Douluo: Becoming Stronger by Taking Disciples

Tang San

Shen Nong's Test of Poison: This book is extremely poisonous

Although the writing of this book is very good, it is essentially a cheating treasure hunt (disciple) story about upgrading. There is almost no plot to teach the apprentice, even worse than Yu Xiaogang. The master is a scumbag, but the disciple is more responsible. The whole novel is just a slap in the face, and it would be boring if there is too much.

It's outrageous that Dai Mubai can invite Soul Douluo. No one in the Star Luo Empire supports him.

Author, have you not read the original work? Qian Daoliu doesn't have a hundred thousand year soul ring. Are you kidding me? His soul ring configuration is eight black and one red. The same is true for Bo Saixi and Tang Chen. Don't write it down if you don't understand.

It's good, but the pace is a bit too fast. I hope the author can slow down the pace and teach the students well 😁 Also, the strength has increased too fast. You can slow down the pace. Two martial arts are enough. If you can't have three or four martial arts, it will collapse. You can also teach the students internal strength, footwork and swordsmanship. There are so many martial arts and martial arts. It is just right for each student to learn one or two.

The subject matter is well thought out! But the writing skills are terrible. This book feels like a crooked King of War or God of War invasion fantasy... He just keeps loading coins without any brains... He has apprentices and doesn't teach them well, so he forces himself to load coins! And they are all female apprentices, engaging in ambiguity! There is a strong smell of the invincible crooked-mouthed war god who is jealous and has a big face...

I really like the author's setting for teaching disciples. I hope it will be updated all the time.

I keep pretending and slapping my face, I am speechless and I can't stand it anymore.

There are too many people appearing all at once, and the level is too high.