This Family Is Going to Rise

If you build your own small building, you are welcome to contribute 👏👏👏

After waiting for a few days, I finished reading it today. There has been a lot of family drama recently, but the more I watch it, the more boring it becomes, with a cookie-cutter beginning and inexplicable conflicts. This does not mean that the authors did not write well, it is just that this subject matter is difficult to stand on. As the writing continues, it becomes the protagonist dragging a bunch of people forward. The first two chapters of this book will make people misunderstand and think it is waste material. Later, they find that the author has cut into the practice in another way, and also added different types of practice to the demon clan. This is very good and makes people feel less abrupt. But the first three chapters were easy to dissuade, and the waste stream is really unpopular now. The author's writing style is very stable, the writing is very good, and it is very suitable for this kind of family flow. However, this style of writing will lack the excitement, there is no direct conflict, and there is no eye-catching dialogue. It is not suitable for novices, but only for old whites. Of course, I like your way of writing very much, and I can also get some of the cool points in it. The current plot is advancing very well. You must be steady. It cannot be too fast or too slow. It is up to the author to control it. I had started writing novels before, but then I found out that I didn't have the ability, so I gave up. I can talk but can't do it, and that's what I'm talking about. New writers are most afraid of not being able to listen to their opinions, and they are also most afraid of following the readers. I have suffered the hardship myself, so the above statement is for the author to make his own decisions. Such a comment is not a venomous one, right? 😜. I hope to follow my book list. If there are other friends who want to try poison, please follow me and leave a message. Finally, the character images are good and the character introductions are also great. I am looking forward to the plot behind it. I wish you better and better as you write!

Around Chapter 40, I felt a little tired from reading it and felt nauseous.

The characterization is pretty good. , Flesh and blood, normal IQ, and fairly clear logic. It can be seen that this is not a first draft, nor is it a mindless article. I really like this kind of slow writing. The language description is a bit like Lan Xiaolong's, that kind of white space, with a touch of white space. It may not make people excited, but it is a very pure and clean character. Awesome, hope you can keep it up! 👍👍

I thought it was about cultivating immortals, haha

What a great book, add it to your collection, come on!

Just read the first chapter, it's well written, and if you keep the plot going, it will become a hit.

The first few generations of the family used the second character, but when it came to the protagonist's generation, it became the third character. Generally, family texts also use the second character. It looks very uncomfortable. Have you seen the explanation behind it?

Brother, I saw your book rushed to the second place in the overall list, come on, come on, I came here to tell you, fortunately I invested, Ouye✌️

I could understand Chapter 33 before, but I couldn't understand it after that. Is it because I don't have enough education? What the hell, a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west