I Was Really Just Passing By!

Even the outline of a novel is not stable. It keeps moving around and the plot has no beginning and no end. Will it be changed as soon as a reader doesn't like it? What other novels do you write? I think it would be better if this novel is forced to end and then restarted.

Big boost, author, your writing is already much better than when you first started. Although it still doesn't work, it's much better. I suggest you add more description and rhetoric like the last few pictures. Otherwise it would be very dry to read. It's a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you. Finally, come on! 🙂

Cupid Chocolate only appears in a few chapters, 😡

Good guy, there are a lot of negative reviews. An armored warrior went to a harem anime like Cupid Chocolate. I immediately knew that this paragraph was written by the author.

When I saw Cupid's chocolate, I took a picture and came in.

He is simply a passerby who can transform into armor. He is worse than a passerby and looks confused.

First: Poor grasp of the plot👎 (too much original text, too watery) Nothing else is needed, 100% of the article is 10% of the original work and the rest is original. You know... It's all plot, and the protagonist doesn't show up. There are also a lot of wrong sentences. Not to mention other things, it should be a test of the author's writing style. It is not recommended to watch it.

It was very confusing, and I only remembered two things. First, the protagonist is very unlucky, and the world's consciousness is targeted, and there is no way to change it except to occupy the crane's nest, and a lot of the plot advancement relies on unlucky coincidences. The second thing is that the author is writing a serious plot while also making jokes that are not funny, and neither side is followed through to the end.

One thing to say, this second world is really baffling. I don't know what I'm writing about, but I just saw Zhao Ming being beaten.

Author, your writing style simply cannot control the fourth perspective. I don't know if the author found it difficult to write, but as a reader, it was quite frustrating for me.

It's just painful to watch. The protagonist can't speak even if he's wearing armor. He can't speak even if he's not wearing armor. If you don't explain it to others, at least mock them. The protagonist is just like the Yakuza.

Let me tell you my thoughts. I have already read Chapter 48 of Cupid. Generally speaking, there is no consciousness of the author himself, or there is no sense of creation at all. It would be understandable if I had to explain it hard when I was Kai Yi, that is, he was very stable and greedy for energy without doing anything. Finally, the consciousness of the world discovered this outsider, suppressed it, and then the protagonist left. After that, I stopped creating because I started following the original plot. I'm here to read a second-generation novel, not to review the plot! ! I stopped watching it after that because it was too watery and the main character was not outstanding.

The second copy was like shit, I just jumped.

So what is the protagonist doing?

The writing is average, but the plot is really interesting, really interesting

I feel like there is no need for this protagonist to exist at all. You can watch it without him.

The Earth Tiger Armors are not weak at all. It mainly depends on the person. Let's not talk about the pair of Kunzhong Earth Tiger Armors. They are extremely weak. Look at the Earth Tiger Armors of the second team! Three ultimate moves in one episode! It can be said that except for the Boss and the four ancient beasts, there is no supernatural beast that can be the opponent of the second team's Earth Tiger Armor.

I want to say something here, after all, I have watched it for so long. The Shadow Emperor is a creature from the five-dimensional universe, and the Shadow Planet is a transit station for the Shadow Emperor to land in the three-dimensional universe. While Lufa and the others were blowing up the Shadow Planet, the Shadow Emperor and the others were fighting with Emperor Man and the others on the earth, so they had no time to care. Therefore, there were not even any birds on the Shadow Planet. The only thing that can fight the Shadow Emperor is the Emperor's Armor. Shura Armor is not the strongest armor. Changing the world with Shura Armor is actually equivalent to opening an illusion, and you can go in and untie a knot in your heart (personal understanding). The reason is that the Shura Armor summoned by Xingtian Armor went back to the past and saved the lives of his parents, but his parents still died and the change was not successful. In addition, among the five elements of armor, as long as the armor comes into contact with a place with the same attributes as its own, it will be blessed. The combat effectiveness of the Black Rhinoceros Armor in the water is definitely stronger than that on the ground, so the combat effectiveness of the Earth Tiger Armor on the ground is definitely stronger than in other places, and its durability is also greater. (As for why Kunzhong is a talk hero, it may be because his blood level is too low. After all, both teams can use special moves continuously.) The battle between the telepathic beasts and the nether demon may be very brutal, but the one who survives in the end must be the telepathic beasts, because they are creatures that merge the five-dimensional universe and the three-dimensional universe.

I saw something the author said earlier, "What the hell? It's a bit of a drama, but I'm not interested in it now."

What are you writing? It's poisonous to death, and the sentences are not fluent.

After reading more than forty chapters, I felt that the writing was very confusing.

The first few dozen chapters are okay, but the later chapters are obviously not written by one person. They are full of assembly line routines.

How can I put it this way? I feel that from about 30 to 40 chapters, there is a bit of chaos in between. I can write the domestic or foreign special photos one world at a time. For example, there are several movies of Armor Warrior that are consecutively timed.

Damn, it's over like this 😡😡😡

This is originally a eunuch, but it's just the protagonist's dream. Bad novel

I'm sure it's short, can't I add more?

The writing is so messy, brother. Many chapters have prefaces that don't match the subtitles. It's too poisonous.

The writing is incoherent, and I can't connect the previous chapter to the next. This is a practice book for me to write better in the next one.

Author, your use of brackets () is very unique! Slip away!

Why no one writes fantasy maids