The First Peak Douluo in Wuhun Palace

The bug in this book is really big. Since you can change the soul ring, why is Judouluo still yellow, yellow, purple, black, black, and black?

The protagonist is a loser, a womanly person, indecisive, and reluctant to spend money.

Chapter 4: After killing Ye Xiao, Ju Douluo captured the Millennium Fox, Millennium Wolf, and Millennium Snake for them. Hu Liena, Xie Yue, and Yan directly obtained the Millennium Soul Power and Millennium Skill. The soul power directly reached level 15 😅, and the protagonist was very awesome. He knocked over a Centennial Monkey with a stick and obtained a pink soul ring. 🤫🤫🤫🤫

Author, what the hell are you writing about? The main character and the system made it so miserable in the early stage. Please comment and report. I mourn for the protagonist. The author made you so miserable.

Breathtaking novel! Absolutely amazing! It's absolutely amazing!

Take a quick look. I am extremely convinced that the author is definitely a cloud author. I definitely haven't really read Douluo. I probably just searched Baidu for some basic information, or read some other fan fiction, and then I rushed to write a novel. The question is, just write whatever you want. What plot are you writing? The characters' personalities are broken and their ethical relationships are in a mess. Disgusting, really. In all the years I have read novels, I have never seen such a disgusting plot. Author, are you here to take revenge on society? Otherwise, if it was not intentional, how could a person with normal thinking write such an anti-human novel?

My family members were poisoned. Chapter 1: I was directly persuaded to quit.

When will Shrek's gang and Tian Douxing Luo be killed? In the original work, they don't care about the life and death of the civilians and the imperial nobles suppress them. Your Wuhun and money still come to the Wuhun Palace, and the sect royal family will drive away the useless or unknown ones as soon as they wake up. Although the Wuhun Palace is bad, it only cultivates for the common people, and they are only good at what they do. The only bad thing is that they are overbearing and "infectious" internally. Moreover, Yousan also let the old monster poison the people of the whole city. Isn't it good to unify? Isn't peace bad? After thousands of years of fighting, it took Dousan to be unified by the sun and the moon.

The golden generation is eleven years old, and the highest soul power is level nine, haha

After reading a few chapters, let me tell you my opinion. First of all, Xie Yue targeted the protagonist for no reason. After reading for a long time, I still couldn't figure out whether he and Hu Liena were the same age. Then when I went to the Soul Hunting Forest, Ju Douluo directly drove the time and space tunnel to take the students on the way. It felt so easy to directly open the portal, and I could go wherever I wanted. Finally, Wuhundian took the students to the Soul Hunting Forest without even giving them a knife. Did they want the students to dig out the dead soul beasts with their fingers? All in all very good. Come on ＾0＾~ Give you a thumbs up

You have made too many magic changes, and the plot is not rigorous. You might as well innovate on your own. If you write a fanfic and make random magic changes, many people will scold you.

What kind of book should you write? Stop writing and go to the factory to make screws!

Reading this book has left a thorn in my heart

I'm so speechless. This rubbish novel is better than going home and farming.

Don't change it randomly. What's the point of changing it like this? We came here to watch you beat Tang San, not to watch you change the plot.

Qian Renxue

Douluo Continent is a world where the strong are respected. You are talking about a peaceful world. You are so funny, hahahaha 👏👏

Trash, go back to farming. o(▼盘▼メ;)o

Is Xiaoxue going to be disgusting?

Let me make a suggestion. You can have a protagonist who is bullied, or you can have a weak character, but your character cannot be cowardly. Only with the mentality of thirty years in Hedong can you be the protagonist. Waste material flow is still very popular, but you are doing the opposite of Shuang Wen, abusing Wen?

You'd better go to work in the factory honestly. With your IQ, it's better not to talk about you.

I've only read two pages of the first chapter and it's gone. It's too poisonous. My poison resistance is too weak. Please leave first out of respect!

After reading the heroine, you will know that the author has definitely not finished reading the original work. Qian Renxue is still a golden generation and laughed.

It made me laugh so hard that I can't even finish writing it.

Luffy: I am the man who wants to become the Pirate King! ! Roger: I heard you want to be my man? ?

I won't read novels about sadistic masters

He died of poison in less than half a chapter 🙄

Can the author and the heroine have Ah Yin and Xiao Wu, please?