I Raise a Daughter in a Parallel World

After reading the first 3 chapters, I felt like I couldn't do it anymore. The origin of the daughter was actually born from a woman's selfishness and wishful thinking and the male protagonist's indulgence. She knew that her time was running out, but she gave birth to a new life in her name to see the world for herself. The child has an 80% chance of death. Many couples break up within a few months of getting married, and the male protagonist's reaction is also very confusing. Without any emotional foreshadowing, he inexplicably changes from being a lover for a few nights to becoming a husband who has lost his beloved. The deliberate attempt to strengthen the bond between the male protagonist, an alien soul, and his daughter makes people feel awkward.

I don't want to say much about the plot, just a little about the timeline. The first chapter takes place in the hottest time of summer in the south, probably in July and August. More than three months have passed since Youyou's Hundred Days, and the Dragon Boat Festival hasn't even arrived yet! ! When posting the second book, I asked Yu Qi whether Gucheng posted it on the Dragon Boat Festival or the Mid-Autumn Festival, which indicated that it was probably around May but not June. Later, he said that a book and a copybook were released just after the middle of this year, indicating that it should be in June when Youyou is full of 100 days. Inferring that Youyou was born, it should be around March. I am afraid you live at the equator, and summer starts in March. There is also another place where Youyou caught a taxi because he had a fever. Then the day after Youyou returned home from the hospital, he and Shang Yan went to find the driver. It turned out that the conversation was about what happened last night. What was even weirder was that what happened last night was a violation the next day. All experienced drivers know that they will not deal with the violation until the third day! Also, Sun Ya's daughter was one year old when she first appeared, and she became two and a half years old after working at Gu Cheng's house for a week. The author was too casual. There are still many contradictions in it, so I won't explain them one by one. The timeline is very important in a novel. I don't know how to read it later?

One family member said that this book could be renamed A Record of Happy Widowers Raising Children

The foreshadowing is a bit long, and it's long and windy. The child hasn't been brought home yet, so I don't know when the topic will be. After looking at the table of contents, I don't have the courage to read on. Goodbye 🤔

Good book, but the pace is too slow. It just reminds me of the time when my daughter was just born.

I've read the first twenty chapters, which are all about the daily life of a nanny.

After reading the first chapter, some people criticized the author for not having a driver's license and lack of common sense, saying that running on the highway is not allowed. , What I saw was obviously on the main road in the city, so where did you see the highway? ? ?

How to say it! Overall good, but feels a little watery!

There are too few updates. There are only two chapters in one day, right? The author is a stay-at-home mom? It's not like no one is watching.

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this! !

The writing is quite good, don't be too low-key, come on!

The lack of common sense is too serious. The author is not a high school student who wrote a book after watching a few daddy novels and TV series, right? Chapter 1: My car broke down on the highway. Instead of calling the police or calling for rescue, I waved to stop the car? ! Is this treating the expressway as the road in front of your home? Then I ran directly on the highway. I don't think anyone in their right mind would do this kind of social revenge behavior of walking in the living room. It's understandable that the author has never passed the driver's license test, but at least Baidu the head office? Chapter 2: A large hospital with more than 30 floors only has one elevator? Residential buildings don't have doors locked like this. Although it is understandable that the one-night-stand partner gives birth to a daughter for the protagonist, and then bleeds to death. But the doctor said, "We used the maximum dose of anesthetic. She watched her daughter go. She should be very happy." ? ! Author, do you have any misunderstandings about anesthetics? A large dose of anesthetic will only cause coma or even death. How can you treat your daughter? Besides, wasn't the cause of death massive hemorrhage? Massive bleeding can cause a person to fall into coma, so why do you need anesthesia? Although the novel is fictional, common sense is still essential. Keep up the good work, author.

It's not bad. Starting from the current environment, this book is considered acceptable. The general public, like Lord of Mysteries, are not interested in watching it, so now I only watch the niche ones. And it's also an option to just pass the time.

The author should ignore the trolls, they don't know that writing trash books also requires talent, especially courage. . .

A woman with a terminal illness went to borrow sperm to give birth to a child. After giving birth, no matter what the future of the child would be, she would take care of it. In real life, everyone calls for beating this kind of person, but in the author's book, he actually becomes a hero that everyone admires and just abandons him.

Let me first confirm a setting: you were a waste before time travel, and you will most likely still be a waste after time travel. The saying that character determines destiny is true in many cases. So, let me ask you how mentally weak a guy who spends his days in a panic and getting drunk in a bar after traveling back in time must be. Such a character design is a complete failure. After reading the first three pictures, I couldn't help but complain. If the rest of the writing is good, please forgive me for my tongue-in-cheek.

It's not fun for a female author to write a female channel and post it on a male channel. She doesn't have common sense in daily life. She starts by writing about the toxic points that male channels think. You'll know what's going on by reading the book reviews. The author is either a female high school student or a housewife who has watched too many Korean dramas. The toxic points she writes can move her or make her climax. Sanjiang is becoming more and more rubbish.

It's very poisonous. Chapter 4 pushes an innocent nurse into the arms of a playboy. It's called wanting to win over a friend. If your friend doesn't win over, aren't you hurting a girl? It's just poisonous to me

I couldn't stand it after watching the beginning. After a few nights of stand with a girl in a bar, we stopped contacting her. When I contacted her, she told me that she was going to have a baby. The protagonist rushed to the hospital as anxious as his parents who were about to die. Before he even saw her, he started to imagine how a family of three would live in the future. Hey, even if you are not afraid of taking over, we are. The author knows that this woman is not looking for a takeover, but we have no impression of her at all, we just know that she is very sao.

This book is okay. What kind of bicycle is needed in the current starting point, but why do so many people in Mao speak evil? Is it because I'm married?

We often criticize modern urban dramas as suspension films because its details are unreasonable and cannot allow people to immerse themselves in them. The plot appears to be exaggerated in the suspended details. So why do critics of fantasy dramas focus on the quality of its special effects, instead of focusing on the details of life like urban dramas? Because the selling points are different. When people watch fantasy dramas, they see grand scenes and magnificent worlds, so special effects are very important. When watching urban dramas, they see bits and pieces that are close to our lives, so it is important to create believable details. The same goes for online articles. You can write a story about a nanny if you want to make it warm, but authentic and credible details are particularly important. Otherwise, the warmth will be as empty as a bubble. Don't blame netizens for criticizing. There are so many holes in the details in the first few chapters. This is not a problem if you want to write a fantasy article. If you write about a nanny, you are so "suspended" in the front, how can you make us believe the story behind it?

I finished reading it in one afternoon. Please update more.

Such a novel can be strongly recommended in new books, what a big red envelope it is!

The writing is very boring. Raising a daughter is the main plot of this book, but the text is the focus and the fun part. Who cares about you raising a daughter? The main reason is that you copy books and show off.

How much do you know about the woman you had a one-night stand with a year ago? Just say "girl like an elf" and send a text message a year later, and you will decide that the child is yours? The protagonist's friends take it for granted, no doubt. The plot designed by the author lacks too many details and deviates too far from the real society. I am not inferring any malicious intent on others. I just think that the protagonist is too naive, has no guard against others, and lacks thinking in doing things. MLM organizations like this kind of people very much.

He killed his wife as soon as he came here. Are these ruthless people starting from now?😒

Why is it the daughter who is paralyzed? Could it be that there was no son at the beginning?

After reading Chapter 15, the plot is stupid and the writing is stupid. I feel like the world revolves around the protagonist. He also has rich second-generation friends and a rich second-generation sister who is obsessed with the male protagonist. It's really disgusting.

I read a few chapters and flipped through the table of contents. I had a little hope that the author would write a few chapters about babies and jump to writing about daily life when they were four or five, seven or eight, or even 12 or 3 years old. The result was not what I expected. Originally, children were too young to interact with each other, but they are the cutest when they are four, five, seven or eight. Isn't it difficult to write about children at this stage? And I am willing to read it, even in elementary school, middle school and high school. It is easy to write about the rebellious period and adolescence. If you want to write about this type of topic, you need to interact more with the children, so that we can continue to read. It is ridiculous to keep writing about the infant stage. Just write a little bit and keep writing.

At the beginning, you might as well say that the woman committed suicide, and then rescued her and found a child. In the end, the woman was not saved, but the child survived, because this is what God's miracle means. So the male protagonist looked at the crying child and decided to take up the responsibility of a father.