The Rise of Nanotechnology

This writing is so outrageous, I finally understand why Qidian gave me 5 yuan. There are too many flaws, and just treating Wall Street capital tycoons as NPCs is outrageous. There are other laboratory instruments in the back. You really think you can buy them if you have money, let alone in 2008. At that time, a person who had just returned from Harvard directly invested hundreds of millions to build a laboratory, and the country did not notice it at all. And where did you buy your hundreds of millions of equipment? Taobao? And what kind of filter is that? ? ? Too outrageous, too outrageous

The books written by the author of this book are still very interesting in the early and middle stages. However, in the later stages, when they leave the earth and develop the universe, they are not so attractive. This should be a common problem with this kind of books.

After reading the current chapter, evaluate it. First of all, it is a good black technology novel. It is not exaggerated, logical, and the scientific and technological route is innovative. However, the shortcomings are also obvious (for commercial novels). First of all, the protagonist is invisible. Simply put, he has no sense of existence, which makes this book less exciting. Even for a black technology novel, the protagonist's personality and pretentiousness are very important. Secondly, it is too light and lacks water, and there is no such thing as arousing emotions. I think the idea of the rise of great powers is currently flourishing on the Internet. If you can combine this, it will add a lot of appeal to the book. If you don't want to get involved in politics, you can also write about business confrontation, and you don't need too much space to cover every black technology product. You can write two or three plots like this, crushing Western technology and taking over technological hegemony. Again, it's the rhythm. This book doesn't have a strong sense of rhythm, almost none. I can't give you any suggestions about this. Then there is the sense of expectation. For a commercial novel, the sense of expectation should be the most important. You'd better let the readers know what the protagonist is going to do next, and then have expectations for the protagonist's goal. This can maintain the reading rate and prevent you from feeling like it doesn't matter whether you read it or not. Finally, I hope the author will write well. It is okay to keep writing at the current pace, but it is best not to have poisonous points. Many readers now delete the poisonous points as soon as they see them.

The author is awesome and the quality is amazing. Looking at Chapter 70, the logic is rigorous and the attitude is correct. I haven't seen such a good quality rebirth article for a long time. Unfortunately, the story lacks interest and feels a bit like watching a drama. This is probably the main reason why the performance is not worthy of the quality, but the quality is so good that I am blown away again. I would like to give a suggestion to the author. I hope that the author will have time to learn from the black technology system of Chenchen L, who has two books under his name, and this game is too real. I believe it will greatly increase the interest of the story in the author's next book. After all, grades are important, right? Otherwise, no matter how good you write, others won't know. A little suggestion, don't spray if you don't like it!

It's becoming more and more self-indulgent, it's gone too far, it's a complete utopia, and the more you look at it, the more fake it becomes.

I just saw on Douyin that three international students broke into the women's bathhouse. The school said that because the international students did not pay attention to the signs, and the English on the signs was too small and irregular, the fault lies with the school and the Chinese students. 🤓

Recently, because the world has become magical, I have begun to learn more about the international situation and history, and found that the author's novel is really a beautiful vision (of course I have basically read it all). Everyone lives under a huge network, and Ami is actually just pushed into it. A flag in front of the stage, with tentacles everywhere, may not be as simple as shown in the novel, but I believe that as more and more people wake up, the world will eventually undergo major changes, and those who treat ordinary people and people as cattle and horses and nourishment will eventually be hung on street lamps.

Full subscription support, it's too difficult for science fiction writers

A science fiction article written close to the real world, a possibility grafted on the real world, well written! The logic of climbing the technology tree route is rigorous, and the perspective of observing the real world is unique, giving you a two-level pleasure. In the later period, the pace of Yingjiang's collapse and entry into space was a bit fast, but the flaws could not be concealed.

There was a similar book before, about recycling waste, changing fertilizers, growing mushrooms, cleaning up alien species, and deepening the Yellow River. Who knows the name? . .