Cultivation of Immortality Starts from a Humble Beginning

Nonsense! Can a gangster collect protection money when a government official's mother opens a shop? This is equivalent to a police mother opening a shop and being asked for protection money by a second-rate man!

It's a bit disgusting. His hands and feet are frostbitten. He's hungry and cold. He can kill people. The officials' families have to be charged protection fees. It's really disgusting.

This little girl is a bit poisonous and looks very embarrassing

The protagonist is also brainless. He kills people casually and offends people without fear of losing his life. The villains are completely brainless and come to give away experience one by one. It seems that the protagonist is more annoying and more worthy of death.

Chapter 23: Giant Poison. I read it very well. Suddenly, the author released a poison that directly persuaded me to quit. I bet that this chapter persuaded at least N people to quit. The protagonist in the previous chapter was depressing enough. Suddenly someone killed you with a flying knife and wanted to die with you with a thunder bead. You still licked this face to save others. You killed this man and woman to die?

Aunt Zhang's ending can be regarded as self-inflicted. If you want to blame her, she shouldn't have given the two steamed buns to the protagonist at that time, and she shouldn't have had any contact with the protagonist. Ordinary people who have a relationship with the protagonist would be giving away their lives. To put it harshly, the protagonist is the evil star, who will die if he touches it. Farewell! ! !

The exercises written by the author are really worthless. A little girl Xiao He, whom he has never met, got four exercises for nothing, and the protagonist almost died and cheated to get the exercises! Who is the protagonist? What you write is illogical!

What the hell, you're just grinding and whining and writing a lot of nonsense. It's too dirty to make money like this.

Death due to poisonous hair. The writing is not good and the plot cannot be described clearly, which makes me feel uncomfortable🤮

A third-rate warrior had such a hard time beating two gangsters. So poisonous

I didn't finish it. The pacing was not well controlled. The plot was too forced in many places. The character of the protagonist was not good either. It looked a bit uncomfortable. I felt like I was unhappy everywhere. With this kind of golden finger, even a normal person is amazing. The protagonist can actually give me a feeling that he can't afford to be a failure, which is quite convincing.

I originally wanted to read it, but after reading around the book reviews, I decided not to fall into the trap.

When you write about swords, you just write about swords, and they are divided into inner swords and outer swords. I was a little bit annoyed when I saw the Xiaohe you were still thinking about, but now you are here.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 17. It's so poisonous that I can't even eat the hot pot I just ordered.

I'm not a great god, so I'm not qualified to write about water or poison. I'm optimistic about your next book.

When I read Chapter 23, a guy stabbed you and then pointed a gun at you. I didn't take advantage of him to take the gun over and tie him up while he was unconscious. Chapters 22 and 23 were confusing. The other party was a robber, and the protagonist was a 3-year-old beggar. (He can kill people after traveling through time). Saving people? ? The robber's storage bag and its contents, as well as the elixir garden, were confiscated. Still going to save people? Can't read……

Ah, with this golden finger, I was still waiting for others to come to my door. I was stuck in the front, but in the end I understood the formation, and I was still waiting for others to set the mountain on fire. Are you treating the protagonist as the boss of the game? Is it not possible to dismantle the formation that day and find another place to arrange it? Stay where you are...

When I saw Xiao He, I didn't want to see it anymore. Can all authors please stop creating little girl supporting characters? Isn't it beautiful for the male protagonist to cultivate immortality alone?

I ordered Chapter 190, and I don't want to read the rest anymore. The first part was pretty good, but the second part fell apart. I changed the map and let myself go 😒

I feel like the protagonist is a bit mentally retarded and slipped away.

I guess some people don't know what a hatchet looks like or they mistake a broadsword for a hatchet. The last one is a modern hatchet, and the old hatchet has no hook.

The planning department arranged for a person to go to the beggar pile, and when he was almost starving to death, he came out to assign tasks individually. Is this so crazy?

The plot line of the first level mini-boss Fu Gengmeng is too long... It's not interesting to torture people.

If you leave time and space aside, you won't use it. If you don't hide from danger and risk your life, are you a fool? Or do you treat everyone as a fool? If you keep this kind of deed, you still need to wipe your butt. If it is written logically or not, why don't you wash your ass

Please explain, the protagonist starved to death or froze to death before traveling through time. Has the protagonist never experienced hunger or freezing? The protagonist's soul is resurrected with full health as if it were a game. How can a beggar enter the city? Or maybe the protagonist will be able to meet kind-hearted people after taking possession of that corpse? ?

The front is okay, but the back is unbearable. During the investigation, I hired a maid to rewrite the skills for the enemy. The character of the protagonist is also very strange. Maybe I am too weak to understand it. The book may be a good book, but it's not something I can understand. It slipped away.

It's a brainless idiot's article, I don't understand it.

..... I feel like there is a lot of nonsense and the conversation is too watery.

Well written. Don't be dissuaded by certain comments or get into a bad mood

The author's article is more detailed and the content is clear and thorough. And this plug-in has some instant moisture. Overall OK