Douluo White Paper Fan

It's simply rubbish among rubbish. If there really was a Canglang King like Xia Yan in the original novel, he would have become Ning Rongrong's fiancé long ago. Neither Sword Douluo nor Bone Douluo have full innate soul power, they are almost at level 9 or 8. Xia Ye is still the Blue Wolf King plus nine levels, he must be protected, and he still needs to be in the same village as the male protagonist, and he makes the protagonist so useless, it is simply garbage and disgusting

If you feel uncomfortable writing fan fiction, it might even be a bit cowardly. If you don't like it, it's still a bit of a coward. What else are you looking at? If you haven't watched it yet, don't watch it, and it's not finished yet. It's the same as eating history.

So a six-year-old child with no martial arts awakening, without machine tools or other manufacturing tools, or a golden finger, made a gun with his bare hands? This is unreasonable. If you entrust others to build the parts and assemble them yourself, you still have to explain it. There is also recoil, a secret technique in which the recoil disappears afterward.

The 6th one is easy to persuade. If a Contra accepts you as a child who has just awakened his martial spirit, he will refuse, because he probably doesn't know how to write the word "death".

The protagonist's pretense is so stiff. It's a bit strange to look at this protagonist.

I came here to read Shuangwen, and I saw in your comments that the Douluo in your mind is the one where the protagonist is aggrieved and suppressed? Hand over your special skills to the enemy and then use them against yourself. Don't worry about how you clear yourself up later. At least if you do this, you will definitely be depressed for a while. This book, alas.

He can defeat Tang San but not Huang Dou

Is this book without a heroine and a pure love story? If so, the author must write it down.

Anyway, when I was running for the Royal Battle Team, I felt that the protagonist was mentally ill.

Wow, I'm so angry. Ning Rongrong, a witch, actually scolded the protagonist's slave, as if she had slapped her. . .

Who is the heroine? Is it the one named Ding Yan? So is she disguised as a woman?

You're so stupid. Why do people want to bet with you?

Good guy, it turns out that he has a criminal record, no wonder he is a eunuch.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

The author will update it again

I am very annoyed. Every time I write a good novel, I will stop writing it in the second half and just stop updating it. Alas

Too naive. In the original work, if Tang Hao's son hadn't been stripped of everything, it's really a question whether Tang San would have been able to grow up. This book embodies the dark side of the protagonist but ignores the dark side of too many original characters. It can only be said that he has not been severely beaten by society. Hey, we're the same person! No matter how you write it, it will never surpass the original work.

I just read about chapter 1670. The characters in the first part are well developed, but the later part where several women are jealous and compete for the lead role is really disappointing. At present, it seems that Xiang Yan is the heroine, and the male protagonist is a soul in his thirties. He doesn't know what it means for a woman to wear gauze and come to her room to massage herself in the middle of the night. I won't say anything about it. , And she looked like I don't know what she was thinking, which made people feel extremely uncomfortable. Moreover, Ye Lingling was backing her throughout the whole process, and kept saying instructive words, such as "I want to commit myself to you," and "You are so cute," all described here. I don't know if she was backing up later. I really can't stand it anymore. In the middle part, they are all described like this, which is very uncomfortable. She is obviously here to write a novel.

I just realized that the eunuch has been here for so long and why the group has been cancelled?

The writing is a bit stiff, but as an experienced reader, I think you can still read it.

No wonder his grades were so bad. He didn't take the first level until he was almost fifty chapters old. Every day he was either quarreling or fighting with six or seven-year-old kids, or helping others train. With this way of writing, you will probably have to write a thousand chapters before you reach Douluo.

Even though everything is good in the world, I just want to remain unmoved, no.

What's going on! Why is Xiang Yan a woman?