Great Luo of All Ages

The next world is written by the author of Baolian Lantern

A group of lsps took my first place ᥬ🌚᭄ᥬ🌚᭄ᥬ🌚᭄

The author seems not to understand the proportion between your mini map and the main world. Do you think readers attach great importance to the mini map? I'm almost done writing it. The small map is just accumulation and adjustment. As a result, you didn't see many words in the main world. They were all small worlds. You might as well write about the upgrade flow of the heavens. What's the use of telling me about the main world?

I feel that the protagonist is quite good. If the protagonist is an indigenous person and writes a passionate story, the author's writing style is very suitable. But if you take into account all the cheats that the protagonist does, he is hundreds of years old. The setting is scheming, but his plans are not successful a few times, so he basically resorts to cheating at the critical moment. It's okay once or twice, but I can't stand it again and again. It's better to write a sunny and warm-blooded protagonist from the beginning. Everyone loves it, Xiaoqiang is as explosive, and it's more enjoyable to watch. . .

There is another great Luo in the Yuanshi lineage

It started again and again, the author's traditional skills, the protagonist fights life and death, and then someone finally comes out to take a share of the pie. It's disgusting. There are so many books, but the one written by Qing Yu at the beginning turns out to be the best. Getting more and more disgusting. Really, I was pleasantly surprised from the beginning, and then started to be disappointed, disappointed, disappointed, and kept disappointed.

To be honest, I was very surprised when I saw this book in the recommendation list. The main recommendation was that the recommendation line, "Walking through the heavens starting from protons" was so stupid. I never thought before that the protagonist could actually be a proton. It's not even an atom, how can it advance the plot? How do you travel through the heavens? Is the main plot just to find matching neutrons and synthesize them to upgrade? After I came in, I was disappointed. It turned out that the protons meant hostages, alas. Dian Niang mistook me. By the way, there are many people in the starting point who can travel through humans, animals, and artifacts, but no one has traveled through time into microscopic particles?

The title of the book Zhushi Daluo looked at the copy of the introduction. The copy was full of martial arts. He also asked why this book was not popular. Why should it be popular? I naturally reject some people's thoughts on this book, because there are too many such books. They write about martial arts with the name of Zhu Tianliu, write one or two million words and still write martial arts, and quickly end it after hundreds of thousands of words after martial arts. For this kind of books, I always think that they are trying to sell dogs on sheep's heads!

To be honest, it feels really frustrating to watch. I don't feel good at all. I keep making calculations over and over again. How can you do this world-travel novel? The protagonist has to be calculated by others from the beginning to the end. Even if you defeat one, there will be another one. I am really speechless. And the most disgusting thing is to kill the so-called enemy of the protagonist. It's the first time. It's always impossible to kill, and there's always someone to stop it. It has twists and turns every time, and it's like this every time. It's really annoying to watch And it doesn't matter if you write it like this at the beginning, it's still acceptable. In the end, the writing is pretty good at the beginning, and the handling is quite refreshing. The more it ends, the more it becomes like this, and the more uncomfortable it becomes.

The protagonist obviously has a very high level in the main world and is about to join the sect. It is outrageous to think about the skills in the low martial world every day. He must hurry up and increase his training to the upper limit and leave quickly.

The protagonist is becoming more and more rubbish. Nowadays, any supporting character has more personality and charm than the protagonist! Taoist Master Yuqing, Yuxuan, Seven Killer Sword Lord, Supreme Demon Lord, all of them are wonderful, but the main character is too annoying and unnecessary. If this continues, just delete all the protagonist's scenes! It's better to watch it as a group drama and describe the experiences and plans of these characters in detail, here it is.

The fantasy and martial arts routine is too old. Can't we start from worlds like Shushan White Snake and Liaozhai Journey to the West? Or it's okay to follow the example of the Supreme Being. What's the point of those golden, ancient, and easy-to-deve worlds that are all badly written?

When I return to the main world for the first time, I have to climb 999 steps. After climbing the steps, I will give a lesson. After the lesson, I will immediately participate in the sword competition between the sects. This is really bullshit. At least ten years of cultivation time were lost during this period. It's like arranging a group of primary school students to participate in a competition and compete for academician qualifications. Every time they see this kind of book, they immediately run away.

The more you report me, the more I will reward you with 10,000 yuan of support

The final battle in the martial arts area (laughs)

It's a pity that it became cliché in the later period. Simply stacking power or the like, or talking about concepts, is a bit like building a dojo in a snail shell. No matter how sophisticated it is, it will still be petty. I still hope to see something new instead of following the path of my predecessors.

After reading so many astronomical texts, especially those about martial arts and martial arts, I feel that the main world I see is either high martial arts or prehistoric. Can this be changed? If the main world of the weird genre is difficult to write, then what about Ultraman? What if Ultraman is the main world, the protagonist does not change his human body, and goes to the martial arts world? I feel that this kind of world, where the combat power is as high as the sky, but ordinary people have no way to acquire the power to protect themselves, is the main world suitable for Zhutianliu. And in this way, the black technology of the Earth Defense Force can be used in terms of force. In terms of spiritual practice, you can explore the Monster Xingyiquan, Ultra Contemplation, and so on. The back is very weak

Why do I feel that Seven Kills Sword Lord Yin Qianshang is more interesting as the protagonist? ! I can't remember that the main character's three meridians are weak, okay? Yin Qianshang was a prodigy of the Yuqing lineage. He colluded with the Shangqing Daoist lineage to learn Shangqing Swordsmanship, and secretly joined the Shura Demonic Path to become the leader of the cult! This operation! This is crazy! Like excitement

The male protagonist in the main world is Mu Xuanlin, right? ? All achievements were accomplished by him. . "On the one hand, he has endless plans, with unparalleled strength and pretentiousness, and on the other hand, he has countless beauties. Everywhere he goes, there are girls of heroine level. . Looking frustrated. The male protagonist is the same plot trigger as the supporting character. .

What the hell is the Legend of the Son of Heaven? I've never heard of it. How can you make people feel like they're part of it? Let me or who of us still remember this book after a long time?

The protagonist has been plotted against for several books. This happens again and again, I hope it will change in the next book

It's okay to just go and create the world, but in the end it's all about talking nonsense, reversing the matryoshka doll, isn't there Hongjun in the Conferred Gods? Taking away the concept of Hongjun and making him Hongjun, the way of heaven. The protagonist's way is originally the way of heaven. This is not right. Pangu and Chumu fell, and Hongjun Chumu was born. The Three Qing Dynasties performed Taoism, created the world, reversed Pangu, and transformed Hongjun into Taoism.

Very well written. It's just that the connection between Gong Ziyu and Gong Ziyu is broken. The author is not ruthless and cruel enough. The woman is not cheating, so how can she have a role? It is normal to grow old and die. Later, I also added a strong background to her... Others are obviously a tragic figure, but she has to change her destiny to do something with a hammer... The author must be ruthless and ruthless~ Xiao Longnu is already ridden by others, and Yang Guo's head is green. That's right... No one can stop Xiao Longnu from being ridden by a Taoist priest, and there is no way he can stop Yang Guo from falling in love with his aunt...

"Eternal life is ethereal, I don't ask for it, and I am ashamed of myself for doing nothing." "The wall of the world has disappeared, and the chaos has arisen. Once destiny is gone, I compete for freedom." "The eagle strikes the sky and the whale dominates the sea. How can you know the dragon and the earthworm if you don't try?" "How can ordinary people know me? I will not give up until the end!"

Although you said that the universe is a monkey version specially evolved by someone, I still want to say that the power of Yang Shen will turn the Tianxuan you are describing into scum in seconds. Of course, you can say that this is the evolved monkey version.

There is actually a heroine who has withdrawn.

I think the protagonist's character should be improved a bit. I think it's pretty good-looking, but sometimes I really don't like the character of the protagonist. He's hypocritical, selfish, a villain, and scheming! I'm a little confused

After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist has been in the sect for so long and has advanced to several realms. The sect doesn't even give the protagonist a book of exercises, and then brags about how awesome the sect's exercises are. Except for the main character's basic exercises that everyone knows, the sect gave the protagonist a set of exercises. All subsequent exercises are based on self-enlightenment.

I was waiting for the author to start a novel similar to Qing Yu Yao Dao, but the author used poison power to kill him instantly at the beginning of this novel.

When will the author finish this book? I haven't finished the free chapters yet, I hope the next book will be less poisonous and have more original plots!