The Beginning of the American Manga: a Zanpakutō

All I can say is... The setting is great! It's just that my writing skills are poor... I've seen movies where the author is very good at writing, but the plot is not that good, so I can barely watch it. But the setting itself is good, but the writing is so poor that I can't stand it. Even basic logic is a problem. The dialogue is just for the sake of pretending, it's not even close to that kind. And also showing off the lower limit of IQ with S. H. I. E. L. D., It's awesome!

Come on, I just went to the pavilion to look for it, and I still have your book. Don't be discouraged, maybe one day it will be on the shelves and we will go to the pavilion. ✊✊✊

No, it's too embarrassing. I can't stand it anymore. The main character seems to be mentally ill and keeps talking to himself the whole time.

1: The supporting characters all have Zanpakutō, why doesn't the protagonist? A: Hello, the protagonist has a Zanpakutō, which will not appear for the time being. 2: Will the Marvel-DC fusion collapse? Answer: You overestimate me. I am not that capable. This book takes Marvel as the main line, with some other characters and stories mixed in. The main body of this book is based on the Marvel world. 3: Do you want to have a harem? Answer: You overestimated me again. I'm not good at handling emotional dramas, and single people don't understand. And anyone who has read my last book knows that the heroine can finish six hundred chapters, let alone a harem. 4: Why should Constantine appear? A: Because of hell. 5: The God of Death is too weak to beat Marvel Answer: According to tradition, there is a cross-border competition for combat power, and authors fight each other. Whoever wins is better. I think I can fight better than the Marvel editor, so I win (laughing and crying)~ The following is a serious answer: Don't worry about whether it is strong or weak. Even if it is weak, can't I patch it? 6: I'm short and weak Answer: Ha~ I've been given the nickname 'God Killing Gun' by my subordinates, but no one has ever said I'm short! 7: Original Zanpakutō A: For all supporting characters in Marvel, I will try to use original Zanpakutō. 8: I am licking my cheeks and asking for your support~

I just read two chapters and found that the author has a misunderstanding about Ms. Death. Ms. Death is a conceptual god, the embodiment of death and the end. Although she has the power of the soul and is the immediate boss of all hells and demons, the soul has no meaning to Ms. Death. She can create countless souls with a wave of her hand. After all, for them, the law of conservation does not apply. Her brother has one. One is called Infinity, and Lady Death is unexpectedly very humane. Compared to her inhumane brothers, she not only always gets into trouble herself, but also falls in love with mortal races, so she doesn't pay much attention to the rules of death. Deadpool was cursed by Thanos to be immortal. She only had a little temper with Thanos because he suddenly disappeared when they met him after his death.

After reading it, I found a problem. Since you are going to write about a behind-the-scenes story, the protagonist must at least be strong, but at least the overall situation must be grasped. First of all, I have read sixty or seventy chapters. The protagonist is a normal captain. He bursts out with all his strength and is an ordinary captain. OK, the Marvel plot is still in the early stages and is barely okay. But don't reach out when faced with things you can't control, don't you understand? Knowing that Constantine is a trap, he insists on stepping on him, and knowing that Gabriel is a traitor, he insists on putting Mengyin in a dangerous place The result is that the protagonist is like a fool, unable to defeat him in terms of strength, and his calculations are thinned. Mengyin is about to die inexplicably, and the protagonist is angry. But is this the plot or idea that the mastermind behind the scenes should have? Let's not talk about Aizen's strong character, just compare it to Kisuke Urahara in one direction. The protagonist is like a hot-blooded young man who has not grown up. At least Kurosaki Ichigo can still have a blast, and his birth is comparable to that of a small spirit king. Seeing that my mind is blank now and the reading experience is extremely bad, I immediately subscribed to a chapter to comment. Can any old readers tell me what the plot is like?

The Death God's combat power ceiling should be quite low, right? Can he still thrive in Marvel? ? ?

This kind of setting is everywhere now. An ordinary protagonist can deceive the elites of all mankind by just putting on a few expressions. The most important thing is that this protagonist still has nothing, just a few expressions that he thinks he is right, and he can actually deceive him? Even ordinary police stations now have some psychological profiling, expression management, and micro-expressions. As a result, the elites of all mankind have no idea. What do you believe in what you say, and what do they believe in what you pretend to? I really don't recommend writing this kind of plot, because if you don't grasp it well and don't have that kind of writing power, when you write it, it will feel like both parties are fools. The two fools deceived each other and succeeded in deceiving each other.

I just read this novel. It is a rare Death fan work. I have read a few and it is definitely poisonous. From the first chapter, many people have criticized the author in the comments. There are indeed some problems in the plot of the manual. But the author, as a new writer, can not be affected by the abuse, can persist in updating for two years without supervision, and can write more than three million words based on his own hobbies. This really makes me admire and support the author (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, thank you)

I hate this the most. The protagonist is obviously just one person, but he insists on making up an unknown organization, and then he happily builds vests to show how high-end this unknown organization is. Wow, you are so awesome, but you are still a passerby in the organization. Words like this make my scalp numb, it is extremely poisonous.

A semi-invincible novel actually wants to weaken the protagonist's ability. If you don't want to be invincible, then let the protagonist honestly start practicing as a Shinigami apprentice. Do you want the protagonist to follow the invincible style, but are you worried that the protagonist is too strong? To tell you the truth, the Bleach anime's abilities can't even be heard in the Marvel comics.

How should I put it, you didn't understand the connotation of the Death God, you just simply remembered the power of the Zanpakutō and the coolness of the Zanpakutō, but you didn't bother to understand the original sin of the Death God. Yes, Death has original sin. Then, Cthulhu. Death Marvel Cthulhu is a mess, you failed. Finally, you have a big heart and want to write a three-dimensional story. But I suggest you write a one-yuan story first.

In the early days, I felt a little bit like watching Japanese hot-blooded boy comics, especially the first dozen chapters of Fishing S. H. I. E. L. D. For example, in Chapter 13, the person who was asked, "Is the appearance of the Hollow related to the God of Death?" The protagonist became flustered: "You... What do you mean." I felt a little embarrassed. Is this a tsundere acting template? My first reaction to acting is probably not to panic, but to "stop the action" and then "question" in turn. Only in this way can problems be "profiled". The reaction of the protagonist above, I guess the first reaction of most SHIELD analysts is "fake". Identity is the God of Death, and he has his own pride when facing human beings (the attitude mentioned above). When such a protagonist is exposed, I personally feel that the excessive facial expressions are very fake.

It was quite embarrassing when I saw the part about Sister Hua. The various descriptions were really embarrassing, such as the hands as white as jade and the tears of Sister Hua. It was really embarrassing. I don't know if the author felt a little nervous when he wrote that part. I hope that the author can look at the part he wrote in person later. .

You really shouldn't write a book where the main character is very smart. It's very difficult to write, even if the dialogue is a lot of work. When the protagonist first met SHIELD, I didn't know what he was thinking. You can keep your face expressionless throughout the whole process so that others cannot judge. This is the best way to deal with it. It is not how the protagonist performs that will make others think. Especially when the other party is an agent, Natasha is being monitored throughout the process and observed by micro-expression experts. Do you think your acting skills are invincible? An amateur performer challenges a professional? This makes me think that except for the protagonist, everyone in your novel is a fool.

I just saw Uncle Fa, and I found that the author seemed to have some misunderstandings about the God of Death. One is that ordinary people will become hollow after they die. Ichigo is fine because he is true blood. Second, the Zanpakutō and the Death Overlord Suit are standard equipment. The swords are uniformly distributed by the Soul Society or passed down from family. The Death Overlord Suit is work clothes. The alternative is Kenpachi, the sword he picked up, and Ichigo, who embodies the power of the Quincy. Third, the God of Death is a profession. In the future, it will be 996. It does not mean that you are the God of Death. You can kill ghosts and fight immediately. You have to go through systematic learning. Ichigo cheated because his spiritual pressure was too strong, but the store manager still taught him.

There is also the cliche of giving up everything for one person, losing strength and losing memory. I am really speechless as I write. . .

It's really embarrassing to watch, it's really clever, it's really poisonous, even Shen Nong is here, I can't stand it and it's embarrassing

It is a common problem for ordinary people to try to write characters with high IQ and behind-the-scenes bosses. They cannot imagine what a person with high IQ but few resources would do. They can only write the supporting characters as mentally retarded and believe in the protagonist's little tricks that are full of loopholes like magic. The story itself is written by a fan, and readers also have inherent impressions of the supporting characters. The supporting characters are seriously inconsistent with the original work, resulting in OOC. Not being able to write a protagonist who is as smart as a demon, but also being reluctant to give the protagonist a bigger golden finger, and wanting to give the protagonist a behind-the-scenes operator, the setting will inevitably lead to the collapse of all members of the team's mental retardation. If the author's IQ is not that high, he will not be able to write a logical closed loop. If the golden finger is not big enough, it will not be cool enough. If the protagonist can become a trader based on the first two points, it will appear that other characters are mentally retarded. I suggest that if the author wants to write a behind-the-scenes protagonist in the future, just use a big cheat. If the small operation is not cool enough, just use the resources. If you don't do fancy things with your supporting characters, just put a bunch of facts in front of you. No matter how high the IQ of the supporting character is, you still have to believe it. It's cool enough.

My ability to resist poison is too poor. Author, you can write whatever you want and I'll get out. In the first few shots, the male protagonist introduces S. H. I. E. L. D. It was so embarrassing, especially some of the conversations with Natasha, which made me feel so embarrassed that my toes were on the floor.

After seeing the 79 chapters with limited exemption, I really couldn't hold on. The reason why I spent the money was to complain. Starting from chapter 37, this book gave me a very unpleasant feeling. I was very unhappy after reading it. I originally thought that if I persisted, it would get better later, but it didn't. The root cause of many people's criticisms should be because of this. I saw a book close to being released from chapter 37, but I didn't see it being any better. There was no emotional release, and the protagonist's combat power was... People's feelings are up and down, killing and showing off in front of weaklings, and winning against strong ones are not satisfying, especially the chapters of Constantine. I don't know if the author read them from beginning to end after writing them, but as a reader, I felt really unhappy and frustrated after reading them. The most important thing is that there is no plot to release my emotions. Even when I am writing this book review, the depression in my heart caused by this book is still there.

Regarding the Soul King, the Soul King was born before Soul Society, the Human World, and Hueco Mundo were separated. At that time, there was no concept of life and death, until one day the Hollow began to devour humans. If it continues, the world will eventually stop the cycle, and all souls will be swallowed until they become a super-large Hollow. At this time, a person with the power of Death, Hollow, Quincy, and Perfection was born. He was the Soul King. He used his powerful power to eliminate Hollows for mankind and let the world restart the cycle. However, in a world without life and death, it is useless to eliminate Hollow. The world is still in chaos. At this time, the other five beings who are equally powerful but far less powerful than the Soul King are dissatisfied with the current situation. These five are the ancestors of the five major families in Soul Society. Although the motivations of the five people are different, they all agree that the world should be separated and the realm of life and death is needed. To separate the world, the transcendent power of the Spirit King is needed. So, the founder of the Shiba family went to convince the Soul King. When the Soul King relaxed his vigilance, the founder of the Tsunayashiro family sealed the Soul King in the crystal. Based on his power, the world was divided into the Soul Society, the Human World, and Hueco Mundo in later generations. Therefore, the Shinigami who purified the virtual world and maintained the cycle of spiritual children in the three worlds was born. The ancestors who were suspicious of the unresisting Spirit King and at the same time were afraid that the Spirit King would break the seal and destroy themselves, tore off the Spirit King's left and right hands that controlled stillness and advancement respectively, making him enter a state of immortality. They also took out his internal organs one by one and cut off his legs to weaken his strength. In this way, the ancestors turned the Spirit King into a human stick that was only satisfied with their own convenience to maintain the world. Therefore, the history of Soul Society is based on sin. A hero who saves the world is sealed and allowed to endure the pain and loneliness of immortality. Part of the power that the Soul King was deprived of took on a human form. This is the origin of Yhwach, the founder of the Quincy, and the reason why he called the Soul King his father. And this is what Aizen said to Ukitake when he rebelled against Soul Society. From the beginning, there has been no one in the sky, neither you nor me, not even God. It is true that there is no god by birth, only a poor man who has endured millions of years of loneliness. From this perspective, Aizen's killing of the Soul King also rescued him from pain. So which one is evil, Aizen or the Shinigami? By the way, the monk thought that Ichigo could not beat Yuha. If Ichigo lost, the monk originally planned to make Ichigo the next Soul King. Because like the original Soul King, he possesses the power of Death, Hollow, Quincy, and Perfection Technique at the same time, and has the qualifications to become the Soul King. In the end, Ichigo won, so the monk turned the body of Yhwach, who had absorbed all the power of the Soul King, into the second Soul King to continue maintaining the balance of the world.

. . . After seeing 180+ chapters of the Thunder God chapter, I can't stand it anymore =_= The writing is too dry and it's really tiring to read. . . The cool point is seriously lacking =_= To be precise, the use of the God of Death content in the article is far below expectations . . . I feel that the author has completely missed the core point of Death =_= He also failed to grasp the two three points that are rare and interesting. . The sharp gun showed its face at the beginning and disappeared later. Hyōrinmaru appeared again and again, which was more than enough. The key point of this ice skate is to change the battlefield environment and freeze the space with its unique skills. And your fighting description is not vivid enough and is not exciting at all. It is basically no fun. If you really want to show off your skills, you might as well switch to Yuzu Shirayuki and perform the first dance, second dance and final dance. The more colorful and colorful the final dance is, the more exciting it is. . . . . . To be honest, if you read the novels of Death God Goldfinger, you won't miss them =_= But this is the first novel that I can read but the character of Death is almost lost. . . When I saw the Hell dungeon yesterday, I was obviously bored and tired. The character of the God of Death was completely dropped. Although I understand that you can't be reckless when doing things among a bunch of big guys =_=, your suppression of the power of the God of Death is simply chasing away the readers who come for the God of Death. . . . . . Either the compressed and dry paving process sacrifices some logic to make the rhythm faster👀 Or. . . It's so cool to find the core of the God of Death and let the plot that has gone through such a long foreshadowing sublimate in the final climax =_= This rhythm and choice are too difficult for you based on the current situation. . . How to say it. . It's just that after watching it, I felt stuck in a rhythm that was full of grooves and didn't know where to start. 😵 ps Regarding the choice of Bleach content 👀 The two highlights are Zanpakutō Liberation and Arrancar Return =_= I don't know what you think. . . Quincy? ! Please Aizen, after finishing the fight, just follow Kaguya's GG to Naruto🙄🙄The invisible empire behind it is just like Boruto. You know such a term, except for a few die-hard fans, who cares about the plot behind it. . . You actually set the key points in the opening =_= Brother, this is the leftover material after the showdown between the two main protagonists, the God of Death, okay? It's superfluous . . . Then about the choice of Zanpakutou and Kyon's progress👀It's really hard to explain in a word==_=If you can't show off the magic gun, there are not so many swords to change. I don't know if you are particularly fond of Hyōrinmaru or why it was all about it in the early stage =_=It's not easy to get a new sword. In the end, there is nothing to say about the two supporting actors who have a serious lack of presence. . . As for Xu, if your pace is so slow, don't take over everything. You have to build everything by yourself in the Year of the Monkey, Horse and Moon. The day lilies are already cold =_= At the beginning, it was set that time travel caused a piece of hell to fragment into Hueco Mundo. Isn't it over? 🙄🙄 Are you still lacking the nutrients for such an upgrade? ? Chapter 200 of Momoji is still a chief official . . . You have said it yourself that as long as you remain strong, you can learn from Aizen and join Hueco Mundo and become the guest master, okay~_~Why are you afraid that you have to build it brick by brick to ensure your loyalty? ? ? It's just a slap in the face. . . Also, as mentioned in the introduction, Aizen's saucy manipulative hairspray hand is sitting upright in the sky, as mentioned in the introduction. The hairspray is gone when she is drunk. All she has to do is be careful with her words and actions, and make small fuss. . . Day╯╰

The writing is pretty good, but author, could you fix the setting first when writing? I didn't even understand the setting, so I just wrote it there. One moment, I said that killing an ordinary person would give 10 low-level soul coins, and in the next moment, killing an Obadai would give me 1. Let's start by saying that 100 medium souls are exchanged for one ten-series, and in a blink of an eye, it becomes 10 medium souls drawn once. The most annoying thing is that 17 medium souls are drawn, and there are 12 left after drawing. Author, who did you learn mathematics from?

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This is a request for help. About the setting of hell in Marvel and DC, I found a lot of information, but the results are all ambiguous and inconsistent, and cannot be used as a reference at all. I can only ask knowledgeable book friends online to tell me about the settings of the devils in hell in Marvel and DC. Please! ! ! 😭😭😭

Give me an opinion Now your lie is that Soul Society has existed for a long time. The ancient organization cannot be all Japanese. There should be some other races, otherwise it will be easy to get involved I just saw Toshiro.

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The protagonist is a pure setting tool, and has no thoughts and personality of his own for the sake of the plot. One moment I am trying to show off my cool, and the next I am offline for more than a dozen chapters. Aizen has torn apart the old gods with his own hands, and the protagonist can be beaten to amnesia. For the sake of the plot, the combat power is sometimes as high as the ceiling, and sometimes it is difficult to beat an ordinary person. Marvel is already complicated enough and adds so many messy things. Marvel already has its own Cthulhu Shumagrath multiverse-level big-eyed monster. The author is still adding Cthulhu, but the strength it gives is not enough. Isn't it appropriate to tear apart the old god with his own hands? Marvel's paradise is not DC's paradise. Marvel's paradise is the tenth latitude on the world tree, but was exiled by Odin. The author forcibly upgraded the intensity of paradise, and many settings are very confusing. In fact, the strength of the God of Death is still low. The Soul King setting feels like Dormammu does not control the latitude. He has certain authority in the latitude and is not omnipotent. For example, he is not omniscient and omnipotent. He can create things, but the creation is not controlled.

In recent days, several book friends have been asking why updates are so slow. Let me explain. I update two chapters every day, at 11 a. M. And 4 p. M., Instead of updating one chapter every day. You have misunderstood me 😭😭😭 Then the second one! The new book issue will go through a recommendation process. If I update too much every day, the number of words will suddenly increase. In the end, my recommendations will be much less than others, and my collection is not as large as others. How many people can subscribe? So, it's really not that I'm trying to make you appetizing, nor is it that I'm deliberately going out of context (there's doubt here), I really can't do it! I will record all the rewards. A reward of two thousand plus one chapter will be added, and then I will cash it out after it is put on the shelves. Then thank you all again for your support. The so-called meeting is fate. I hope we can go hand in hand.