Portable Space Takes Me Across the World

Purchase the elixirs grown in space with you, medicine-changing seeds, genius treasures, etc.

I hope to go to the fantasy world of Xianxia. After all, compared to the fantasy world of Xianxia, ​​the world of martial arts is really not interesting at all. What's more, most of the well-known martial arts worlds are poorly written. The unknown audience is too small, so they are not as good as the world of Xianxia. There are all kinds of magic spells, rare treasures, and rare beasts and gods. Which one is not as good as martial arts?

What are you talking about? Full accounting mode

It's written like an emotionless robot. It's so fast that it's like running water.

The creativity is good, but as everyone said, the story and the development of the protagonist are too fast, and it feels like the supporting characters have little room to develop.

The beginning is okay, but my writing skills need to be improved. Come on!

Group travel is a poisonous point. My writing style is not good. It's really embarrassing to read this.

Damn, I'm impressed by you, the author. You're writing a detailed outline, right? After so many years of reading, this is the first time I've met a new author like you!

It was so fast that I was dumbfounded.

The author's writing is a bit bad. . .

I have read so many novels of the same type. Most of the first worlds where the protagonist goes to cause harm are "Dragon Babu". I feel that "Dragon Babu" is so pitiful 😅

Why does it feel like a novel like a running account?

Rubbish novels, just like writing essays in elementary and junior high schools.

You need to practice this section. It makes your head hurt.

I looked confused. Is the author writing an outline?

Don't be a stallion, just have five or less female protagonists. Farming

Author, this is really a work of practice. How should I put it? The idea is good, but the writing is not up to par.

The creativity is good, but the writing is terrible.