As an Angel, I Descended into Tokyo, Japan

Didn't anyone post it for discussion? I feel like I'm alone, asking for help😭😭😭

Let's arrange the segments and symbols first... It makes me feel so awkward...

It's tiring to watch. I don't know which sentence is speaking and which is speaking from the heart. Please mark the punctuation marks.

After reading three chapters, I really can't stand it anymore, it's so confusing! , The dialogue has no punctuation and is a complete mess. Is this still an overhaul? Still a eunuch! Send it again!

After major revision, too many chapters were deleted and they were temporarily blocked.

The protagonist has no cultivation at all, and he is actually called a cultivation chat group... The plot still has something to it, but the writing style is frivolous and loose. . I bet 2 cents on the eunuch before Chapter 150. .

Why do you want to add An Yilun?

I would like to ask why line breaks cannot be saved in Writer Assistant 😭😭😭

The pet girl of Sakurasou is in the same world as the young pig-headed boy who never meets the bunny girl-senpai 😁

Can you add punctuation marks? There's no punctuation, it's really uncomfortable to look at

You haven't signed a contract yet, and there's no way you can reward me. The article is well written. Keep up the good work. I'm optimistic about you.

How many books has this author Ji published? The main character's name jumps around in the back, and the same getting-up sequence has been copied and pasted more than three times.

I basically can't understand what I'm talking about, and the plot is a bit confusing. I hope the author can sort it out. And some of them are basically incomprehensible.

I have no problem with you being horny, please don't distort the original work, okay?

The author needs to work harder, I feel like it's not enough to read and I've written too little.

Passing by raising pigs, waiting for quick fattening

Now Aoba, now Uesugi Nagasuke, can you confirm the name of the protagonist?

This book copied some of the settings of that book, but he wrote it based on his own subjectivity. You should look at the characters in the original work. Sorata entered Sakurasou because he saw kittens that no one was taking care of. He wanted to help the weak, but the dormitory could not keep animals, so he was moved to Sakurasou. People who were overflowing with love became jealous people here.

All novels always describe the protagonist as good-looking and capable, and the beautiful woman takes the initiative to give it to him for free 🙂 It's so boring, this is the psychology of diaosi. Novels are meant to slowly grow in strength, have charisma and plot, so they are interesting. This is how famous novelists write, so they are famous all over the world 😊

Darling, you can persuade me to quit just by looking at the catalog.

Uysy, what is the thing under Chapter 5 in Chapter 3? 🤔🤔🤔

I've been saving for a long time and I'm back! (It's been a long time, but this is the only thing that has changed?)

I was about to say that the author went too far. What the hell happened after Chapter 6? He changed the name. I have also read that novel. Also, in Chapter 12, Himemiya Iori is the younger brother and he is a boy, and Himemiya Saori is the older sister and she is a girl. I couldn't help but comment after reading Chapter 12.