Take the Ming Dynasty Across the Heavens

The layout is great and easy to write. Come on, I'll book it all for you.

I feel like the writing is a bit messed up. I have already mentioned the names of the characters, but it is also a Yun Dynasty novel, and no author can portray the characters vividly.

So far, the writing is pretty good, but I still hope that the author can broaden his imagination. Whether it is a spiritual civilization system or a scientific and technological civilization system, it is a way for civilization to develop. Based solely on reality, I don't think anyone would unconscionably say that the feudal monarchy would be superior to the modern state system. After all, the subject of this work is the "Liu Tianliu" of the "Ming Dynasty", not an individual, and the traditional setting of the development of spiritual civilization will be subject to the individual's qualifications, external environment, and the abundance of resources. Generally speaking, there will be a certain "threshold" in development. This "threshold" will of course be due to the fascist-like external plunder of the traditional "Zhutianliu", which will complete the primitive accumulation of capital, thus promoting the development of the "Ming Dynasty". However, this kind of development is definitely not a benign development when viewed from the perspective of the real world. At this time, you should consider whether the development of the book is based on the protagonist or the entire "Ming Dynasty". If it is based on individuals, there is really no need to consider the above issues, just stick to "cool"! But if it is based on the "Ming Dynasty", then the author must try to shape a benign development route for the "Ming Dynasty" and create a "machine" that can operate healthily even without the protagonist. I also saw in the article that the author seems to be an educator. Although this book is positioned as a "cool article", I wonder if the author can add some thoughts on the development of the "Ming Dynasty" in the book instead of just being "cool" for the sake of it! Of course, this is just a personal humble opinion. As a researcher of Philosophy, I have never liked the individual heroic spirit of traditional online articles called "all great power comes into one body". Instead, I believe and admire the collectivist spirit more. I would be honored if it was helpful. If you have any insights, please feel free to discuss them. Come on, author!

It's very well written. I hope the author will follow this pace. Never be a eunuch.

There must not be Naruto, Marvel, Double Dragon, and A Chinese Girl in the next world. They have been bombarded by fatigue, and it is not like The Condor Dragon, which was poorly written, and will not be disgusted.

There is simply no motivation to continue reading these next few chapters. What the hell are you writing about? Are you leading the Ming Dynasty to fight for hegemony in the heavens? Yunchao Liu should highlight the group portraits. There is nothing exciting about reading the whole story. It is like a running account of what the protagonist has done. There is very little dialogue between the monarch and his ministers. The following chapters about the reincarnation of Shangguan Wan'er should be mentioned in one sentence. Instead, a bunch of dialogues are written in detail. And you understand that you have a grudge against the Buddhist cultivators, and Shangguan Wan'er belongs to the Great Zhou Dynasty and is related to the Buddhist cultivators! ! Do you really see a woman who can't walk? I decided to skip reading a hundred chapters. If it is still so boring, then I wish the author a great sale of this book!

Zu Xia, Huang Shang, Tian Zhou, Xian Qin, Shen Han, Sheng Tang, Dao Song, Man Yuan, Wu Ming, Yao Qing, Kewu Xinghe.

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The author writes very well. But how to say it! It feels a bit bland, there is no conflict or the conflict is not strong enough, and the impact on the readers' senses is very scattered. I feel like I can establish an existence, an existence side by side with Ming, and they both know each other. Specifically, the Soviet Union and the United States. It would be better to write down the various dynasties of our country and let them compete with each other. The bigger the pattern, the better it is to create a confrontation between things at the level of the heavens. Rome, Franks, Holy Roman, Ottoman, Byzantine, Alexander, Great Britain, First French Empire, Russia. Xia, Shang and Zhou, Qin, Han and Jin, Sui, Tang and Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing Dynasties. Plus Mongolia. Also, please improve! 🤓

A bookworm of twenty years thinks this book is good and well written. There is no squad leader like the ones mentioned before, it is modern military system, I guess the author changed it. Come on, author, this book has the potential to be a hit.

Naming: How to name the protagonist's "Imperial Sword". Everyone is welcome to leave a message, maybe your name will be adopted~

There are only seven posts, which is too few. The quality is good.

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The money for confiscating the house was too little. Think about how much Li Zicheng confiscated from Chongzhen's wife's house. This is because her daughter has only accumulated so much after being the queen, not to mention these aristocratic families.

I look down on those who talk about ancestral rules. If I could go back to ancient times, I would fart in Confucius' face even today.

I hope that I won't have to do everything by myself in the future. Remember that Pig's feet are emperors, not written about one person. Also, your updates are too slow. I watched it for only 10 minutes after having it for a week.

Confucius is Confucius, and his image will not be affected by the inferiority of his descendants.

You can get a skill for the war horse, otherwise when the world is unified, ordinary people will not be able to run to death...

This book is not bad, there is nothing poisonous about it, but the writing style is not good enough. It is worth reading. Many books written in the late Ming Dynasty were basically about fighting against the Manchus and the Qing Dynasty, and palace fights, which were not interesting. The Manchu and Qing Dynasties were actually rubbish. In that era, to put it bluntly, it was a worse era.

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Seeking improvement every week

Come and give me some details. I won't post the pictures. I'll just order them all.

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The writing of this book is smooth and the plot is interesting and ups and downs. It is a rare masterpiece. Thumbs up (⸝⸝•‧̫•⸝⸝)

The author is already pretty good (´∀｀*) and he even found a substitute teaching job. Come on, please give me a boost.

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