Shadow Douluo

Is it like this?

The protagonist's character should be cold, aloof, and taciturn, but your character's character is broken.

Don't lick the master, don't lick the master, don't lick the master, you are an assassin, a lone ranger, understand?

The assassin talks a lot because he has changed himself after meeting the right person, and he seeks Tang San to satisfy his competitiveness. But I personally really don't like Tang San (combining the whole Douluo Yi). I am also a writer, and this book looks quite interesting. I look forward to the next encounter between Lan and Cai Wenji.

I'll give you some monthly votes in the next two days and write them carefully. Otherwise, I have a lot of blades at home. Do you want to send a few to the editor?

So ordinary people can also kill the God of Douluo Dalu

Bring your dear friends home

Lan friends

Crooked? Is it Tianmei? Someone here has your family stolen. (Funny) Didn't Lan die after getting on the ship? Why are you still alive?

I'm drunk. At least 17 or 18 of the top 20 most searched books by boys are Douluo fanfiction. I just want to read some other good books. 😭😭😭😭

What's wrong with the authors of Qidian? Ninety percent of the top 50 are written by Douluo.

Only 13 of the top 70 most searched among boys are not about Douluo. The rest are about Douluo. It is really difficult to find a good novel at the starting point.

Don't lick the master, don't lick the protagonist. This is a big taboo in many Douluo fan fiction. As long as you write your book like this, you have to pounce on it. Don't ask me how I know it.

My name is Lan, an assassin in Weidu. Today I am going to assassinate a writer named Baili Xuefei because he knelt down and licked Tang San.

I also think that you should not open a harem, because the values ​​in Douluo are already a bit more modern. It would be very uncomfortable to open a harem suddenly. And to be honest, the original idea was to digest and upgrade everyone's feelings in the team. Opening a harem is equivalent to everyone being a light bulb. You just have a few of them, and there is no imagination in the harem. The book is so easy to write. You need to have a good grasp of the protagonist's experience of falling in love with each female character, and the characterization of the characters so that people don't feel abrupt. It is quite challenging for novices to write a book, but Hu Liena's books can actually be considered. It is recommended that it is best to have one female protagonist or at most two female protagonists. Otherwise, if there are too many, their interactions will be written later and you will be killed.

Lan's power is the power of a shark, so shouldn't the martial soul be a shark? Also, why do fan fictions have to provide a system for the protagonist? If there is no system, would it be impossible to survive? Lan is originally a hero among the kings. He has his own practice system. He just needs to follow the steps step by step. Isn't it unnecessary to have a system now?

Cai Wenji is enough for the heroine, otherwise the character will be ruined. I hope the author will not turn a cold-blooded assassin into a silly loser. Everyone knows about Lan's character design, but you're really not afraid of Lan's fans scolding you if you write random things.

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Can you recommend a Douluo fanfic that doesn't lick the protagonist but doesn't make it too sadistic, and don't change the plot too much?

Why am I still reading this book after it's finished?

After finishing the book, are you treating the readers as fools? Ah? Tang San was considered a useless martial spirit because Blue Silver Grass was recognized as a useless martial spirit. The protagonist's martial spirit, Su Yuntao, doesn't even recognize him, and he was born with full soul power. Why did he waste his martial spirit right away? A black mist? No matter how you look at it, it's not a useless martial soul, right? The protagonist's sister was taken away by Wuhun Palace and you knocked her out to help Wuhun Palace? You're not afraid that your sister will be abducted and trafficked, so you'll still be as close as brother and sister after you surrender?

Don't change the outline, please, a single female protagonist is fine, but now it's too poisonous for Douluo to have a harem, please don't change it 🥺

Just say that the writing is very good and the ideas are also very good. Please update it soon. Love you😘😘

I thought Lan was a person who only focused on the mission and didn't talk much at all. After all, assassins need to hide.

Dear author, are you using Wubi input? There are many typos, and they are all similar characters...

I just want to ask, Master, how can you tell that Lan is the twelfth level of innateness? ?

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Will it be updated? Must be updated, I quite like watching it!

Finally updated, I've been looking forward to it for a long time

When he met her, she ran away from him and chased her, and they couldn't fly.