I Earn Red Envelopes in Historical Texts

The subject matter is good, but the content is unbearable

The heroine is too pretentious. Even if she was a school student before time travel, didn't she say that she would write articles and make some money in order to be independent? Why is she so pretentious after time travel that she commits suicide all day long? How can a modern girl who can make money independently not come into contact with the reality of society? How can a modern girl be so stupid in an era with such advanced communication networks? How can you be so arrogant when you have come into contact with so many great relatives, relatives and colleagues? Poor hero

The writing is very good, but it is too thin. Please update it!

The character and status of this heroine are like the mistress and canary raised by a rich man!

The heroine is always using words that only appeared decades later. As a reborn person, wouldn't the hero be suspicious?

The subject matter is very good, but the heroine is too pretentious and I can't stand it...

The writing is quite novel, except that the male protagonist cannot accept being married for the second time and having a relationship with his previous partner.

The writing at the beginning was good, but after the heroine broke away from her family, the content became more watery. Most of the writing was about how the heroine was pretentious and artificial in front of the hero!

Typos, random punctuation, artificiality, so tiring to read😔

Is the heroine too pretentious, and so many people are reborn in one novel? ? ?

The heroine can be pretentious and pretentious, and the character design can be set up in any way, but the writing is too watery, has many bugs, and is inconsistent. It should be because the author wrote so much that he forgot what he wrote before. The characters are sometimes darkened and sometimes whitened, and they all become distorted. The red envelope group is obviously a different boss with different interfaces, but what they say is simply horrible. At first glance, they have the same tone of a little girl. The water is flooding. The article is very creative, but it is a pity that it is difficult to write too roundly, so it is written randomly.

It feels like the protagonist is a rag-picker. Pick up trash that others don't want. This male protagonist is not the heroine, the kind whose cousin is married. The key point is that he is a scumbag. In his previous life, a gambler committed suicide. In this life, the cousin was reborn, and then stole the fiancé of the original heroine who was reborn. Our heroine traveled to the past, didn't she get a red envelope? Didn't you grab a few gold rings? Gold bracelet. You can't just give a few to the male protagonist to fake marriage, and then leave on your own, you have to be such a scumbag. The male lead is really a fucking scumbag! Do you want to say that you are beautiful? I do support your pretty face. But, you are such a scumbag and can't do anything. Why do you do that? Why should I want crap that others don't want? It's so infuriating to watch. Doesn't anyone want this heroine? Or something? Why do you have such a golden finger? If he sends it to us, won't he still enjoy it? He doesn't want to be a soldier. If you have a fake marriage, you can move out and give me some money, that's ok. That scumbag is fine.

The female protagonist is pretentious and the male protagonist is greasy and jingoistic. What has the author experienced? How can he regard these as sweet? At best, industrial saccharin is in panic. This article is purely a neurotoxic drug.

The writing style is a bit immature, and the image of the heroine is a bit off, which makes people feel a bit artificial, but the subject matter is still good. The author will work hard and he will write better and better.

The heroine is too pretentious and pretentious.

Maybe as I get older, I can't accept female protagonists and male protagonists! The heroine is a bit pretentious! The male protagonist is too vulgar and chauvinistic!

The more I look at it, the more I feel that the back part is not as good as the front part, and there are too many words in the mouth, just like wording. Come on, author

The heroine becomes more and more pretentious as she writes. It was originally a very good book, but now the whole family is not normal! Disappointed~

It's impossible to describe, there are too many foreshadowings, the lines are too messy, and all the character descriptions are insane. They are normal one second and become sick the next, including the male and female protagonists.

Why does the author like to repeat words? Every time, right away, I look, I look, outside, last time, last time, go out, go out, is there anything wrong with writing like this? It's really awkward to read.

The heroine is so pretentious that she doesn't look like a high school student whose mother doesn't want her father and doesn't love her. I don't understand why I chose a male protagonist who was a suicidal gambler in his previous life, and wrote him as if he is very powerful? A very powerful person can be a gambler and commit suicide? The character design is seriously inconsistent. In the end, I don't know whether it's the author's lack of writing skills or something else. The three characters he wrote seem to be normal in appearance, but they don't feel right if you look closely, including but not limited to the male and female protagonists. Also, although it is a story about a modern student who traveled back in time, it has nothing to do with the image of an independent modern female student. Just like the native women in the 1970s, they expected to get out of their original family by getting married, and then rely on their husbands after marriage.

As a time-traveler, or a time-traveler with an awesome golden finger, not to mention standing on top of the world, it should not be difficult to gain the basic ability to protect yourself, right?

At the beginning, I felt that it was quite OK, but as the relationship between the heroine and the hero gradually became harmonious, and after the first night, the whole storyline began to go in the silly and sweet direction of romance novels. I was really speechless. "Brother" or "little baby", these irritating and annoying terms began to appear on the male and female protagonists. In short, this article is a silly and sweet article wearing a period vest.

It was the first time I saw such a pretentious heroine and I felt sick.

But, but, but, okay, okay, don't, don't, open the door, open the door, it seems that there are repeated words every two paragraphs, the author is infinite,, be calm and calm, home and everything, home and everything are prosperous Can you round up the word count?

Damn it, it turned out to be an article on urban immortal cultivation later on, with so many reborn cultivators

Either the male protagonist liked the female protagonist's original body before, or the personality has collapsed. In the previous life, the female partner was cold-faced when she married the male protagonist. Why is the female protagonist just idle and supporting her to go to school

This Dongfang Lina is so annoying. Why do you write so many stories about time travel and rebirth? I don't want to read it.