I Cultivate the Divine Dao in the Mortal World

Originally I quite liked this book, but I met an author who is so talented but not moral. If he doesn't want to write, he just says, "Is it tiring to let others endure it all the time?" Also, I don't think the author should think about writing books in the future. You can't become a god, so you'd better find a construction site to move bricks as soon as possible!

Is a piece of land equivalent to Nascent Soul? Not very acceptable

I didn't want to read it when I saw that the main character's name was Wan Xiaoshan. I have never read a book in almost 20 years. If the main character's name has small characters in it, Wanshan means Wanshan. I also added a small character to mean that your name has Xiaoba, so the main character should also be named Youxiao.

There is no future in writing about mortals. First of all, the world view of mortals is too big, and the description of the relationship between sects and races is actually relatively vague. It is almost entirely from the perspective of the protagonist. The world map is too large, and it is difficult for people to have a clear concept of the geographical location and the relationship between various forces. The causes and consequences of the incident are all briefly mentioned, but the protagonist's experience is quite thrilling. If the world is not big, it can still leave room for imagination, but there are many routines like this for ordinary people, and there is not too detailed description of the history and development of the world. Generally speaking, there is no gossip and trivia. There are no lasting supporting antagonists and better factions or friends. The most important point is that Han Li's character is so perfect that there is almost no controversy. This is a perfect character who is cautious, independent, and determined to cultivate immortality and Taoism. The biggest joy of fan fiction is "torturing the protagonist", which of course does not mean doing something to the protagonist physically or mentally, but comparing the personality with the protagonist and opening up a new path from the areas that the author has ignored or has wrong understanding. This is the biggest joy. Generally speaking, I can do better than the protagonist. But the character of Han Li, a mortal, is too perfect. Anyone who has read the novel knows that if I didn't cheat, I wouldn't have survived three episodes in it. No one can do it more perfectly than Han Li.

It's so poisonous. Your mountain god is so low. He lives in a cave and doesn't even have a blessed land setting. I also took the Mountain God Seal to refine the mountain, but it took 3 days and it still didn't finish. This is the most unimaginative Shinto setting I have ever seen.

Overall, it looks good, but there are still parts of it that are a bit far-fetched and feel like they are forcing the plot. For example, there is corruption within the Kunlun Cult. Because there are many people who have committed crimes, they do not punish them severely or kill people. They only give warnings, and they are told that if there is another time, they will be worse than dead? Let me put it bluntly, there are so many cases in reality, wouldn't you check it yourself? Punish the evildoer to death, and others will naturally restrain themselves. It's just a warning that you might as well make life worse than death for them, at least they won't drag more people into the water. People used to hold back because they were afraid that you would know, but when they saw that you knew, they just revealed it so gently... Haha, I'll deal with it next time, unless the author gives you a halo. If it really came to reality, I wouldn't be surprised if the number of people increased tenfold... Of course, this happens everywhere. But it does look a bit jarring.

If you take the incense path, won't it be GG once no one believes it anymore?

I'm convinced, why in this novel, the dialogue of the characters is mixed with ambiguity, Versailles is pretentious, hesitant, and he doesn't speak human language!

I've seen chapter 5x so far to tell the truth. . . I don't understand at all why the author made the male protagonist's two subordinates, Li Bing and Li Lang, look like licking dogs. . . It's okay to arrange CP for supporting characters, but there is no need to write like a licking dog. . Li Lang was cuckolded, and then his partner teamed up with his mistress to murder him and then forgave the betrayer. . . . The same goes for Li Bing later. He had just drawn up the method of cultivating immortals, but Li Bing just saw a female cultivator who violated the rules and killed a lot of people, so he let her go like this?? Not to mention, you, Li Bing, have set yourself up as a fanatical believer. . . . Other than the protagonist in the entire article, the one who cares most about abiding by this is probably Li Bing. . . To put it easier to understand, it is "the canons established by the gods that Li Bing believes in." Fanatic believers do not rank the canons first. . . . . The two supporting characters were quite attractive to begin with, but now their favorability ratings have plummeted because of this. . . .

What everyone wants to read is the story about mortals cultivating immortals. They are not interested in the affairs of other heavens. They write too much about it and people run away.