Tomb Robbery Dark System

Speaking of fan notes, there are a few things that I can write about now. Most of them follow the original plot, and people will complain that the time sequence is not arranged properly.

Recommendation votes have been cast The pace is too fast, and a tomb has been completed in less than thirty chapters There are many typos, and there are few punctuation points, and the paragraphs are also very strange, and it is uncomfortable to watch in short There are too many dry facts, and the description is not detailed enough. This is the main reason for the fast pace. It feels like adding some dialogue to the outline, and the description of the environment, scenes and characters is not detailed enough Overall, the plot is good, there are no major poisonous points I hope it will not be unfinished or have eunuchs, and there will be more emotional scenes with the heroine.

Since I don't like to think too much when reading, I have no idea whether the plot in your novel or notes is correct or not. But it feels like some notes. I also felt that the plot progressed a little too fast and felt like it was just a quick glance. Moreover. The charm of notes seems to lie in the relationship between people. The abilities given by the system undoubtedly allow the protagonist to deal with dangers relatively easily. But in this case, there is undoubtedly a lack of fun.

Come on, author, come on 😆

Is the undersea tomb still under the sea? Wu Xie and the others did it once, you did it once, and asked them to do it next time. You are not as good at hydrology. How many people can read what you write like this?

Why isn't it updated? Damn, I still want to read more.

What, the background is perfect, but it doesn't suit my taste. There are too many intrigues, and my head is a little dizzy. Author, please write first and let me take my time 😵😵😵

Please update quickly. One update every day is not enough.

Let me ask, what is the Dark System?

After reading several pictures, Goldfinger didn't explain anything clearly. There were all kinds of typos and the writing was very sloppy. The character of the protagonist couldn't be established. Please be more careful.

A small suggestion, don't write too invincible. If the rice dumplings are torn apart and monsters step on them, it won't be possible to write. I've seen too many eunuchs.

Does anyone know of any good fan fiction about tomb robbing

Aning in Ultimate Notes is quite beautiful

The author. You wrote earlier about the secret revealed by Grandpa Wu Zhe. I'm not sure whether what you wrote is correct. But it is because of population after all. This purpose is very important. When Uncle San (referring to the Three Provinces) in the original work told the story of Xisha, he simply made up a lie. Luring Wuxie to follow the trap he set. Later, when the Evil Emperor of Shahai came to power, Wuxie listened to stories and extracted useful things from them. Who believes your words of guidance? The goal remains the same, just supplementing the situation you set based on the information. To sum up, who knows if his grandfather will lie to him [maybe he will set up a trap], after all, his third uncle also lied to his nephew? So in the future, if the author feels that the background he wrote conflicts with the original work, he will just change the setting in the later stage. It is also known as setting up a trap.

The system presence is too low! The character description is a bit awkward😅

I didn't read all of Tomb Raiders Notes before, but I read it a lot among other people. Now I'm a little confused. Are the Wu family and the Wang family originally a team? Is this the case in the original work? In my impression, I always thought that the Wu family and the Zhang family were on the same side, so why did Wuxie want to deal with the Wang family again? I'm a little confused, can someone explain it to me?