Humans in the Bone King of the Undead

I'm a fucking good guy

Protagonist: Bing Chen and Ainz Supporting characters: Guardians Tips: Bing Chen's presence in the first ten chapters is very low, because during this period he traveled into the tomb as an audience, observing the personalities of the guardians and Ainz. Chapter 10: When he was captured and investigated by Demiurge, he really showed his true strength. If you are impatient, you can start from Chapter 3. If you are impatient, I recommend starting from Chapter 10. Welcome everyone to support me (cry, cry) The skills mentioned in the first chapter are tips for failure. The name of the guild is Ainzur Gown, and Nazarick is the location The setting of the plug-in: In reality, the operator stopped working, and the Bingchen team took advantage of this gap to directly hack into the system (after all, the two sides have been interacting with each other for four years, and they have a background.), And modified the settings of the entire game (just added some skills, races, and other things remain unchanged, after all, there is not enough time.) The setting of the plug-in is outrageous, and the development point is that the protagonist cannot use it in the early and mid-term anyway. And it's not very good to add settings to the plug-in. Besides, this is a time-travel theme, so just add settings. After all, what Ainz did was too outrageous (referring to strategy), and the protagonist may become disillusioned in the later stage (not admired, just afraid). The protagonist does not stand on any side (in fact, he is more human) and only needs checks and balances. (The balance of power between the two parties). (Of course this is not realistic, so I have to do it quietly, no gun shooters). Because Bingchen turned out to be very smart, thinking back on everything Ainz had done before was unreasonable, but when combined, it was extremely outrageous. After thinking about it, he was surprised. World view: Actually, I intentionally turned what Ainz did in reality (the reality he thought) into a dream, a dream that Ainz hoped for. (Because he is accompanied by his companions) This game world is where he has always existed.

{"NickName":"Icy Heart","UserId":353860716} I really liked the first few chapters, but the tenth chapter started to get a bit toxic, so I wanted to give the author some suggestions. Personally, I feel there are a few points that could be improved. First, in fact, the author could have turned the protagonist into a heroic girl warrior. The plug-in is to obtain the skills in Naruto instead of transforming into a ninja in Naruto. Especially the part with Kirabi in the consciousness space is really uncomfortable. In this case, the connotation and style of the book will be downgraded by a notch, and people who come here for the sexual transformation and system texts may not be able to stand it. The direct communication between the consciousness space and the transformed characters also spoils the future of Kirabi, and will also dissuade some people who come here to read Naruto cheats. Second, writing about the space of consciousness can indeed enrich the content of the work if it is written well, but if it is not written so well, it will definitely become a poisonous point. It is recommended to write it as a normal system, or it would be good to write it as the protagonist learns tailed beast control and Aramon heron sword cutting in the consciousness space and the virtual Kirabi of the system. Thirdly, I think the author can write the protagonist race "immortal" as a humanoid race that was born in response to the collective will of the human race to protect the human race. You can refer to the inhibitory power "prime" Alaya in the world of Xingyue, remove its divinity, write it as a specific race, and retain the protection of the human race (this will also make it easier to add some second-generation characters in the future. Those whose strength exceeds the human limit can be thrown away to the immortal race hybrids. There are even You can apply the setting of the Dragon Clan, with a fairy race symbol similar to the Golden Eyes and an individual special ability similar to the Word Spirit, and then the skills of Naruto that cannot be explained by magic can be completely thrown to this "Word Spirit"). Then you can write a small prequel here. For example, the protagonist has witnessed the evil of human nature and his attitude and will to completely trust and protect the human race has been shaken to pave the way for joining the Great Tomb in the future (please refer to the Kingdom section for details, the second creation of some traffickers and gangsters).                                                                                                                                                                                                                Otherwise, the protagonist's ability setting in the Bone King's world view be too ridiculous, can we only say that it is really a plug-in? It may be that the author did not carefully set up the immortal race. Apparently, including the NPCs, they always thought that the protagonist was a human girl or something. It is recommended that the author improve the settings (these can at least last several chapters, or simply be interspersed with the protagonist and the insect master). Fourth, if it is to cater to the time-travel setting, there will be some drama. The attitude of the NPC group towards time travelers will not be very good. Didn't Albedo form a hunting party? Moreover, the Bone King is bound to turn black in the later stage. According to this setting, the protagonist and the Bone King will conflict, so it is necessary to write the protagonist's dimorphism according to the introduction, but it can be polished here. Refer to the episode of Robin in One Piece on Judiciary Island, and write that the protagonist is convinced or is attacked (tiao), strategy (jiao), and the same (duo) transformation (luo) by the NPCs. Therefore, I personally feel that I can write that I initially believed that the Great Tomb is a nest of demons who want to destroy the world (corresponding to the first nine pictures), and that I committed myself to the Great Tomb for the survival of the human race (corresponding to the introduction). Specifically, I can write that the protagonist fled after being discovered, fought with the guardians in the middle, defeated Lord Chong and was captured alive after being exhausted, and then the part where Xiao Di tortured and examined the protagonist, and then the Bone King came, and after thinking for a while, he decided to take the protagonist The character is included in the maid group, and the protagonist has no choice but to join the Bone King camp (a forced young girl, etc.) Here you can give the protagonist a close-up of the broken face (like in the previous chapters). This way, the protagonist travels to the previous server in the game a few years ago. The early stage is tragic, and then he is redeemed with the help of the Big Tomb NPC and the Bone King, which reflects the struggle of human nature against fate, and then completely integrates into the Big Tomb. The protagonist's character can be set to be arrogant but values ​​his companions. It is not impossible to even set the protagonist to be flirtatious. Moreover, according to this setting, the identity of the protagonist and the bone king is irrelevant. It avoids possible conflicts in the later stage. The identity of the protagonist can get closer to the bone king in the early stage (after all, it is better to be closer) In this way, if it were written according to the author's writing style in the first few chapters, it would be a perfect light novel masterpiece. Moreover, if it is set like this, it will be easier to drive, the gameplay will be smoother, and the writing clues will be clearer (it can be better integrated into the Karn Village line and the Kingdom line). "Because of the existence of the protagonist, there is a place for human beings in the Sorcerous Kingdom established, and NPCs have also changed their impression of humans." This setting in the later period can also avoid the current situation of online novels that are high and low, and can even be turned into farming and floating for dozens of chapters. In short, I am very optimistic about the author's potential. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good when he writes seriously, and the occasional plot collapse is actually acceptable. I hope the author can see my suggestions. Finally, I wish the book will get better and better. Come on, the author, and have a bright future. (Suggestion from the heart, reject steel bars, you are right if you argue)

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Ainz: The earth explodes into the sky? Help me clean up the trash on the lower floor. The fire is extinguished? These dozens of levels of beasts are perfect for barbecue. Is there a mop in the water? Just in time, the floor cleaning task is left to you. Bing Chen looked at the undead Ainz who waved and walked away, feeling that something was wrong. Story of the first stage: An eight or nine-year-old girl stared blankly at the demons in front of her, feeling at a loss. Cocytus: "What to do with her." Demiurge: "Lock her up first, and then report to Lord Ainz!" Bingchen: "A group of... Demons are dancing around... Faint..." This book is also called "Naruto Enters the King of the Undead". It took four years to crack the overload and get Naruto's skin and skills. I didn't expect that the server would be stopped just after it was cracked... Even if I was tortured by a group of demons every day after traveling through time, I still couldn't beat them after that, bastard! ! ! Second stage story: Blood Emperor: "Why don't you leave, you are a human being!" Bing Chen: "Blood Emperor, maybe I am a human, but I will not leave Nazarick, because... This is how I protect humanity." Third stage story:

As usual, I still hope that Master Ban will come out after asking 🙂

I'm going to find a cracked version of this thing.

Received, the writing is online. I hope you can return to support me. Thanks

I haven't understood it after watching it for a long time. What's the plot? Full audience + psychological activities

Fellow Taoist, please stay, don't come and take a look at these long legs 😃😃😃😃😃

The author hopes that the plot will not change too much because of the protagonist. For example, in the second season, a group of adventurers went to the Great Tomb to steal and rob, and were eventually kidnapped by the gang. I hope the protagonist will not change this result. (Note: As long as you become an adventurer, you must be prepared to never return, so I don't like changing the plot) And that, in the third season, I fight against that kingdom. I don't like the plot to be changed╰(‵□′)╯

I'm a little confused, why is it that in the new chapter, only a woman can touch her? Wasn't it because Kirabi went to a consciousness space with him and came back as a woman? Of her?

Finished? 🤔

I don't know why, but I can't stand the protagonist at all. I just feel so stupid and can't get involved at all?