The Male Angel Who Was Hunted Down in the Heroic Company

I think it's okay. It's so magical. I usually don't like reading novels that are a bit tragic and scheming, but I felt it was okay after reading this one. I didn't find it too toxic (maybe I'm used to it, Shen Nong Han Nong)

Hexi, I think it would be interesting to write about her

The world kissed you with pain, but you really responded with a smile

Those fire shadows who cultivate immortality and become super gods are nothing more than a way of ascribing great power to themselves. This kind of version is easy to write, but it is too homogeneous. Isn't this also true for Marvel superheroes? Actually, I would rather see the type of civilization construction. This is probably the inherent civilization gene of the Chinese people. If one day humans leave the earth and open up the universe, it will probably be a civilization like China that takes the long-term path. Civilization can be led and guided by strong men (this type of angel civilization), but it cannot be a strong man who conquers the world. Once a strong man falls, it will be a fatal blow to civilization. For example, Kesha is offline for Angel. It can be seen that the limitation of the theocratic civilization of the super-god universe is that once the god of the civilization is finished, the entire civilization is almost finished. Therefore, gods should belong to civilization, and civilization owns gods. Rather than civilization belonging to God, God owns civilization. So the Super Seminary is a prehistoric school disguised as science fiction. Holy Kesha is like the boss of each immortal cultivating sect. Once she is finished, the entire sect will almost disperse. So after watching the anime, I felt that a 100,000-year-old civilization had nothing to do with the 100,000-year-old civilization.

You've poisoned me to death. Come into the palace quickly.

In the final analysis, the protagonist is not strong enough. If you are weak, you have strong strength. Who dares to treat you like this? Only the strong have the right to speak. The weak can only obey. Justice. Whoever is strong is justice. The rules are made by the strong. The weak can only obey.

When the protagonist becomes a male angel, he is destined to be tied to the identity of a male angel, and is very likely to be an enemy of a female angel. Even if the protagonist does not think that he is a male angel who persecutes female angels, most female angels do not necessarily think so, and a very small number cannot change anything. Even if the treatment is changed, it is difficult to change the impression. At this time, the protagonist can only kill them and gather male angels who do not persecute female angels to form a male angel force to fight against themselves.

To be honest, after rebirth, I chose justice or devil, chose justice, and then drew a lottery. It turned out that the murder gene still existed, and it took 23,000 justice points to eliminate it. I laughed. You wrote an article and insisted on torturing the protagonist to death. Your author does not have masochistic tendencies.

After watching it for a long time, I felt that the main character was a bit painful. If you want to light up the Holy Light, you won't think that you are the Holy Mother. Believe it or not, God's heart is black. To put it bluntly, the birth of the protagonist means that he can either kill someone or become a dog for others.

I feel like the writing is confusing, so I just wrote a few pieces. There is no need to rush to find the heroine, the author, just write according to your own wishes! Write an outline for yourself, follow the outline, don't collapse, just deviate from the main line. A good work should also have the meaning expressed by the readers, but it should be more about the author's own ideas rather than following other people's ideas. Just like the director of Super Seminary, because the audience forced him to follow the audience's wishes, it eventually collapsed and people changed jobs. Now I don't know if there is any plot behind it. Calm down and write an outline. Write slowly. There is no need to rush to find a heroine. In the past two days, the author has been writing about finding a heroine. I feel a little anxious and confused. What can't I write? Super Seminary has a lot of regrets, which is why most people write fan works about it, but it can be said that there is no one that can really write about its meaning. The theme of your book is good, the boundary between light and darkness, Super Seminary also embodies this theme, write slowly, don't rush.

My protagonist is a human being, like Ge Xiaolun, who has just traveled through time and wants to protect everything, but cannot protect anything, and is still being squeezed out. But I will not take the villain route, fight angels, or join demons. Nor will he belittle Xiongbing Company and step on Ge Xiaolun to ascend to the throne. I am just paving the way for his psychological process. If Master Qi guides him, helps him when he is about to take a detour, and pulls him back, he will not fall into darkness and become a scumbag.

The female angels you described are so unreasonable 🤔 In order to promote the heroine Leng, every one of them is like a crazy woman

It feels like the author used too much force. There were too many serious and unreasonable problems. Excessive emotion is a bit exaggerated. Inexplicable hatred. Inexplicable love. Inexplicable protagonist. Inexplicably masochistic. If you don't want to be targeted, just stay far away and farm and develop. It must be involved. Knowing that he has no strength and no right to speak, he still acts. Wouldn't it be better for you to silently develop to the fourth generation divine body or higher in other universes and then come back? And the protagonist's character is too unstable. When exaggerated, the language is frivolous. When you are deeply affectionate, you are moved by the heavens and the earth. Such extreme transformations do not fixate the character. It's uncomfortable to watch. Then the holy bitch will do it to the end. Or kill him ruthlessly to the end. It feels like the protagonist is mentally ill when handled this way.

This book, well, the author's writing is not very good and his conception is not good either.

There are two types of heroines. One is a heroine in a general sense in terms of love and emotional drama; the other is an important and key figure throughout the plot of the book. If you can't write the former well, try the second type.

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Come on, author, I will always support you.

How have you ruined the image of an angel, and the main character looks like a fool?

If the writing is not good, why don't you read it yourself after writing about the author? Sometimes the meaning of logical words is unclear. Why don't you take a look at what you said?

Those who require the female protagonist to be an angel, please carefully consider the logic of the plot setting. Let's not talk about the malice of the female angels themselves towards the male angels. Their sense of belonging to the group and their loyalty to the queen alone are basically impossible to match the male protagonist. Even establishing a friendship or romantic relationship with the male protagonist is basically tantamount to betrayal and severe punishment, let alone any possibility with the male protagonist. Think about the setting issues first before making any comments.