Gourmet in Reincarnation Paradise

I would like to give you a suggestion. The combat power increase written by the author is too vague, and it does not conform to the theme of the park. Only when the world is completed can you increase your combat power by giving rewards. It is like a copy of the dungeon. The main mission is passed in a muddle, and the combat power increases blindly. There is no sense of rhythm at all in the fuzzy combat power system. It gives people a completely incomprehensible look, and I suggest the author to conceive the plot of each world.

The later stage is inexplicable. Is this going to become an urban romance? The emotional line is awkward, there is inexplicable amnesia, and there is also a love triangle. This is why I hate the heroine in the story, and it delays it even more.                                                The love story is also disturbing. I feel that the author has let himself go. The protagonist's abilities are suitable for a lone wolf. The protagonist feels like he is just drifting with the crowd without a goal. Byakuya's purpose can become stronger easily. In a team-type novel like the protagonist dragging his feet, it would be better for the teammates to help each other grow stronger together instead of slowing down the protagonist's speed like now. In the original novel, Baha and the others can also help the protagonist, and they appear a lot. The protagonist's right-hand man also has a role in fighting the boss, which is quite important. However, this novel does not have the same text. There are not many existences that appear in the main text. Just because of the bloody love triangle in the world, the author is given a low number of words. It is better not to use it. If the author can't write the emotional line, let them go offline as soon as possible. Seeing the author, they are worried about him, and he is worried about the heroine. I feel bad for them, but at least the protagonist can establish a target enemy or embark on the path of becoming stronger like Su Xiao.          ，，๑_๑

Author, I don't understand why you let Apophis eat your own resources wantonly. You can't spoil him too much. Anyway, the future development of the protagonist does not depend on perfecting it. You have to be strong yourself to make iron. Wouldn't it be nice to keep it to strengthen yourself?

I wish she was the heroine. . Hope not to die again

I hope the author will give me the shortcomings of these two plans. If I have no direction, please give me some guidance. Thank you

The segments are too long and look a bit messy

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It's so messy. . . . . I was fascinated by the dungeon section. . . What the hell is this?

Is the author writing about the gourmet in the original work of Samsara Paradise? Abilities look the same

It seems to be the only fanfic that is still being updated, so give it a look first.

Author, you have lost your attendance 🥱

Then what is the author? Not all mages are Masters. Masters are the Three Poor. Masters and Masters are completely different things.

I like it very much, thank you to the author

Wow, it's level nine, Mosquito reminds me of gourmets again. I'm torn apart. Should I write anymore?😵😵😵

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

For new books, you can check out Samsara Paradise: Am I a Sword Immortal in the Apocalypse?

Regarding the future development direction of the protagonist, what does the author plan to do? Is he considering developing techniques?

The beginning of the author's writing is okay, I hope it will be better later. To mention a small detail, Apocalypse Paradise does not seem to use paradise coins. I remember Mosquito wrote about it in one of the more than 2,000 chapters in the book, if I remember correctly.

The author can work on the gourmet cells in the prisoners of gourmet food. This limit is extremely high. In that world, some strong men can destroy stars just by throwing water.