Green Ice Shooter

I would like to use your precious land to advertise: "This striker is from China", please collect it!

Is it this person?

I guess this book is going to be a hit. The author has never understood what you want to do when you create a character. It's a bit like a young literary director. I am a tragedy and a human being. He makes movies that no one would like to watch except him. He also said that this generation of audiences is not good. Why is the protagonist kneeling down and licking the midfielder who can't deal with you? What do you think? Readers feel like they've been fed shit, so they say goodbye. You'd better start another book.

Is the author using stimulants to make people sick? There was no foreshadowing at all, and I couldn't figure out where the stimulants came from, so I suddenly got a stimulant.

"Lv Yin Zhi Ha Pi Shooter was poisoned by his reborn ex-girlfriend and immediately forgave her and started a new life" 😄

If you want to read this book, please skip the two poisonous points at the beginning. 1: Ex-girlfriend Bai Lianhua, her boyfriend asked him to give mineral water containing stimulants to the male pig's trotters, and the male pig's trotters drank it. Then the male pig's trotters relied on the system to survive the inspection before pitifully coming out and saying that there seemed to be something wrong with the water. Of course the male pig's trotters generously forgave her. 2: Just after entering a new club, there was a guy named Mike who was inexplicably isolating the male pig foot. So forget it, and he also led a group of people to isolate. Then the male pig's feet counterattacked. Do you think this is the end? No, Mike still has a sister. One month after killing Mike, her sister Balabala said that they had no father in the family and asked the male pig's feet to forgive his brother. Of course the male pig's feet forgave him and took him to fly. 🙂 He was very poisonous, so Hua Tuo died in the next ten years.

chloe

There is no point in writing about football in a country that is paralyzed by football paralysis

After reading more than 300 chapters, I decided to give up. To be honest, when I read football-type books, I either have trouble reading them or am extremely talented, otherwise I can't read them at all. The author gradually downplayed the cheats in the later stage, which means that the protagonist loses the sense of fun without the golden finger. The protagonist is not originally gifted. Even if he downplays cheating and has reached the level of a core player for a Bundesliga championship team, he still has no hope. If your talent is not good enough and diluted, how can you compete with the super players of the top teams? If you want to read a realistic football article, forget it. The national football team in reality is disappointing enough. If you can't get some pleasure from the book, why should I read it?

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 36. Originally, I saw that Lin Xiaojia thought that the female protagonist was decided, so that was fine. When the male protagonist went to Germany, there would be no other female characters to occupy the plot, which was fine. But when I saw another teammate sister coming later, I was really speechless. I had to help this brother. In Chapter 36, it felt like only half of it was playing football. I came to watch the protagonist play football and sprint for upgrades, not to watch the protagonist's parents have a short love story and help each other to save the fallen teenager. If you want to do this, you might as well change it to a system that saves the disappearing geniuses in football. The female character's ex-girlfriend has a current boyfriend who harms the hero, and the sister of a teammate has a brother who hates the hero. You might as well write a fan girl to make it easier to accept. For those who have watched it later, please answer me. What proportion of the plot is football?

The more you read, the more distorted it becomes. The same goes for a football novel author named Tiantian from the starting point. He introduces many self-written and self-directed characters into the drama, and they are all Chinese. If the Chinese can take the development and investment of football players to a world-class level, wouldn't the ghosts of the national football team become famous long ago? Now you are training in the Bundesliga and it doesn't matter if you are surrounded by such agents. If you don't introduce a foreign agent team, you will never be able to win the Ballon d'Or. First of all, your team has no connections, no resources, and no support. Do you think you can win the Ballon d'Or and Golden Boy just by playing well? In the year of Messi's last golden goal, apart from scoring more goals, he had no honors! This is the energy behind it! ! ! I came here to read the novel, and I came here to feel obscene, but I just read the novel because I don't have the ability to do this. I can't even see a few female celebrities and female sex partners around the protagonist. They are all self-made NPCs. Why am I reading a stupid novel? ? ? Waste of time

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt lonely. Every pig's trotter you write says he is a genius, but what you write is not good in this way and not great in that way. He relies on drugs in every game, something like novice welfare And Pig's Feet doesn't have any special skills. I think you wrote that every time he scores a goal, he relies on that calibration. He always says that he is training, but when he writes it, it doesn't feel like he has practiced anything There are dozens of chapters and so many games written, but there is no one that feels burning when I read it, it is just as dull as a running account. Pig's feet also have no special characteristics or characteristics, and even if the system is written, it will not make people feel that they are powerful. There are some skill fragments written in the front. It has been so long that I have not given one or two skills to the pig's feet that are passable and interesting to look at as a facade I see that the teammate sister is the heroine on the page. She has known her for so many chapters and I have known each other for a long time. There is no description of the possible development of the two of them. She is just a passerby. Even if she is written as the heroine in the future, it will be very inconsistent There was also the big drug addict in front of me, who almost died of poisoning at that time, that is, he was framed for doping... The motive of the player who did this was very far-fetched, and then he even blamed it on his girlfriend in his previous life. Then there was the pig's feet that needed coins to buy the anti-doping agent. Those three tasks were really embarrassing and abrupt. When I saw what the three tasks were, I skipped them and didn't dare to look at them. I was so embarrassed that I used my feet to get out of the courtyard.

The stimulant plot is amazing, it can be said to directly feed poison to the readers, and it well portrays the protagonist who is constantly licking the dog. I just mentioned that the protagonist felt sorry for the four hundred yuan he spent, and then the woman had no money to go back, so the protagonist gave her two hundred yuan. Moreover, the woman knew that something was wrong, but still chose to mess with the protagonist. Then the woman's apology was disgusting, and judging from the protagonist's performance, he probably forgave her, and was simply speechless. Does the protagonist not know how much impact this will have on him if it succeeds? The author might as well pair the protagonist with this woman. The subsequent plot is that this woman has a third party, and the protagonist still makes money to support this woman. The protagonist saw the woman going to the hotel with others, and the protagonist just chose to help them pay the room fee. When the woman was happy, the protagonist knocked on the door. The woman thought that the protagonist was going to get angry and want a divorce. In the end, the protagonist just bought a bag for the woman and asked her to pay attention to her safety. When the author writes this way, he can immediately reach the realm where the protagonist in Feng Yu Jiuqiu's "Purple Sun" plays the flute to entertain.

This book is really poisonous. It describes how the protagonist trains hard every day, and then drinks drugs as soon as he plays. Although it cannot be detected, isn't it a stimulant? Isn't it just like studying hard every day when you are studying, and then cheating when the exam comes? So what's the point of writing about hard training?

I've read more than 30 chapters, how did I get the recommendation spot? It's really unlucky.

This book should not be classified as a sports article, but an urban article. If you came here to watch football, you will find it very boring. There are dozens of opening scenes, and there are only a few scenes describing the fighting on the court. They are all described in a few strokes, and some Internet articles are described using novice urban routines.

Good novels each have their own merits, while bad novels have their poisonous points. I'm curious, is the author's profession so poisonous? Does it have any magic power?

The first dozen chapters of this article involve domestic football, but today the author saw some extremely foul-smelling regional black phenomena, and I deleted them all I believe that football is a very inclusive sport, and anyone can participate in football in different ways. Regional blackmail is the greatest disrespect for football, so I also hope that when book friends speak, please refrain from such remarks There are many problems in this book, and there are many places worth complaining about. Everyone is welcome to provide opinions or even criticize, but I will delete and ban any remarks that involve regional blackmail The performance of this book is not good, but it is not bad for these NT readers! Thanks!

Nowadays, readers who read football novels are too tolerant of authors. This kind of rubbish novel is really not worth reading.

After reading Chapter 59, I finally understood it. I will not repeat the previous poisonous points. Some readers have said it in the comment area. I roughly understand what the author means. The author wants to explain the protagonist's sudden flash of inspiration on the court with potions in a reasonable way. I think there is no problem with this. But what we readers want to see is a growth story. You are not active on the training ground. You read classics by the window every day. I can't see any characteristics in the protagonist that make him successful. How "Wind Storm" deals with system problems. After reading it, you will feel that Yang Yang deserves to succeed. What hinders his success is not his lack of hard work, but his lack of talent. The system has solved the problem of his potential. The author can refer to it. For example, the system releases tasks such as what rewards the protagonist can get if he trains and shoots 10,000 times. Moreover, the author also wrote that Qi Ce feels like a waste on the court without skills. Without skills, he suddenly cannot play football. He also writes about Schrödinger's Qi Ce... This is not to say that the skill set is not good, but rather that the protagonist should not be written as too wasteful. I hope the author will think carefully about his own problems after reading my comments and make serious improvements. I saw a good comment from a reader in the comment area, so I've attached his screenshot below.

Do you like temporary cards that much? Another football novel with a wasteful protagonist. I recommend you to read "The Number One Fanatic in Football". This is a real football and sports novel. It is both exciting and does not make the protagonist such a loser. A book like yours that always relies on flashes of temporary skills in the game and likes to suppress the protagonist will always be a loser!

That's so long-winded. Am I reading a Wai Wai novel or looking at the back? What about stimulants? Interesting? Since rebirth has been cheated, can't we just go on the battlefield and kill everyone? Does anyone read those messy things? Forcibly feeding poison

I can't stand it without thinking.

I don't want to see the snack card when I see it. Every game comes with a snack gift pack. Is this interesting?

I don't understand what peak experience cards and zero-hour skill points are. They are like stimulants. Isn't it good to train hard? It's really poisonous.

The protagonist doesn't need a brother, he just wants a woman. He was a loser before his rebirth, but instead he blames his ex-girlfriend for being reborn. After his rebirth, he has to find some black spots for his ex-girlfriend to forcefully whitewash the protagonist. In addition, the protagonist does not need to practice, he only needs K medicine to win. If I don't practice more at ordinary times, my training performance is very average. When it comes to competitions, I can't shoot well and my physical fitness can't be solved by taking medicine! YY novel with incorrect views!

Football novels are now all about the cheat system. Without the cheat system, you can't do anything. If you don't know how to cook in the future, you should get a cheat system, otherwise you will starve to death.

It's too bland. The protagonist's strength is also mediocre. I always write about the protagonist's ability. However, it's difficult to brag about the protagonist's performance in a dozen internal youth training games. His performance is average, and his strength is higher than that of his peers. You're going to make me laugh. If your strength is not good, don't keep writing bragging words about your peers. You are arrogant on the inside and soft on the outside, but you have written it well. After reading the book "The First Fanatic in Football", I read these football novels. I really can't stand it. It's too exaggerated.

You, the ice shooter, can he shoot peas? If I can't, I won't watch it.

First time on the list