Make Sun Wukong Great Again

I haven't read this book! But looking at it this way, it may be a surprise. Judging from the name, this book should be a very good subject. It may be the author's outline. The writing style and other things are not clear. It is like a great sage possessing ordinary people and various stories happening. In fact, it should be very attractive when you think about it! As an old cabbage! I would like to give some small suggestions to the author. As soon as the name of this novel came out, I actually thought of the recent movie "Nezha Rebirth" even though its plot was terrible! But the world is very nice! , In fact, the author can make use of the world view in the movie, and don't write the great sage's ability into an ordinary world. This is actually not very reasonable, and the force value alone is very mismatched! The Great Sage exists, and other gods also exist. If the Great Sage can come, others can come. In my heart, the Great Sage is actually a person who seems cynical, but cannot stand the sinister and dirty world, and wants to smash them all to pieces! (The obedient ordinary people obtained the Great Holy Spirit. By facing all kinds of oppression, unfairness, and dark things, they repeatedly broke through their cowardice and selfishness, and gradually turned into a person who stared into the abyss with a smile, and then picked up a stick to smash it. Gradually, he was recognized by the Great Holy Spirit. Slowly The ability becomes stronger. The more he resists the darkness and explores the darkness, the more this ordinary person comes into contact with the deeper darkness. With choices and breakthroughs in human nature, he slowly solves the mystery of how the body of the Great Sage dies. In the middle of the story, this ordinary person also encounters those who have secret relationships with the Great Sage. With the help of God's spokesperson who had good friendships but could not stand up, I also met other like-minded partners who joined the Great Sage in resisting the suppression, and guided them towards the anti-oppression struggle in their destiny...) The author's great thoughts on the Great Sage can also be interspersed in the middle. Little stories about the sage's own understanding, such as the warmth of the great sage... (I think Zixia Fairy must be there, haha!) This is something I, an old cabbage, thought of for no reason when I saw the title of this book. Maybe it's really because of the different status of the great sage in the hearts of Chinese people! I haven't read this book because... There are only a few words left, which is not attractive to me, an old cabbage, and it has been discontinued for so long, so I really don't dare to try it! So maybe the story that the author wants to write is not actually like this, then this is just something that I, an old cabbage, suddenly attracted by the title of the book in the book list late at night! But I still hope that my little suggestions can help the author a little bit! Of course, if the author still wants to continue writing this novel, I would like to suggest that you think about it carefully and try to write the story you want to write, and then the whole starting point will be popular! Online marriage is a thread! We meet by chance, author, cheers! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Hello, author, what are your thoughts after reading this masterpiece? After reading forty chapters, the author is an old author. His writing is good and the story is passable, but there is a twist between the lines. This is the author's setting for the character. Of course, it is understandable, but it is very tiring to read, really tiring! This sounds a bit hypocritical, but as a spectator, life is already very tiring, and if reading is also so tiring, there is actually no motivation. Qidian has a lot of novice articles, which means that most of the readers are actually not very educated. After all, the elderly and children can access the Internet, and they have plenty of time. Time is a very critical point. Most authors write books to earn money to support their families. I don't think the author of this book writes it for hobbies. Of course, it may also be a hobby, but that's another story. It is best for the author to open another novel, and then write in this style of writing once he has a reader base. Otherwise, there will not be enough readers to pay, and the author will not be interested in continuing to update the article. Then, as a reader, I will be eunuched again. It is certainly not good to blindly cater to the market, but life always comes after survival.

It's really well written. It's definitely not a newbie like me, but the dialogue always felt a little stiff or uncoordinated in long sections. It's a good book.

Sometimes I feel sorry for these writers who are good at writing... Poor people must be hateful, I hate the quotation marks The most important core of online articles is to make readers feel happy. 100 Novels with decent results will make the readers feel happy 99% of the time. It doesn't have to be brainless (Xiaobai Laobai, Luobo Baicai), but you must allow readers to have an immersive experience, that is, the sense of substitution that is said to be bad. This book has the name of the Great Sage, the introduction is also the Great Sage, and the wedge is also the Great Sage. The readers who come in must also be for the Great Sage. In the hearts of Chinese people, the Great Sage represents many things, but as a Great Sage in the Internet literary world, the core words must be fighting against the sky and the earth, gone never to return and disappearing into thin air. As a result, the book opens with an old man depressed, cheating on his first love, which is very real to be honest, and then adds the burden of family to the protagonist. There is an old man and a young man, the couple's relationship is not going well, the old man is a monster, the young one is rebellious, career, love and family are not reliable. Of course, it is easy for the male protagonist to want to resist like a great sage, and the sadness of failure. However, the author, as a writer of online articles, has he considered the readership, whether it is suitable for all ages or a niche product, whether it is a matter of opinion or for self-interest. I believe that the author, as an old author who has written millions of books, knows more than me. As a casual reader, I can only say that it is really difficult for the author to attract casual fans in the first ten chapters, unlike For other bad works, the author's descriptions are very real, but the only thing that attracts me to read is the author's writing style. The story is very depressing, and it is completely different from what I thought I would see when I clicked in. Although mindless and cool writing is not advisable, a cool collection arrangement and a relaxed degree are really important for a new work, and early stage operations! Alas, I've said a lot but it's useless, and I don't seem to have made it clear. The author should work hard. The author can still tell reasonable stories, but I feel that if you don't grasp the core requirements of online articles, it will be really difficult to get ahead on the Qidian online article platform.

The author is very good. Is this your first time writing a book? Doesn't look like a new author.

The author writes very well, and the early stages are all foreshadowing. I don't know why it's so attractive. I am obviously a newly grown-up college student who went to study abroad for the first time, but I was moved by the protagonist in the author's book. Come on, this book should be popular!

The first thing in the morning, I haven't learned anything yet, eh. .

What I write always reminds me of myself. I don't know why, but it is obviously different from me in the novel...

Xiao Ma's inner voice: You are so awesome, why don't you go to heaven? . . I won't play with you anymore 😆😆😆😆

I discovered this article yesterday and couldn't put it down. I read it until around two o'clock in the middle of the night and finally finished it!

The author's starting point in the opening chapter is really good. At least it aroused my interest. I couldn't stop reading it in one breath.

I noticed that there are missing words in basically every chapter. The author thinks this is a weird situation 😅

It's obvious that the writing is good, but it's also obvious that the plot is messy and bad. It's natural to have bad grades. Maybe this book shouldn't be published on the Internet. It might be better to find a better editor and polish the details before publishing it in person.

The author's writing style is very good, everyone has been saying this, so I won't go into details. However, the protagonist is too self-contradictory in his life and work. In the end, he always makes unreasonable and inferior choices among all possible outcomes under numerous conflicts. Once or twice, it can make people understand the complexity and evil of human nature. In the long run, it really makes people doubt whether the match between the protagonist and Sun Dasheng, who is full of justice, is sufficient. Is this level of matching (the initiative choice of the Great Sage) reasonable?

It's beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, update soon!

Well written! I have been following the article silently for several days, but as I don't like to leave comments, I mustered up the courage to leave a comment to show that I have been here.

If you dare to update ten times a day, all the monthly tickets and recommendations will be given to you.

The subject matter is very good, and the writing is also very good, but the control of the storyline is a bit poor. If the story can be told better and the plot arrangement is more ups and downs, I don't know what theme the author wants to write about? Urban superpower? Urban business? Or family ethics? The subject matter is not outstanding, which is a flaw. There is even a bit of suspense atmosphere in it, which is not bad, but the theme is not clear and the sense of immersion is slightly worse! The first few chapters are well written and have a very clear idea, but when it comes to exaggerating family life later on, it always feels weird! If something is wrong, I hope the author will not be angry 😁😁