I Teach Exorcism in Tokyo

Mainly, I didn't see the growth of the protagonist. The front character at the beginning is the strongest. But it's already the front, the line demon is the protagonist's golden finger and also the limiter. It doesn't look that much fun. Then the protagonist makes a swastika interpretation, and the line demon strikes. . . . This upper limit looks really uncomfortable.

As a reader who started following Chainsaw Man when it was about thirty chapters old, it is rare to see a novel about Chainsaw Man. So, there are some things I can't help but say. First of all, from a reader's perspective, what I think is a good thing about this book is: The Devil's Lines has a good idea, and the shaping of Miss Machima is also in line with the original work. At the same time, the line battles and daily processing are also interesting. It can be seen that the author is very attentive and hopes to get better and better. Let me talk about some personal suggestions: 1. The image of the heroine is too light. Although the author uses a lot of pen and ink to write about her, is she, the silly and sweet devil, really a man? In my personal opinion, her image may not be likable. Maybe it can be darkened, of course, just my humble opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, sorry. Of course, if the author mainly writes about daily life in the later period, that's okay. After all, this is a semi-invincible novel. At the same time, as an invincible novel, the most taboo thing is "aesthetic fatigue". When you encounter an enemy, bang bang bang, call it a day, [it is easy for readers to see the direction of the plot, which will reduce the reader's interest] Maybe it is because you have watched too many movies like Chainsaw Man and Star Princess. It would be good to let it go and occasionally give the protagonist some pain of failure or something? ! I hope the author can pay more attention to it, not to make people tired of aesthetic appreciation, and to make the plot more mysterious. This is a reader's opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. After all, if it wasn't for love, who would write so much. Finally, I would like to leave you with a message: Authors who don't want their works to be "conferred upon as gods" are not good authors, and readers who don't want their favorite authors' works to be "conferred upon as gods" are not good readers. I wish the author a great success, the more he writes, the better he will be. ps: I have been a netizen for seven years and a fan of Japanese sadomasochism for three years. I recommend [Kito] and [Atsushi Nakayama]. Not many people know about them, but Kito's works are really thought-provoking and the latter's works are really interesting.

Cute bad girl🤤

Miss Makima

When I saw Mr. Bashaku, I came in with a bang!

Vine tree! My mental patient! ! !

Do I still want to click on it? I always feel like I'm already a eunuch.

The first few chapters, whether it is combat or background explanation, are very good, and I want to read them. But when I came out of the hospital, I immediately felt frivolous. The smell is mixed and uncomfortable.

Why does a new author have so many recommendation votes?

Can the protagonist only borrow power? If the protagonist never improves, it always feels weird and unstable.

It's Miss Makima! Yeah! I gradually understand everything!

Will there be a call? Where's Lesse? What about Dali? Where is autumn? Where is Xiaohong? What about Christmas? Do they all have it? (Wishful thinking)

Is the author really Ben San's magician?

Himeko looks a bit like Himeno-senpai Bad women have come out, so will my Lesse be far behind? 🤤 Okay! 🤪HalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloweenHalloween

Looking at the young me, I almost felt sick 😭, now I found a good book

The words inside feel like mentally retarded and are not the words of a normal adult.

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