first, and I feel pretty good. It's better than most novels I started with.

Ah! Well, cheers for the author!

Come on, your writing is better than mine!