Reborn in Battle Through the Heavens as Nalan Yanran

15 Years old: Three levels of fighting spirit. 16 years old: 8th stage fighting spirit. Attend a bar mitzvah. 16 and a half years old: Four-star fighter. Enter the Warcraft Mountains (nearly 1 year). Meet the Little Fairy Doctor and explore treasures in the cave to obtain the Purple Cloud Wings and the Pure Lotus Demon Fire Remnant Picture. Practice the Flame Devouring Wave Ruler for more than two months and advance to the level of 6-star fighter. Kill the Wolf Head mercenary group and advance to 7 stars. Meet Yunyun (who had been in the Warcraft Mountains for nearly 8 months at this time), seize the Purple Fire, and advance to the 9-Star Fighter. Goodbye Little Medical Fairy, Kill the Wolf Head Mercenary Group, Xiaogu has been practicing for more than 2 months. 17 and a half years old: Promoted to Fighting Master and left the Warcraft Mountains. 1. Pass the second-grade alchemist exam and go to the Tagor Desert, meet the Ice Emperor Hai Bodong and get the second fragment of the Pure Lotus Demon Fire; 2. Meet the brothers, explore the strange fire, get the Green Lotus Earth Core Fire Lotus Seed, and advance to the 2-star Dou Master; 3. Meet the Queen, take away the colorful Sky-Swallowing Python, subdue the Green Lotus Earth Core Fire, refine and devour it, and advance to the 4-star Dou Master. At this time, it was about February three years ago. 4. Participate in the Alchemist Competition, win the championship, and be promoted to the Great Fighting Master. 18 years old: One-star fighting master. 1. After three years of agreement, Nalan Yanran was defeated, the Yunlan Sect fought, and he went home with the queen. 2. Go to Yunlan Sect again, kill Yunling, advance to three-star fighting master, and start the great escape (it took nearly 3 months from Jiaji Empire to Canaan Academy). 18 years and 4 months: Five-star fighting master. 1. Enter Canaan Academy (Xun'er Ruolin's instructor Xiao Yu said in the conversation that she has been on leave for almost 2 years, and the above calculation time is more than 1 year and 10 months, which is not much different), participate in the selection competition, and be promoted to a six-star great fighter; 2. Enter the inner courtyard, establish Panmen, enter the Tianfenqi Refining Tower to practice in seclusion for 20 days, and be promoted to an eight-star great fighter. Note: It is said here that Xiao Yan and others entered the inner academy for 2 months (10 days to participate in the selection and Hujia Wu Hao and others to recuperate + 15 days of fire energy hunting competition and rest + 5 days of retreat to advance to 7 stars + more than 20 days to advance to 8 stars in retreat ≈ 2 months), so it should be 2 months after Xiao Yan entered the academy. 18 and a half years old: Eight-star fighting master. (Here Lin Yan tells Xiao Yan about the strong ranking competition half a year later) 1. Panmen refined medicine, found medicinal materials, met Ziyan, refined medicine, etc. For nearly 2 months; 2. Practicing Sanqian Leidong for more than 2 months; 3. Obtained the Earth Heart Milk and practiced it, and advanced to the level of fighting spirit, which took 15 days. ; 4. Return to the inner court, see Xiao Li (it is said here that it is more than one month before the strong ranking competition, and it is half a year until the next inner court selection. If the selection is carried out normally once a year, it means that it has been half a year since Xiao Yan was selected last time. According to my calculation above, it will take 7 months, and the difference is not big), and he will be promoted to the three-star Dou Ling in seclusion. 5. Strong Ranking Competition, recover from injuries and advance to the Five Star Dou Ling. 19 years old: Five-star fighting spirit. Xun'er left, and Xiao Yan was dragged underground by Fallen Heart Yan. 21 years old: Promoted to the peak of Dou Wang and emerged from the underground. 1. Zhan Han Feng, made a pact with the queen, named Cai Lin, and practiced the Emperor Seal Art for nearly 2 months; 2. The Xiao family made medicine, found medicinal materials, and made medicine to help Yao Lao wake up for nearly 3 months (when helping Yao Lao wake up, the Queen said to Xiao Yan: Already It has been 2 months); Note: After Yao Lao woke up, he discussed with Xiao Yan that it had been three years since he left the Jiama Empire. According to the above, it was 3 years and May. Since more than 3 months were spent on the road from the Jiama Empire to the Black Corner Territory, the time was almost the same. 3. Stay in the inner courtyard for half a month, go into the mountains to practice the Emperor's Seal Art for half a month, and practice the Destruction Fire Lotus of three different fires for 1 month, 2 months in total; 4. Leave the inner courtyard and return to the Jiajia Empire, which takes more than 2 months on the road (the book mentions three years of departure many times, but it is actually almost four years) Note: It took nearly nine months from coming out of the underground to arriving at the Jiajia Empire. Many people have not carefully calculated this time period. November of the 21st year: The Yunlan Sect battled, Yunshan was killed, Yao Lao was arrested, the Yunlan Sect was disbanded, and Yun Yun left after recuperating for one month. 22 years old: Establish the Flame Alliance. 1. Here Xiao Yan and Cai Lin chatted and said that the one-year agreement is about to expire (the above 11 months, almost) 2. Here it is said that Xiao Li's life span is less than 2 months, which is nearly three years since Xiao Yan was dragged underground (proven by the one-year agreement between the Queen and Xiao Yan), and Xiao Li took the drug half a year after Xiao Yan entered the underground Using Devouring Pill, Devouring Life Pill has a three-year lifespan, and there is an error of nearly 3 months here; 3. Xiao Gu met the Little Medical Fairy, Xiao Yan thought: Nearly six or seven years have passed, and I don't know how the Little Medical Fairy is doing (it has been almost six years since Xiao Yan separated from the Little Medical Fairy when he was 17 and a half years old, almost six years ago); 4. One month of alchemy. January 23: Promoted to Douhuang. 1. Go out of Seki to assassinate Mulan Gu and others for 1 month; 2. Yanmeng stays for almost 1 month, and then goes to the Izumo Empire with Sairen Shiken to fight against the Ten Thousand Scorpions Sect. 23 years old, March: The 2-star Dou Huang peaked, leaving the Izumo Empire and heading to the Black Corner Region (5 months on the road) 23 years old, August: 4-star Dou Emperor, arrived at the Black Corner Region again. Note: It is said here that it has been 2 years since I left the inner courtyard (I left in July when I was 21 years old, almost exactly 2 years). 1. Snatch the body of Bodhi, fight against the earth demon old ghost, and advance to the 5-star Dou Emperor (nearly one month); 2. Practice underground in the Tianfen Qi Refining Tower, meet the Lord of Sky Fire, obtain the five-round fire-leaving method, and advance to the 6-star Dou Emperor (2 month time); 3. Seal the little doctor Xian Enan Poison Body (23 years old and November), here it is said that there are still 2 years until the elixir meeting; 4. Refining the Heavenly Demon Puppet, refining the Heavenly Soul Fusion Blood Pill, and advancing to the 7-star Douhuang (February time). January 24: 7-star Dou Huang, heading to Zhongzhou. 1. Black Corner Region → Half a month in Tianya City + 20 days in the space wormhole + 10 days on the road to the Han family + 10 days in swallowing Douhuang Dan to advance ≈ 2 months Note: In Tianbei City, Han Lin (this person looks to be in his mid-twenties) calls Han Xue sister, and Han Xue and Xiao Yan are about the same age; The book here says that after Xiao Yan came out of the Qi Refining Tower after three years, Han Yue had left, which was another mistake. 2. One month of cultivating the Three Thousand Thunder Phantom Body in the mountains; 3. Three months of promotion to the Douzong rank in Tianshan Blood Tan; September at the age of 24: One Star Douzong. Note: Xiaofeng Leidongge said that he had been separated from the Little Medical Fairy and others for half a year, which was completely correct. He also said that it was only one year before the Dan Meeting. At this time, it was about September since Xinlan said last time that two years had passed (2+2+1+3=8, plus some small time periods on the road). There is a slight error. More than 1 month to go to the Central Territory + 1 month to make alchemy in Burning Flame Valley + 1 month to go to find the Little Fairy Doctor ≈ 4 months In Luoshen Stream + Ye Family to control the evil poisonous body ≈ 2 months. April 25: 4 Star Dou Sect. Start practicing alchemy, it is said here that it will be 7 months after the alchemy meeting. 25 years old in November: Participated in the Dan Club, won the championship, and entered the Star Territory (stayed in the Star Territory for 8 months). 26 years and 7 months old: Jiuxing Douzong. 1. Prepare for 1 month and go to the Soul Palace to rescue Yao Lao (here it is said that Yao Lao was arrested for five or six years, from November 21 to now, August 26 - November 21 = 4 years and 9 months, there is a slight error), and he was seriously injured. 2. After one month on the road, we arrived at Xingyun Pavilion for retreat. (During the half-year retreat here, Cai Lin said that Xiao Yan had been away for five or six years. He left in February when he was 23 years old. 26 And a half years + January + January + half a year - February of 23 years = 4 years and January. It is almost five years at most. There is an error; it is also said here that Xiao Xiao is about 2 years old). Note: In the above two periods of five and six years, Yao Lao was arrested in April, one year after Xiao Yan left the Jiaji Empire. This is inconsistent with the eight months between these two sentences. Therefore, the book is wrong and will not be considered. 27 years old and September: One Star Dou Zun. (Go to the Dou Sheng ruins to find medicine + refine the body = more than 2 months) Eat the Dou Sheng bone marrow and advance. 27 years old and November: Two Star Dou Zun. Go to Huazong for half a month Huazong retreats to refine Bone Spirit Cold Fire for more than 1 month 28 years old in January: Four-star Dou Zun. Go to Gulong Island to refine energy to save Ziyan for more than 1 month Void Thunder Pond for nearly 1 month April 28: Five Star Dou Zun. It is said here that it is one month since the coming of age ceremony of the ancient people and one year since the space fair. The coming-of-age ceremony of the ancient people takes three years inside the tomb and half a year outside. 28 years old and November (bone age plus 2.5 Years): Eight-star Dou Zun is at his peak. Leave the Sky Tomb and gather people to return to the Jiaji Empire (it is said here that Xiao Xiao is four or five years old, which is about the same). April 29: Nine Star Dou Zun. Participated in the Space Fair (it is said here that it was 3 years since the birth of Demon Fire), and then went to the Manghuang Ancient Territory, and was promoted to the Nine-Star Dou Zun in the Blood Pool, spending 2 months in the Manghuang Ancient Territory. Twenty-nine and a half years old: The peak of the nine-turn Dou Zun, and obtained the Three Treasures of Bodhi in the ancient wilderness. (Enlightenment under the bodhi tree, reincarnation for hundreds of lives, to a certain extent can be regarded as a dream, which increases the character of the mind) 31 and a half years old: One star fights for the saint. After returning from the ancient wilderness of Manghuang, he went into seclusion for 2 years and was promoted to Dou Sage. The Tianfu Alliance was established in January, which was said to be 9 months before the demon fire came into the world. 32 years old and February: Two Star Fighting Saint. Obtained the unique skills and blood essence of the Underworld Demon Saint from the Netherworld Python Clan in Jiuyou Land Cailin retreated in Jiuyou Underworld. April 32: Two Stars Fighting Saints, the soul reaches the Great Perfection of Heaven. The Pure Lotus demon fire comes to the world and enters the demon fire space to conquer the demon fire. April 34: Early stage of Five-Star Fighting Saint. Tianfu Alliance PK Soul Palace After March, Cai Lin came out and refined the Northern King + Void Thunder Pool training = February September at the age of 34: Late stage of Five Star Dou Sheng. Participate in the Pharmacopoeia after 2 months Refining medicine + recuperating from the ancient tribe + cultivating the soul in the sky tomb ≈ 2 months January at the age of 35: The middle stage of the Six-Star Dou Sheng, the soul of the Emperor Realm. The coalition forces are fighting against the Soul Clan. It is said here that they have been in Zhongzhou for more than ten years (from February 24, almost 11 years). February 36: Seven Star Fighting Saint. The coalition forces PKed with the Soul Clan for the second time, and the Imperial Grade Young Pill was taken away. April 36: Xiao Yan retreats in the Heavenly Tomb to accept the inheritance of the ancient emperor (half a year outside, 3 years in the Heavenly Tomb). Another 2.5 Years will be added to the bone age. 37 years old: Dou Di. (External age is 36 years and 10 months, bone age is 41 years and 10 months) The Yan Emperor PKs the Soul Emperor, spontaneously ignites the Dou Emperor's body, and seals the Soul Emperor.

The writing is too dry, the characters are basically undepicted, the dialogue is very mechanical, like a robot, and there is no psychological description at all. The process of training and fighting is not satisfying. You will reach a realm in a while, and you will be promoted at every turn, without any twists and turns. . . Not to mention the emotional line, the protagonist's friendship with everyone is as indifferent as water. Is this writing a novel or a running account? . . It's weird that fan fiction can be written like this. . .

Well, if death is a good thing, Xiao Yan should be written to death. Otherwise, he will always be entangled in the original work, so he should write a dieng. In addition, with the wind attribute, wind-eroded bones can be used to refine bones. Wind is air, and it can also cool down, control pressure, adjust magic points, and generate plasma. There are also black winds, storms, shock waves, and the whole sound of wind can also be used to create illusions. With just a few attributes, you can gather a bunch of abilities. Of course it's good to write about swords, it's simple and effortless 👏

From now on, I will try to do two chapters a day, around 5pm and 11pm.

Generally speaking, the writing is average, even inferior to other books. It can be seen that the author still tried his best to write something, so he chose a unique perspective of a man transforming into a woman and wearing Nalan Yanran to write it. But - the language is straightforward, the fighting is featureless, the plot... There is almost no plot, just like the plot of Fighting to Break the Sky, except that the visual changes from Xiao Yan to Nalan Yanran, I even suspect that the author was looking at the chapter names of Fighting to Break the Sky when he wrote the book. In the words of a Chinese teacher, it's too mechanical. Originally, as a fan novel, you just want to read something different, but maybe you have a sudden inspiration and an idea when you are writing the outline, but when you write it, you are limited by the writing style and have no idea how to start. In the final analysis, you still lack experience. No surprise, this should be the author's first book! A very thoughtful author. What he wants to write is at least novel from the perspective of writing, which makes me eager to read on. I look forward to continuing to work hard.

There is another Wenqie who traveled through Nalan Yanran, and you are the only one left. You must not cut it.

Nalan Yanran: I'm not doing this to prove how majestic I am, nor do I want others to see how powerful I am. I just want to prove one thing to the world, that I will never look down upon things that I disdain! No matter who you are and how successful you will be in the future, I will not regret the choice I made today.

I wrote it too quickly. When we broke off the engagement, the main character was a fighting master. Xiao Yan was in the third level of fighting spirit. Three years later, we made an appointment with the main character to be a great fighting master. Xiao Yan is also a great fighting master. Can the author use his brain and forget about the strange fire?

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author's character Nalan Yanran has no basic etiquette and no respect for her elders. She feels too stiff.

You can bring Xiao Yan, Xiao Zhan, Xiao Ning and others into the harem!