I Want to Catch Time Travel

The author should learn more about modern weapons before writing a novel. Thousands of time-travelers, equipped with cannons and machine guns, and tanks were actually destroyed by the regiment and surrendered. Even with artillery, it can still be bombarded by Ming Dynasty artillery. Don't you know the power of modern weapons? Will there be a sneak attack? Do the time travelers have no soldiers? No mines or night vision goggles? Still no drone? As soon as the drone was launched and the coordinates were programmed, the Ming army would die as many as they came, and the local tanks from the Anti-Japanese War also came. Those were loaded with rifle ammunition. Didn't the time traveler have a machine gun? The author lacks the most basic modern military knowledge. Isn't it possible that no one will read it?

Alas, it was very uncomfortable to read the chapter where the time traveler was tortured. Most of the people who time travel are people with ideals to benefit the world. They are women of the season and have been cut off by floods. This is not only a waste of resources, but also very inhumane. Does the author have no sons or daughters?

Let's put it this way, I can write well, but it's not suitable for the general public.

This book is destined to be a eunuch. Unless the author does not make money by writing books, don't read the comments. You don't want to think about who is reading the book, a modern person, who is the time traveler? Modern people, on a macro level, modern people must be close to modern people, but you actually let the indigenous people fight If you beat the modern people, this will dissuade a large number of readers, and then there is the plot. I saw the emperor leading tens of thousands of people to fight a thousand time-travelers, and he actually won. I can't stand it anymore. There are even tanks, rockets, and mercenaries. How could he lose? There are too many.

I don't know which protagonist is, it's so confusing

Although it was a bit messy, it was still very satisfying to watch the time-travel gangsters and the indigenous emperors defeat the army of time-travelers. What the hell did Miss Lu go offline like that in Chapter 39?

This typo is the most egregious in a novel I have ever read. There is no distinction between him and her, time travel and entrepreneurship, etc., Etc., Can you be more careful?

The writing is fine, but I felt a little weird when I read it.

There are many typos and the background introduction is a mess. Strange people appear every time

It's a good subject matter, but it's a bit messy 🤫

The left sentence is indigenous and the right sentence is indigenous. You don't treat the ancient people as human beings either. They are just tools for you to gain profits. They are just low-level slaves. Isn't it just to travel back in time to become a master? By the way, spread western culture

Emmmmm Niubi, the report is completed with little hands, watch me strike hard 🙂

🙂 You are so cute, you treat time travelers like idiots.

Brother, there are a lot of typos. Look back and correct them.

The most incomprehensible thing is that a large number of time-travelers have gone back to protect the imperial power and become slaves. . . What a bunch of scum. . . Especially that woman. . Haha

Really, I lost my mind just to lick Ming.