Wargame: Sandbox Warfare

I feel that the author's barracks setting is boring. You can choose human first because your first hero is human. I am the second option. You can choose other options. Why not choose something more economical, such as the cemetery. The graveyard sounds like the undead. The most important and most economical thing is that it does not require morale, does not consume food, and can even be used 24 hours a day. Work, I just can't figure out why both of them choose to be human, and you don't have the option, you can only choose the human category. There are so many options, and there are so many options. The protagonist does not consider the early material, and both of them choose to be human. I dare to say that if everyone here is given an option of a human barracks and an undead barracks, which one will you choose?

The front is good, but when I meet other people recently, I always feel awkward when dealing with it. A team is about a group of people who are quite similar. You can be a bit more powerful in the lead, but if you are too powerful, you will become a leader, so there are very few protagonists in this kind of cheating flow, because it is difficult to write. Hiding cheats, but hiding them is awkward, which leads to the heroine and so on. It depends on what the author writes later. In fact, if you can't write a team well, it doesn't matter if you open it up a bit. There is no need to add teammates just to make it more reasonable. If the protagonist can fight alone, it is better to bring fewer people. Come on, author.

This type of novel has a common problem, that is, it is too watery and has too many character data.

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This book is steadily updated and has everything. It will be updated as soon as it is released, and there will be more to come.

Come on Xiaoba, I'm waiting for you in women's clothing 😃

Damn it, are you addicted to cross-dressing? Write well.

It was fine before, but I started to get angry when I read Chapter 4. How much food others put on the shelf in exchange for materials and tools is their own business. If the author doesn't explain, he just assumes that they are in urgent need of food but have no shortage of materials and tools. But the subsequent process of bargaining and trading by the protagonist is like a person with 20,000 yuan in his pocket buying groceries with someone with one or two thousand or even a few hundred in pocket. In the end, he has to negotiate for the already cheap groceries. It would be okay if the protagonist has been living in this world for a while and has been hungry for a long time. At the critical moment, he also complained about other people's illegal businessmen... If you have to write about this kind of unequal transaction, you might as well describe the protagonist's psychology in detail. For example, the protagonist can only get two hundred fruits a month now. He eats ten fruits a day and is still not full. There are still ten days to go hungry. Even if you write these dozens of words at the front, readers may be able to temporarily ignore the fact that the protagonist already has more than two thousand fruits and a pile of rabbit and tiger meat, and feel that the protagonist is not unconscionable but has to do this kind of deal. But even so, he is still a player with more than 2,000 fruits and rabbit and tiger meat in his hand, and the author also added a cheat finger, and also showed it to the readers. There may be no problem with these alone, but displaying them together will lower the protagonist's evaluation.

The setting of the small square map is quite interesting, but I feel like the protagonist chose a scientific research career. We were fighting with cold weapons in the front, and the scientific research profession suddenly appeared😱, which was a bit awkward. Although the world background is more grand, it is more difficult to write about the reasonable integration of different systems😊.

The cheaters are not as good as the Ordinary People series, not just one or two, but thousands, tens of thousands, hundreds of thousands. I really don't know what shit the author has in his head. It feels like the cheater is not the protagonist, but the entire world except the protagonist. This is even more disgusting than forcibly suppressing the protagonist. Those who don't know still think that there is only an ordinary person in this world, the protagonist, and the rest are extraordinary beings or even gods. Why should you not underestimate the world? How can your potential be stronger than that of a cheater? What a big group? If this world is so awesome, why are we still wandering around the earth? Why is the entire universe not unified?