I Became a Servant and Turned Out to Be a Kamen Rider

How should I put it? I just couldn't understand the three characters. It was so confusing that I didn't even know what I was looking at.

Kamen Rider is more of a rider than a saber.

This is too confusing. To be honest, I have read Chapter 17 and still don't understand what the Holy Grail War is about. The restrictions on the protagonist's belt have not been explained or studied by the protagonist. All the events that happened had no beginning and no end, and many characters appeared suddenly and inexplicably. It's very psychedelic to watch. Will the writing style and writing style be the same in the future?

Shouldn't Saber be a swordsman? Why have you become a knight now? Furthermore, shouldn't Kamen Rider be a rider? ! ! I don't understand what I think.

It's outrageous that Kamen Rider's transformation belt can be copied by enemies as a skill. It's really tiring to watch, and the perspective is scrawled at every turn, and suddenly it changes to an unrelated plot. It's more annoying than fast forwarding when watching anime.

When writing, the author cannot just read the article from his own point of view. You have the basic story characters and plot in your mind. Readers don't have the basic story characters and plot in mind. When reading, the article will appear very fragmented. Sometimes a character will appear in one sentence and be introduced in one sentence. The story will suddenly be different when the paragraphs are changed. This kind of writing will give readers a headache when reading and they will not be able to sort out the characters and storyline. I hope it can be polished a little more.

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is messy and confusing.

The author suggests that you should write about some popular knights in the early stage, otherwise it will be difficult to retain people. Maybe it is a routine, but there must be a reason for the routine to exist. Not everyone will remember the deputy knight, which will cause you to lose a lot of traffic and will be bad for the performance of the book.

,,, Even primary school students can understand the writing, but I don't understand what you want to say at all.

The writing is so good, the characters, storylines and events are basically not clearly written. . A mess

What a bunch of cows and horses, a mess

Saber is not a swordsman profession, Kamen Rider is a knight knight, cavalry, motorcycle, motorcycle! There are also people who ride dragons and drive sports cars. It's because they ride something that they are called knights! (Except for really running away)

This book is awesome, it comes with the Crimson King

It's a mess. I don't know where the main line goes from east to west. The setting of this book. Haven't seen it until now

... What are you writing? ? A messy mess😵

Come on! I like this subject matter.

Alas, the author should practice his language expression skills! The words don't convey your meaning. What you want to express cannot be expressed in your writing style. Or is it that after you change it, I can't imagine what it was like before you changed it? And don't you think it's a little weird? The names are all Chinese, but the colloquial language you use, or something you are used to, are all Japanese, but they look very awkward.

Let me introduce you to your world background. When you said Servant, I thought it was Xing Yue. I didn't understand anything about you.

Not very good. The author wrote that the male protagonist and the female protagonist have an IQ like a three-year-old child? Especially in Chapter 8, the opposite party can kill and set fire to destroy others, but why can't he do it with the male protagonist? And in this world view, it is not illegal to do anything, rob or kill. If there is such a disgusting supporting character, he should be kicked out. Don't kill the male protagonist every time. The result is the same as playing a game. The male protagonist can't catch up and can't be cruel. And this novel is a hodgepodge with a little bit of everything. It's so messy.

Author, is this novel no longer available? 😐