Awakening a Martial Spirit Every Ten Levels

Author, if you apply the plot of "Douluo Dalu" like this, won't your conscience hurt?

Although it has taken advantage of the popularity of Douluo, the content is very good, but if it borrows too much from Douluo, I am afraid that it will not be able to be adapted into film and television works in the future. As for the content of the novel, the author's writing skills are good, and the protagonist's IQ is also online. If the villain's IQ were higher, this book would be very powerful. If there are still a lot of updates every day, I estimate that I will see this book on the monthly ticket list in the future. Finally, this book is worth reading.

Calling for roles, brothers, if you want to be a guest star, please leave a message. Such as: ID: Martial Soul: Character Background (As long as it's not too excessive, I'll be satisfied.) Of course, you can bring your own soul skills if you like.

Well, could the author be less exaggerated? During the novice period, the protagonist seems to have had many adventures and good luck. He feels like he is about to soar into the sky, but he is chased by a dozen rookies who have just entered the game. Any opponent who comes seems to be a once-in-a-century talent, which makes people read very inconsistently. This type of writing style for the second grade is from ancient times, and I really find it hard to accept it now.

Lin Wanwan

I really like it, I hope the author will work harder

How did the Clear Sky Hammer become the ultimate martial spirit? 😰

Come on, it's the first time I've seen this type of thing!

I really like it. It's the first time I've seen someone writing about the online game Douluo 🙂. I'm looking forward to my guest appearance hahaha 🤭

This rhythm doesn't seem to follow the rhythm of the book. You wrote it according to the rhythm of the anime...

Dear brothers. If you have any comments or suggestions. Leave a message here and I'll see it.

The real charm of online games lies in the relatively fair environment. There are a few people who are willing to be player monsters and cut off money for mall players and lottery winners.

I beg the author to create a book club. Brothers support me

Author: If the strength of the male protagonist in the previous life could be equal to that of the peak king of the same level? I personally think that if you are an ordinary person, you should be able to compete with the lord, but you may not be able to defeat him. Geniuses compete with kings (referring to having some skills), super geniuses compete with emperors (referring to professional players in previous lives), monsters are invincible with overlords (referring to the pinnacle of previous lives), and world-class protagonists compete with demigods (referring to Tang San). Is this the case at the same level?

After reading Chapter 122, I have one opinion: If Huo Wu loses, then it will be nb. But now according to the author's description of Huo Wu, Tang San's strength may indicate that Huo Wu has a greater chance of winning, but it's not absolute (after all, Tang San is a world-class protagonist). So I'm still curious about how far this Shrek can go. (I feel that Dai Mubai's agreement to the bet is a bit outrageous. After all, she is still his fiancée. Of course, it may be that I don't understand royal political marriage)

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One day, Chang Baicao came to the Great Rift Canyon, thinking of joining a team and fighting bravely together. At this time, a rough voice came: "Hey, boy, what kind of martial spirit is it? How many levels are it? We are short of a big guy. Do you want to paint the map together?" Chang Baicao was ecstatic after hearing this and said quickly: "Brother, okay, okay, I don't know what your last name is. Let me tell you first, I can't fight, I can't carry, I can't breastfeed." "As for me, just call me Bao Xiong. As for what you said, such a big tripod must be able to resist. No nonsense, the invitation has been sent, enter the dungeon."... Unsurprisingly, their group was wiped out, and Chang Baicao's title of "send to death" also spread in the crack canyon.

Let's talk about a shortcoming. I'm not sure, right? You said in Chapter 41 that the carrying capacity of a person in two lifetimes will increase, and the upper limit of martial souls that can be absorbed will increase, but it seems that you are writing a virtual online game, not an alienization of the game! In this case, you might as well just write a virtual reality online game! Online games are online games, and reality is reality. You can obviously make the game a reality, but you said at the beginning that this is just a game and will not be realized later, so you already have a very serious conflict. Either the game will be directly transformed into another world, or it will be a pure virtual online game. Like now, virtual online games and virtual reality are sometimes used. It is a headache to see. I advise you to change it directly in the front and change it to virtual reality. , In this way, some things will be logical in the later stage, such as why the carrying capacity will increase after rebirth, etc. That's it, you can figure it out 😥

This book kind of ruins the original work, bro.

Come on, Old Sanwan, I will occupy the first place in every book list of yours from now on, hahaha

28 Hearts, I, Liu Yunfeng, are not worthy 😰

I've been raising it since January 21st, and it's gone all of a sudden. Damn it, it's so short.

Sprinkle flowers after finishing, give some rewards, and create more glory in the future! Come on

After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't quite understand whether the protagonist's ability to obtain a martial soul every ten levels is a cheat or a game talent. If it's a game talent, why don't others have the talent? If it's a cheat, it's not easy to explain because it's in a game, and the game system is the boss in the game. Can it tolerate others cheating under it?

It's finished. As my first full book, Lao Sanwan, you need to be furious on the next page of your book.

? ? ? That's it? Finished? ? So confused!

As the first deacon, I cough, yes, just cough, hahahahahahahaha

No heroine? Female supporting role? Why are they all men?