The Mage Who Walks in the Heavens

The writing is very good, please come on the author ᕙ༼◕ ᴥ ◕༽ᕗ

Although the background setting of the writing is relatively retro, there are no big poisonous points. For example, the old routines of dog licking and master abuse did not appear, only a few pretending to be slapped in the face. However, when reading this type of mage novel, I still like the rational and cold-hearted protagonist, so I added a bit of cool novel-style protagonist writing. Well, I don't really like the main character in this book, but I don't hate it either. I can read it. After all, he is not a saint. I just save him if I can. Also, the main character in the book is so familiar that it feels very inconsistent. The author uses various familiar methods to increase the sense of immersion. But not beautiful, mainly in Adventures of Success. Although you know the other person, as soon as you meet, you will be like uncle or father, and then help you in various ways. You can first write about coming to this world, and you find that it is a world you know. You can write about the protagonist thinking about what he needs and what he should do. , How to do it, and then contact the protagonist group or the villain group, take your time to get what you need, have a plan, have goals, highlight the protagonist's personal characteristics, don't be indecisive when you should be rational and cold, this is like a mage, it is a reckless person to go straight to the target without a plan.

You are really brave, you just get this meditation and you dare to start it directly. Aren't you afraid that something will go wrong and you will become an idiot? Compared with martial arts novels, it is more brave to practice martial arts directly after getting it.

Your settings. . . Relatively low. The character's behavior is both a Western fantasy epic and a light novel, but the emphasis is not well placed. The logic of the story is straightforward, and some parts can be dealt with as refreshing points but they are mentioned in a few hundred words. Why am I still reading? Because compared to some books, at least you are telling me a story.

No wonder it was thrown off. It was originally well written, but why did it end up in Pacific Rim? I could have just finished the dungeon alone, but I had to spend a year studying at the Mecha Academy. I don't see the use of it.

I write novels to express the fantasy world in my heart, not to live by it. So I will consider the opinions or ideas of all book friends, but I also have my own outline and will always update it steadily according to the outline. As for the subject matter, although the protagonist is a mage, the title of the book says it all, a mage walking in the heavens. Of course there will be no restriction on subject matter, and it is possible to write about all worlds, including but not limited to non-lawyer-themed movies, TV series, and animations. The protagonist is a mage and will always be a mage. No matter what the world is, it will not affect the fact that the protagonist is a mage. Of course, the mage setting is different in each book. I hope everyone can respect the author's setting and not include other settings in different books. Regarding updates, the number is stable at 4,000 per day. It is expected that the book will be completed with one million words. At the peak of the income, it is considered to be 2 million or 3 million. If you find this book unsatisfactory, I'm sorry, but please delete the book and don't criticize others. If you think this book is acceptable, the author thanks you for your support, and will update as much as possible to give back to you for your support. I'm very sorry.

Mage, I haven't seen this word in many years. I miss the old bronze warriors, silver warriors, golden warriors, and the upgrade routines of junior magicians, advanced magicians, and wizards.

There are new ideas, and it's okay to make a scene, but the Sapphire Adventure in front of me is too discouraging, and it's the pretentious slap-in-the-face routine from decades ago. Passers-by lick the goddess, and the goddess licks you. Just be normal and have an ordinary adventure. If you insist on doing these things, you can try it if you have high poison resistance 😅

This kind of planeswalker is boring if it doesn't explore truth and knowledge.

I don't quite understand, but I insist on recruiting a thief brother. The protagonist takes the omniscient and omnipotent route of creating the world, and is speechless just to pick up a thief who failed. Looking at what you wrote later, if you take the father with you, they are better than the thieves, so you have something to write. But generally speaking, the author has not passed the novice stage and can write well. Come on.

The setting is okay, and the growth path is not bad, but the writing is so plain that I really can't stand it. Overall, it's okay to spend some time looking around. At least the author shows the fantasy world in his mind.

In my impression, a mage should be a scholar who pursues the truth. His combat ability is only used to protect himself. The lowest level is a battle mage.

After reading five or six chapters, I realized that it was indeed a pig's foot! The original owner was just a 12-year-old boy who made a living by picking up trash. The protagonist can immediately understand the text from another world after traveling through the past, and his reading comprehension can reach the full range immediately. I became a mage directly by relying on a meditation method and taught myself two minor spells.

I couldn't stand watching Harry Potter. Maybe the opinions are different! In my opinion, there is no need to get close to each other, but the protagonist always wants to get close.

It is recommended to go to the world of Cardcaptor Sakura and learn Clow card magic.

After reading dozens of chapters, I asked if there is a female protagonist. I personally suggest that new authors should not write about female protagonists, or not give her too many roles. After all, reading novels and writing novels are different. If the writing is not good, it will be a poisonous point. The water in it is too deep, and I'm afraid you won't be able to grasp it.

King's Landing in "Game of Thrones", Dubrovnik with its myriad of charms ——Picture reposted from Weibo

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