Start Farming Hard All Night Long

After I fully subscribed, I didn't read the book at the beginning. It's estimated that 99% of the readers were lost in this way. However, after taking the time to read it in the past two days, I felt very mixed. Let's talk about the advantages first. The greatest advantage of this book is the humanistic spirit of restoring history. Someone complained earlier that a noble court with only two or three people had to be pulled over by the lord in fights. In fact, if you really understand history to a certain extent, you will be surprised to find that this is a true portrayal of the remote and down-and-out nobles in the European Middle Ages. The author has an astonishing depth of understanding and expression of the feudal territorial system, folk life, aristocratic culture, and social and economic formations. This breaks the DND city-state style or the fantasy world model designed with reference to Eastern princes or the Spring and Autumn style that are generally created in online articles due to a little knowledge, and builds a more realistic Western fantasy background that is full of novelty. Even if you are not interested in digging deeply into European history, you only need to refer to "A Song of Ice and Fire", a humanistic book that is considered by Westerners to be the most realistic portrayal of history. Those lords related to people's lives and the size of towns can realize the unique charm value of this book. Secondly, the author is very mature and experienced in grasping the tension of the plot, the rhythm of contradictions, and the degree of dramatic conflicts. If you can persist in reading for thirty or forty chapters, you will find that this work, which seems to have a physical style and even a narrative rhythm as old-fashioned as Shakespeare, actually has a perfect grasp of the rhythm and routine of online articles. The conflicts between the protagonist and the lord come one after another, with twists and turns. The protagonist's behavior is neither too cowardly to make people irritated nor too whimsical to win. After reading it, you will only be angry at the Count, but you will not feel that the protagonist is aggrieved, nor will anything feel far-fetched. Even the characters are so three-dimensional that you will feel that the villain's motivations, stance and behavior are very normal and completely understandable, but you just want to see him being overturned by the protagonist. So, why did such an excellent book die because no one cared about it? The answer is of course that the shortcomings are more fatal. For example, the twists and turns of the wonderful conflict just mentioned, in fact, you may not see it, because it will happen hundreds of thousands of words later. After reading a mediocre account of 100,000 words, almost no one can persist. In fact, are the first hundred thousand words really boring? This is of course impossible for an author who can write such a wonderful plot. If you read it with the mood of reading a classic, you will find that this unremarkable beginning presents a real three-dimensional Western fantasy world in front of you from all aspects. From this perspective, this does not seem to be a shortcoming. And indeed it is. But there are definitely problems. That is, the author completely ignores the fast-paced reading habits of contemporary online readers. For example, in a book with more than eighty chapters, the protagonist's golden finger only appears in chapter sixty-six The online literature market is mixed, and facing an unfamiliar author's name, it is almost impossible for someone to read the text with the attitude of reading a historical classic. This requires the author to first create a first impression for readers that you are an expert in writing, a master, and worthy of others' careful review. At this point, the author also has a long way to go. Because in addition to the attractiveness of the opening chapter, this book also reflects the author's shortcomings in some details. This shortcoming is relative, because Zhong Tian Wen really likes this. You have in-depth research on the social environment and your own understanding of fantasy materials, but your understanding of the natural environment is slightly weak, such as pottery craftsmanship, knight combat skills, and agricultural knowledge. Xiaoyun's habit is to either avoid things he doesn't understand, or to make great efforts to look up information until he is really proficient in a point before writing. To sum up, Xiaoyun suggests that the next time Hongyijiang opens a book, she should first design a thrilling and exciting beginning, full of mystery, suspense, or dramatic conflict. Build your reader's confidence first before you start telling your story. Internet articles often talk about the three golden chapters, but Hongyijiang seems to have ignored this problem at all www Now that this book has been published, even if Xiaoyun likes it quite a lot, she will not recommend it in an attitude of being responsible to the readers. I hope to see Hongyi Jiang's more mature new work soon. With accumulated experience, Xiaoyun believes that as long as such authors persevere and make some changes, they will be able to reach a height far beyond that of most online writers. 🌹

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The plot should be simplified, it's too watery. The citizens have no food to eat and they have to waste a few chapters. Then the protagonist sells things in person. He wrote it for a long time and didn't write down the idea. 😅 After reading nearly a third of it, I didn't feel that the author wrote a farming novel. I even doubted whether the author had read a farming novel? I'm not criticizing you, but your plot is quite outrageous. It's clearly described in the introduction. It's so dangerous. I watched the male protagonist's series of operations and felt that it was relaxed and humorous Then as a noble, it is outrageous not to have servants, housekeepers and guards around. This is the foundation of a territory. After all, it is impossible to do everything by yourself. You said you have no money to hire servants and housekeepers. Okay, this can be rounded off, but how can the guards say there is no such thing? If you think about it with your brain, you will know that even stupid lords know that guards are the cornerstone of protecting their own lives and ruling and maintaining order in the territory For example, in the scene where the refugees beat others, in order to stop the fight, it was actually the male protagonist's harem group who came to break up the fight?

My personal suggestion for this book is to just follow the outline and finish the plot as soon as possible. Although saying this is very discouraging for new writers, I think that if you are still interested in writing online articles in the future, you might as well read more ancient European books, watch ancient European documentaries and films, and learn from popular works of the same type. Book A book written in this way is both in-depth and can bring additional knowledge to readers. It is also logical and worthy of readers to scrutinize what you have written in your article But it is not necessarily true. After all, it is easy for me to say it. If you really want to do it, there are not many people who can do it, because online writing relies purely on talent.

Very well written, keep up the good work!

She is indeed the woman I have fallen in love with. 🙂

How can I put it? It's not that good for my taste.

So all kinds of girls are harem stories?

Did you see in Chapter 26 that this is how spies are used? Sorry to bother you, although I understand, I can't accept it! Goodbye!