Apartment's Counterattack Life

Who is the heroine? Vigorously? If you are too strong, just give up.

I'm still fascinated by the heroine, but I think the strong heroine is better, leaving Qin Yumo to Zhang Yida

To be honest, in the past five seasons of Zhang Wei, there has not been a heroine with a personality that is compatible with his. In the fifth season, just to realize his dream, he did a scene where he was sent to his door. You don't have to think about it normally. Yu Mo and Zhang Wei are purely at odds with their consumption concepts. Do you dare to think that if they get together, Yu Mo will give up her daily consumption and Zhang Wei eats instant noodles every day? It's absolutely impossible. The only one who has a slight possibility is Meijia, but Meijia has fixed Ziqiao's relationship as soon as she appears. Zhang Wei has no chance at all in the relationship that started before the first episode. The only chance is to change the plot of Guangu saving Xinling with Zhang Wei, and Guangu has something to do and leaves, Zhang Wei stays to take care of Xinling, then Zhang Wei's CP is real, and according to Xinling's character in the plot, he also accepts Zhang Wei's character.

This name, Brother Xian... Isn't it too embarrassing? They all call him Teacher Zeng. There is no tradition of calling him Brother in the love apartment! ! !

It's too confusing. And the main character doesn't seem to have a high IQ, nor does he seem to have traveled through time.

Author Tong Xia, I really don't want to blackmail you, I just want to tell you your mistakes. For example, you write more than 100 or 200,000 words in one night. Let's not talk about it for now. Let's talk about your 30,000 words in one hour! The average is 500 words per minute, and the actual highest record is around 300. This is the input speed, and there are paper manuscripts or electronic manuscripts. This speed is Wubi input. Pinyin cannot reach this speed, and let alone you can. If you input four letters in Wubi, four or two Chinese characters may be generated. Only after inputting this sentence in Pinyin can it exceed Wubi. It is the first time to write a book. The number of words is only more than 300,000. It is impossible to have such a high stress rate, and Pinyin is not as accurate as Wubi. Coupled with thinking time, typos, etc., The speed will drop a lot. Two hundred words a minute is already an amazing speed! Change it if you see it.

The details need to be improved. In my previous life, I was thirty years old and now I traveled back to time like a teenager. I don't know what the use is of writing this system? Spend money for the protagonist? Paying 10 million to save a broken turtle is a lot of money! The key is that I didn't extract anything useful.

Is the heroine strong? So many fan fictions are basically about Zhuge Dali. You can change it to something else. It doesn't need to be pretty. Qin Yumo is fine.

Is it appropriate for a pure newcomer to start a chapter with just 3,000 words and get an appointment with a great master the next day?

I still think the heroine is Qin Yumo.

A 30-year-old academic is going to write a novel after traveling through time. It's amazing.

I took a look at that one and complained a little. I was using a small account. When I played against a public accountant on the large account, I was banned. It was a lose-lose situation. The public announcement was also useless. First: I suggest you don't always call me Zeng Ge. After all, Love Apartment is all called Zeng Ge. Zeng Ge is indeed a bit awkward. Secondly, copying Internet articles. This is an old routine from several years ago, and they are all trying to kill each other in the fight against the sky. "Zhu Zhu" The book "Ge Dali Acts Like a Baby" is very well written. It describes the inner flavor of a love apartment. The protagonist also travels through time, but the protagonist is also highly educated and directly studies intelligent manufacturing. There is no contradiction. Of course, I did not want to advertise. I just gave the character to the author for reference. Because you wrote it like this, it is really awkward and difficult to introduce. It will definitely not become popular. Of course, I also hope that the author will work hard. I am just giving some small suggestions. Don't be angry.

Sharp! I admire these fellow Taoists who can still read on! Admire! ! !

The first few chapters were so confusing (just a personal review)

I feel that it would be better to have more original plots. For example, the two chapters of the protagonist and Dali's internship are good. If you just follow the plot, you will not have the desire to watch it. It just feels better than watching a drama with many passers-by around.

The first three chapters were unresisting, with lots of typos, the protagonist was portrayed like a paratrooper, and the style was a bit like the garbage online articles from 10 years ago.

What about the system? I used it even if I had no money, but now I don't use it if I have money?

I can't stand it anymore, I'm looking forward to the author's new book, come on! I've read thirty-five or six chapters, and the author's writing is genuine. . . Is this your first time writing a novel? Let's briefly talk about a few problems~ First, I can't tell stories. The author always first proposes what result he wants to achieve and then does it. What is the result? What I wrote next was very messy, even a little random! Second, it's okay to use Dali as the heroine, or even a passerby. However, you, the author, have emphasized many times that the protagonist is a thirty-year-old man. How can you still think like this? I feel like a young man who hasn't left school yet! Third, the online article area. To be honest, the author doesn't have to write if he doesn't know how to write. Spring and Autumn's writing style is just one stroke. It's really embarrassing to write this nonsense! The fourth, and most wanted to say, cheat question. What is golden finger? To put it bluntly, it is a 'reasonable' trick for the protagonist. The web articles you write, movies and TV series, songs, novels, etc. Can all be 'reasonably' resolved from Golden Finger. Since you want to give the protagonist a good and simple start, then use Golden Finger. On one hand, you came up with a cheat, but on the other hand, you didn't use it. You relied entirely on memory. Is it the most powerful brain? Or a copier brain?

Only children make choices, adults I want them all

I just watched the episode of Chuangjie Mountain yesterday, and Nolan's figure is so amazing 😆

After gritting my teeth and reading a chapter, Shennong couldn't bear it

What the hell is written after Chapter 189? ? Suddenly it jumped to the end of the world, and the explanation was unclear.

Don't you know? Zhang Wei is destined to be the only one in the world. Some people say that Dali will abandon the book. I support the choice of Yu Mo. A world is a story, and everyone has different views and understandings when reading books. My opinion and understanding is to respect the author's feelings when reading the book.

Brother, I have no problem with Dali as the heroine, but have you ever seriously thought about it? Five years have passed at most in the first four seasons of iPartment. Love 5 is about ten years later, that is, five years have passed in the middle. So Dali is only 15 now? !

The more I write later, the more I deviate from the main line 😅

Let me go, author, what are you doing? Love Apartment is a daily casual plot, what have you written now? Especially Zeng Xiaoxian's 5 million, you must have read too many pretentious novels! It completely deviates from what iPartment wants to express!