Rise from Creation

，，，         ，，， It is recommended that you arrange it in sections. The introduction of the male protagonist and the female protagonist was a bit too sudden, and the process could be smoothed out as much as possible. After all, it is a bit fast for two strangers and strangers to suddenly become intimate.        ，，， Finished, today's recommendation vote is for you.

Come on, keep working hard, I feel like there are a lot of pitfalls, and I won't be able to fill them in the future.

It's your first time here, leave a claw first 🙂

The novel is well written, the plot is smooth, and the relationships between the characters are clear. I hope that the holes dug by the author can be filled in later, come on!

The writing was too boring. I read Chapter 5 and kept narrating, without that refreshing feeling. It is recommended that the author speed up the pace, or start a new book, and continue writing in a different way. The way you write makes it boring for readers, without climax and passion.

From the perspective of a reader, the advice I give you is not meant to be sarcastic. I hope you will become a god as soon as possible.

Thank you all for the recommendation votes. The above statistics are as of 2020/1/1 12:20 .

Although I wrote this book just because of my hobby, I still couldn't help but look at various rankings to find my own book. After searching for several days, I finally found it. Although it was exclusive to hundreds of people, it also shows that some friends like my books. Thank you, thank you for recognizing my works. I suddenly found that writing novels every day makes my life quite fulfilling. Especially when I see the number of collectors increasing every day, I feel very happy.

The main plot of the book is relatively brief, so you can read it. If you have any ideas, you can reply to this post and they will be added to the plot as appropriate.

Happy New Year. Already collected. Newbies, please encourage and support each other!

Already collected, read slowly and work hard! Welcome to return and give advice!

Come on, author, persistence is victory! Hahaha, a million words will go by.