Abyssal Overlord of the Myriad Heavens

Not bad, but pay more attention to the changes and descriptions of the body. The changes in your body are always written in a unclear and awkward way.

To be honest, when the protagonist wears a mecha, it feels like the protagonist has been relying on external objects and is not strong on his own!

The boss is awesome!!!! This utopia. . . Awesome

Writing the Internationale in a novel about demons, is this world too crazy, or is this red ghost everywhere?!!!

Hey, is this a novel with no heroine, a single heroine, or a novel with multiple heroines?

It is estimated that two hundred copies will be completed. . . ?

Come on, boss, you are awesome, long live the boss,

I like your work.