Take the Store to Cultivate Immortality

Don't watch it, be careful, there is something wrong with the female protagonist's outlook I had a lot of complaints before I watched it, but it was just too boring, so I watched it as an optional part, but I really can't stand it anymore. I am a mortal and feel that I can't understand it. I don't understand it. Let's take a look for yourselves. After this man who urged Yuzhu to become an immortal, he did all kinds of evil. He didn't treat mortals as human beings and killed innocent people at will. Arrogant and arrogant. , Look down on everyone, but after the heroine and the others met, she said that she was not disgusted, and she even accepted her, which made me vomit. After reading so much, I feel that the heroine is also this kind of person, looking down on the arrogance of mortals, thinking that she is an immortal nb, does not care about anyone, and can do whatever she wants because she is an immortal🐮

This book is good, author, please do it! It's rare that there aren't those romances cloaked in the garb of cultivating immortality, which makes it comfortable to watch. Practitioners who go against the will of heaven must of course be able to endure loneliness. In the past two years, female videos have become degenerate. There is no food, and most of them are poisonous weeds. They are some kind of sweet wives and group pets. They use all kinds of golden fingers to find weird and top-notch men to cheat on them. So disgusting

It's best not to have a male protagonist. Wouldn't she be good at cultivating immortality by herself?

The three views are inconsistent! The heroine has a soft spot for people who kill innocent people indiscriminately and thinks they are unworthy of the Virgin. I don't think killing innocent people indiscriminately is unholy! The heroine doesn't kill anyone herself, she just knocks people out and lets others do the finishing touches, and then she thinks it's very pleasing to the national master's disciples to kill innocent mortals indiscriminately! Qingqi three views! See Chapter 81: Abandon the Pit! Normally I won't comment on a few omissions in an article, but I couldn't bear the "not holy" line in this article! Sorry, Holy Mother does not mean killing innocent people indiscriminately!

So do you have a male protagonist or not?

One person's blood book does not require a male protagonist! ! !

I don't understand why a person who cultivates immortality does not go to a place where he cultivates immortality, but lives in a place surrounded by mortals. Is it to appear unique?

I think the heroine should get rid of her dependence on the system as soon as possible in the later stage

The three views of the heroine need to be verified. She is not a holy mother, but she likes to show off and talk nonsense. She is also selfish. She is relatively procrastinating when dealing with the opposite sex, so she seems to have a Mary Sue halo.

The heroine is very casual and has unstable outlook on life. It may be that her character has no outstanding characteristics, which makes her feel vague. However, the writing is clear, the plots advance naturally, the stories are fresh, and most of them are not repetitive with other immortality novels. An article that can be read is much better than some paid novice articles. Alas, the character descriptions of the supporting characters are not clear either. Come on, the author!

This article is actually said to be good-looking. People really don't have high standards for the article. The most important thing is that the author's views are not correct.

Too little, not enough to see, giving me a headache

The story is pretty good and worth reading

It's so short every time, can you add more?

It's okay to have a male protagonist, but with less content, and it's better for the female protagonist to practice and become stronger.

How can I put it this way? The heroine is always hanging around among mortals and she is very pretentious.

Write what you want to write, don't care about what some people think, everyone has a different image of the protagonist, and no one can cater to everyone.

Authors can read the articles of other authors. Your ability is inferior to that of many authors who write free articles for free. There is no need to belittle yourself. Writing is a process of progress. Your persistence in writing until now is worthy of praise. Regardless of whether you give up or not, I hope you will write better and better.

Happy New Year! 2022 Stable update! Come on come on! 🌹🌹🌹

Today I am the first one to catch up on the update, good morning! Have a great weekend!

What a pity. I love reading this book so much. I hope the author will continue it when she feels inspired. 😌

It's a pity that it's rare to find a book that I can follow, and it just sucked.

It feels good to not have a chapter title, so I'll add a title.

I read it again and am looking forward to the follow-up story. When will you come back and realize your dream?

This book I came across by chance actually tied the book in one breath. Although the writing style is not as good as those works by great masters, as a book about cultivating immortals, this book is actually quite good. The upgrading, opportunities, and skills of cultivating immortals are all well planned. Moreover, this book is free (there are more than 300 chapters and there is no charge). Although there are not many reviews, the author is still writing it very seriously. Some people like storytelling and some don't. Don't be discouraged. There are many people waiting for your stories. Come on!

This is actually a free text!

This is a free and interesting book

A very good novel is actually a eunuch. Great support to the author 😳

Emmm, I only read more than fifty chapters, but why did the character of Baili Xunfeng collapse after just writing it? Outrageous. . . .

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