Morning Dew Concubine

Ah Zhen is a little transparent, but he wants to be a little transparent who always moves forward. One book after another, it always gets a little better. One day, I hope to be your friend who has no regrets. So this floor is dedicated to receiving various opinions. A Zhen will listen carefully and then gradually improve. Whether it is about plot logic or character creation, I hope that pillows will not worry about anything and can speak freely. I also hope that there will be no affirmation. This website only accepts opinions. I come here with my sincerity, and I hope that you will also be sincere.

The writing is good. . I saw your article when it was just published, and it gave me a very refreshing and amazing feeling. I suggest that the author change the opening chapter, because when I read it, I thought Tian Jiao was the male protagonist, but he was not. Since he is just a cannon fodder, it would be a bit wasteful to write the content of one chapter. . Because readers don't catch them in the first chapter, it will be difficult again. . 😡😡 Come on!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~