The Snow in My Arms Will Not Be Cold

After reading it, just write a small comment! Don't blame me if you offend! Book title: Very poetic and emotional. Introduction: It's a bit of a killer, which doesn't correspond to the title of the book, but it corresponds to the plot. Style: Relaxed, but also want to be lively and lyrical. Characters: There are types, but no distinctive features. There are many characters in the book, and each character can be classified into a specific type, such as domineering, funny, affectionate... These types of characters also include several common characters in our impressions. But the disadvantage is that the plot cannot support the characters. Why do you say that! Give an example. The plot of this book changes very quickly. Almost every stage of the plot changes suddenly, and there is no natural process. A brief review of the characters: The male protagonist: The arrogant man, in one sentence, is a rich and powerful young master, but it happens that such an arrogant young master must behave affectionately at all times. However, he doesn't know what friendship is. He thought that deep love meant taking his girlfriend to eat, drink and have fun, saying nice things and making promises. As soon as I actually encountered something, I started to be self-centered. I didn't explain anything, and I still thought I was justified. To truly like a girl is not to hide her, but to live with her through thick and thin, hold her to the sky, help her realize his wishes, and be willing to be a green leaf to accompany the red flowers. The heroine: The character is not well developed! It feels a bit pretentious. Moreover, the character of the heroine is easy to make people think that wind is like rain, and the three-minute heat is like... Um... Keyboard warrior... Yes, she is a keyboard warrior. She mainly focuses on her own opinions. She changes her face faster than turning the page of a book. When she encounters something, she expresses her opinion, changes her actions and makes a promise. Thinking about being a hero all day long. The heroine should indeed have a change in personality, but this change cannot be based on a few words of her own, or she can say what she wants without any hesitation. It's about having your own unique temperament and style of doing things after going through all kinds of ups and downs. Plot: The plot transitions very quickly, but the transition of the plot is too abrupt and there is little step-by-step. Lyric text: In fact, you can write less and write more, but it will turn out to be the opposite. A few simple plots and a few actions are sometimes better than lyrical text. Points that can be improved: The chapter names are very nice, but the chapter names need to be added. The word count of chapters can be stable and stable, some are too long, and some are too short. Exercise methods: You can design the exercises carefully. After all, practicing exercises is also very important. Cultivation level: Design the cultivation level well. A good cultivation level can save you a lot of trouble. Map and background: Design the map well, whether it is to defeat monsters and upgrade, or to maintain world peace, the switching of maps should be reasonable and the design of the world view must be large enough, otherwise there will not be many words to write. Until now, I still haven't figured out the setting of this world. Writing style: It needs to be improved. You can read more of other works. Characters: Give the characters more plots. Plot: The transition plot needs to be polished. Conflict: The vision should be broad, and should not be limited to trivial matters in life. Conflicts should be placed on major events, and the image and emotional life of the characters should be reflected in major events. After reading it, I feel that the author should have the heart of a cute little princess. This little girl hopes to be able to act coquettishly as much as she wants, and someone will pay for your various mistakes, and you can enjoy their "payment" and evaluate these "payments". Well, bless the author, the little girl, who will always be a girl, act like a baby to her heart's content, and someone will "pay the bill" Bless the little girl, who will write the little girl.

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About to hit the highway! WARNING WARNING! It'll be exciting later! ! !

I was attracted by the chapter about the little boy and got excited 😁

I'm not watching it! I'll just punch in

Come on! ! ! Come on! ! ! Come on! ! ! ( ･᷅ὢ･᷄ )Don't give up! ! ! ! !

Come on, I'll leave you with the last investment this month, and look forward to a good harvest!

Come on, come on, come on, come on 😍

Come on, come on, come on, go, go, go, go! ! ! ! ! I am very happy with coding, I am very happy with coding! ! ! Very well written, very well written, superbly written

Baby, you finally got over it! ! This night, you will also see the flowers and millions of soldiers of your ancestors! !

The chapters could be a little longer, but if they are too short they feel a bit cumbersome.

I think the results are pretty good, why don't you update it? The investment is gone!