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After reading Chapter 11, I was poisoned and gave people benefits for no reason.

It's good-looking, keep going until you ascend to the fairy world, and don't want a female protagonist. Come on! ! ! ! ! !

Meow meow meow? Seeing that the Lord of Tianyue Holy Cult was killed by the protagonist, there are some things that I don't understand and I want to discuss with the author. Don't immortal cultivators have the art of hexagrams? Wouldn't it be possible to predict what would happen if the disciple died? The dozens of disciples who died are only one-tenth of the number of disciples who entered the world (the description in the book is not clear and not very sure, but twenty disciples were killed before), then the total number of disciples in Shushan should not be less than five or six hundred people. How can a handyman disciple clean such a big place? Who was cleaning before the protagonist came to Shushan? Given the degree of unity and friendship among Shushan disciples described in the book, how come there is a handyman disciple like the protagonist? Other disciples should take the initiative to help him clean up, right? Moreover, Shushan is also a sect, big and small, and this experience in the world of mortals is not just one, but there is no contact point among the people? No information network? No guardian? No righteous allies to help? Where are the fellow decent people? Why didn't you help? The Demon Sect dared to kill the disciples of Shushan, and at the same time, the sect's location was not kept secret. The protagonist and the leader of Shushan who brought a group of burdens quickly came to kill them. Didn't the Demon Sect consider the consequences? Before the Shushan disciples came down from the mountain, the elder was so confident that no one from the demonic path would dare to massacre his own disciples. Where did this confidence come from?

There are more monthly tickets than recommended tickets, and the starting point has been changed so hard that I can't even understand it.

If you are writing a novel at the same level, you can write whatever you want. Monks can kill whatever they want for the sake of profit and resources, but it would be disgusting to write about killing mortals without any benefit, and it seems to have no sense of involvement.

I feel like not many people are looking at a dog like this. It's very frustrating to watch. He's obviously so strong, but he still sweeps the floor? ! Born to be a slave?

Do you dare to call me Gou? If you carry a gourd and a sword all day without changing your clothes, do you think you are a superman? No one will recognize you if you take off your glasses?

🤓🤓🤓First

Can't you just be a good dog? If you insist on revealing your identity later, then your previous actions will be of no use.

As soon as I saw the introduction of Jiu Sword Fairy, I didn't want to read it.

Plagiarized, plagiarized

It's a factory-style novel. The plot framework is almost the same, but the name of the protagonist has been changed. The time and place of the incident have been slightly changed, and it's a new novel. It seems that the starting point has begun to decline, which is sad~

This Yang Fan is the protagonist, he breaks through so fast.

It's so poisonous. Not to mention other things, I recognized my biological father in the first few pictures and knelt down to lick him every day. Daily licking series.

This is out of context, just like finishing an episode of a TV series, without any new ideas.

This book won't burn. . .