Cultivation of Immortality Starts from Drawing the Heavens

This novel can be regarded as a good work in the field of immortality. However, the character of the protagonist is still not clear enough. In the early stage, a bottle was released that could be used to exchange spiritual stones for food. I thought. Will be in disaster. Kick in. It shows the protagonist's righteousness and compassion. But it didn't work. But in the chaos, there is also the ambition of Sanchi Qingfeng to defeat the demons in the world. Although there is no contradiction, it lacks a clear description of the protagonist's character and a sense of substitution. One more question. The protagonist keeps his identity hidden. A bit cautious. But in the plot. But it's quite reckless. Whether it's a water monkey, a dragon, or a red coat. The protagonist is really scared. Go straight to the first two. Something to rely on. Except for that sword. Be reliable. Others have the flavor of forcing the protagonist to die. It is recommended that the next lottery be one for escaping and protecting oneself. So. In Mang. It also has the flavor of the protagonist escaping reasonably. Instead of expecting enemies. Was frightened. Or trapped. Come and Escape The above is just a personal reading of the novel. Questions I think The overall novel is good. You can take a look. This month's monthly pass. That's why I contributed this novel. I hope the author will work hard. No eunuchs.

It's still the same routine, I took a pill, practiced for a while, and by the fifth chapter I went out to show off!

A trip to the capital is almost like going through nine or eighty-one hardships. Isn't this world's logistics almost paralyzed?

Why hide your identity? Even if you hide it from the outside world, why hide it from your family too?

It looks good, keep going, draw nine draws every year, until you become an immortal and become an ancestor, you don't want a heroine! ! ! ! Come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Personally, I feel that there is a lack of a main plot. Something always happens wherever the protagonist goes. It feels like the world is too chaotic. Don't let everything come to the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist is just an unlucky guy and something will happen wherever he goes. You can let the protagonist find something to do appropriately. For example, kill some monsters and draw talismans in exchange for cultivation resources such as spirit stones. The protagonist always talks about hiding his identity as a practitioner. However, there are many people besides unrelated passers-by who should know. Occasionally, I also write about my daily life of cultivating immortals and appearing as saints in front of ordinary people. For example, the protagonist is very talented in selling some of his charms for money. The last point is that I rarely meet enemies who are lower than myself. The tiger setting is not low in the late stage of Qi training. I always encounter enemies with higher levels than myself. I just rely on the trump cards obtained through lottery. If you don't feel like there's something awesome, then it's awesome. Not that cool. Personally, if you don't like it, please spray it lightly.

In fact, it doesn't matter what world it is, Zhutianliu, as long as the protagonist is not a funny guy, the writing is very good. What I dislike the most about Zhutianliu is that the protagonist is funny, the supporting characters are brainless, the characters are well drawn, and it doesn't matter what world it is. I can read it even if you write about Calabash Baby. The main thing is the taboo funny character portrayal of the protagonist. I have never seen the protagonist be funny and be able to say it and write it well. In my opinion, the funny characters are all white and brainless writing.

It seems okay so far. I hope the author will work hard and the automatic subscription will be enabled.

Isn't it logical to write a story? In the story, Wang Tong saved his father 30 years ago and lived to be 90 years old. Nowadays, people in their 70s don't dare to be imprisoned. In ancient times, was there a way to survive if someone in their 70s was imprisoned?

There is nothing outstanding in the front, and there is no big poisonous point either.

Come on, author, I look forward to writing a different world of cultivating immortals

I don't even understand what the Demon Slayer Sword is used for. Do you keep putting it in the Dantian?

This novel is good, but I just want to ask if this is a mythical world or a world of cultivators?

The new book contract has been sent and is available for investment

The author is very diligent! Basically every comment has a reply! This is the second best author I have ever seen. That's it, I've read the novel!

233. Although I don't know why. The author's book looks pretty good. But the data is so cold. Well. Monthly tickets are gone. But 7 pictures a day recommended 233

Draw a junior guard Chaos City Lord

It feels like a series of short stories. Really, I didn't see any main plot. I encountered so many things along the way. I'm really speechless. It's too deliberate. Really. It would be easy to say that it was bad luck, but the problem is not that it is that writing so many things seems deliberate, which is abnormal. Anyway, it's not interesting to read. I feel like the writing is mindless and dull.

Invincible? Or don't you want to live with it? Kill decisively and so on

How powerful is the black mist written in it, but even if the five righteous masters can't arrange the formations, then they still have to play with a hammer.

I feel like the lottery system and the settings of the six-way battle are all fine, but can you write them down a little better? The settings are so messed up.

After reading more than sixty chapters, the author's writing style is not bad, but I feel that the plot follows the pig's feet and feels a bit frustrating.

The new book "I Asked the Immortals in Daqian" is launched. All Taoist friends are welcome to take a look.

The Demon-Slaying Sword is said to be too powerful. You must know that this is just a magic weapon in the early stage of Fang Han. The writing is a bit messy, and the prizes drawn are too inconsistent with reality.

Are you a eunuch? I think she looks pretty good. Why are you a eunuch?

Hey, once I looked at the introduction, it was all gone.