Black Technology Boss in the Gobi Desert

The early stage was pretty good, with plot, comedy, and content. However, later on, I didn't know that I went abroad to form a group to start a gang. Also, how the hell did you become a professional in arms production? Civilian technology is not good-looking, or something. Of course, military technology is not bad, isn't it? However, did the author miss the point? He first started to make a name for himself, sought asylum, and started making money through energy development. Later, he felt that his ability to protect himself was insufficient, and he engaged in artificial intelligence to assist in the development of single-player armor. Did he mess with something later? It should not be about improving the various basic technologies of rabbits and allowing technology to develop and upgrade rapidly to meet the conditions for realizing black technology. Of course this is personal opinion and understanding. Moreover, the writing gives me a feeling that the protagonist has become a canary, surrounded by the Gobi and has become a ruthless tool for people to manipulate. Shouldn't the protagonist use rich black technology information to make other people his tools? The protagonist needs to do everything by himself, which is weird.

In fact, the idea of ​​​​this book is good, but the writing style and plot are too rough, and it feels a bit intellectually demanding. It must have cost money to be promoted on the homepage.

Do you have time to write a new book but no time to update an old one?

Are you reading the text? I was confused at the beginning. After reading a few chapters, I was still confused. I really couldn't stand it and stopped reading.

Author, if you can get 60% in primary school Chinese, you will be considered awesome! I almost choked you to death in just the first chapter! There are many paragraphs where there is no breathing at all! That's when my mind got excited... You have the guts to read a large paragraph of Balabala at more than fifty decibels! See if I can hold you back to death!

It has been removed from the shelves 🙂 You slowly find reasons to delay the update.

Speechless😓Why are you doing live broadcast? That big shot live broadcast? Neuropathy

I think the author's point of view is very naive. In his eyes, he is very afraid of the United States. Logically speaking, the only thing the United States is better than China is in science and technology. The protagonist can make up for or even surpass the problem of science and technology. A controllable nuclear fusion technology, because it is afraid that other countries will be afraid of it, is so funny. In the past, China was so poor and felt that it wanted to build the atomic bomb, so it just did it. If foreign countries don't let us do it, we won't do it? Ridiculous, don't write about China in such a simple way, okay? Irritable

This book is really to my liking, please be a human being! Can you write a few million words? Don't be so short! How can a man be short?

The author has successfully written a protagonist from a civilian scientist to the current naughty child, fool and gangster He doesn't care about things, he likes to play with others and has a willful temper, and he makes a dog to become an artificial intelligence. He doesn't know where the alien came from He is hard to persuade, but he likes to commit suicide and act on impulse. If you are so brave, you can use Magnum as your leader. Wouldn't this satisfy you faster? The language is obscene and the thoughts are depraved. When you write about women, they are either crazy people communicating with steel bars, or they are as pornographic and obscene as old prostitutes A protagonist like you ignores dogs when you encounter them in life. Who do you intend to disgust when you write them?

As a science and technology text, even if it is a fantasy, there are too many flaws in scientific common sense, and it is really too poisonous. I suggest the author re-learn the knowledge from middle school before continuing writing.

I haven't finished writing the old book yet, so I'm thinking of writing a new one.

Women's Clothing Boss

What the hell graphene particles, hell graphene raw ore, you can change the name, then I agree that you said it is the Shoushan copper ore that made the Xuanyuan Sword. Graphene is the structural arrangement of carbon. You take a strong tape and stick it on the graphite, and there will be a layer of graphene on it. Have you only seen the name of this thing? Also, when doing experiments on compatibility, there is a situation where the hand shakes and the amount is too much? Whether it's liquid or solid, there are measuring instruments, okay? Do you think you're a dark wizard dispensing medicine? Doesn't it mean that you have to perform incantations while stirring? This kind of novel is mainly about reading black technology pictures and having fun, this! You guys are just rubbing our common sense on the ground. I really can't stand it.

This author deletes the post, deletes all the comments that are not good, deletes all the comments, just live in your own world.

I have been following this book for a long time, but now I suddenly want to give up. The reason is that the author's thinking is not rigorous and he always takes things for granted. For example: When it comes to the moon landing, only one person can go to the moon. The captain chooses who will go based on guessing. Second, in the past, domestic corporate transactions were settled in US dollars. The author, have you checked finance? Generally, foreign exchange is used for (overseas) transactions. You use nmd (sorry, I can't help but want to criticize him) foreign currency in China. Third, I just saw the flying mecha. I said before that USA's f22 quotation is between US$100-200 million, which is still considered the purchase price of the US military. If the market price of the mechas in this book (calculated based on the research and development costs of fifth-generation machines) is not US$700-800 million, the export price will definitely not be lower, and this does not include the later maintenance costs. After all, if this thing is used well, it can set off a reform of the war model, and you, Du Gang, an intelligence chief, have some common sense, right? 100-200 Million is too expensive? If this really happened in reality, believe it or not, I would give you 1-2 billion to arm you with a reinforced company. To summarize, sometimes when I read this book, I feel that the author doesn't know the relevant knowledge at all, and then I just feel careless. If you knew a little bit, you wouldn't be talking nonsense like this.

I just hope they don't write anything about aliens before the war technology is finished. It's really unnecessary and looks awkward. The technology of this alien is so much higher than that of the earth, how can the flying dragon rider lose? It is unreasonable for the earth to win, and it is unreasonable for the book to lose.

I know why some people don't look like trolls when reading their past comments, but they will come to the book circle to post a post to diss the book or the author. Sometimes it's really because the description in the book is so inconsistent with reality that you can't stand it. If you don't post something to complain about the author, you will feel sorry for the time you spent on the book.

The author's basic knowledge is not enough. It is really a flaw to write this kind of scientific article. As for the first two black technologies, powder virtual imaging, have you not considered that the environment in which people are living will be inhaled? High-energy batteries not only consider the upper limit of energy storage, but also consider charging issues. The capacity of one battery is enough for an aircraft carrier to run for two hours. If you want to charge it fully in one hour, there are no superconducting cables, and there are no wires that can handle it. Moreover, batteries are only energy storage tools. They can only affect fuel companies, but have little impact on petrochemical companies. They cannot change the energy structure. Author, these are all shortcomings in basic subjects. As a scientific and technical article, it is really difficult to read.

I was scolded in various book reviews every day. When it comes to this book or that book, it's not even as good as a simple piece of writing. Excuse me, please first post some good books of the type that I criticize. I hate people who criticize books but don't recommend good books. You scolded this type of book, but you posted some good books of the same type. Why don't you come and write it for us? ! I don't know and no one will call me a fake, but it's okay anyway. Before scolding me, please post some good books of the same type so that everyone in the book shortage can review them together.