Douluo Becomes Stronger by Accepting Disciples

Are the protagonist's martial arts swords of ice and fire called "Condensed Crystal" and "Liu Yan" respectively? And the protagonist looks like this:

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is not. It's okay to read one or two chapters of Long Aotian's theme, but it's almost boring to read it. Come on every writer. 🌹

Tang San

Although the writing of this book is very good, it is essentially a cheating treasure hunt (disciple) story about upgrading. There is almost no plot to teach the apprentice, even worse than Yu Xiaogang. The master is a scumbag, but the disciple is more responsible. The whole novel is just a slap in the face, and it would be boring if there is too much.

Shen Nong's Test of Poison: This book is extremely poisonous

It's outrageous that Dai Mubai can invite Soul Douluo. No one in the Star Luo Empire supports him.

Author, have you not read the original work? Qian Daoliu doesn't have a hundred thousand year soul ring. Are you kidding me? His soul ring configuration is eight black and one red. The same is true for Bo Saixi and Tang Chen. Don't write it down if you don't understand.

It's good, but the pace is a bit too fast. I hope the author can slow down the pace and teach the students well 😁 Also, the strength has increased too fast. You can slow down the pace. Two martial arts are enough. If you can't have three or four martial arts, it will collapse. You can also teach the students internal strength, footwork and swordsmanship. There are so many martial arts and martial arts. It is just right for each student to learn one or two.

The subject matter is well thought out! But the writing skills are terrible. This book feels like a crooked King of War or God of War invasion fantasy... He just keeps loading coins without any brains... He has apprentices and doesn't teach them well, so he forces himself to load coins! And they are all female apprentices, engaging in ambiguity! There is a strong smell of the invincible crooked-mouthed war god who is jealous and has a big face...

I really like the author's setting for teaching disciples. I hope it will be updated all the time.

I keep pretending and slapping my face, I am speechless and I can't stand it anymore.

There are too many people appearing all at once, and the level is too high.

I can't even cheat, it's poisoned to death

Personal opinion, if there are similarities, it's not an accident 🙂 Are you pretending to be a Douluo fan and using Douluo's setting to write your own yy fantasy show-off novel? Forget about water, it's cliche or not, it's been 21 years, it's poisoning everyone.

From the first picture I watched, it was all pretentious, and it almost disgusted me to death.

This old routine gives you experience and slaps you in the face...

I feel like there are too many pretentious scenes and the plot becomes a bit draggy.

Well written, but not enough to read. Tang San cannot be retained. This person also has problems with his outlook on life. He might become a god in the future and seek revenge from the protagonist

The full text of this piece of shit is free!

Come on, more, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah

I've read a lot of Douluo fandoms, and as a teacher, this is my first time watching it. It's good, so please try to read more.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

The theme and setting chosen are good, but the author himself can't write, he is a seam monster, and he missed such a good theme in vain

If I had known earlier, I would have read the chapters first, but if I didn't pay attention later, it would be so messed up.

Embarrassing, little white text, the old suit slaps you in the face

This novel is meant to be funny, but I was lonely when I wrote it, so just go to sleep.

Haven't you looked at what you wrote?

(ง •̀_•́)ง Come on, the writing is good. Pay attention to the typos. There are a lot of them. Please check them again when uploading in the future!

After reading 25 chapters, I kept pretending to be bad, and did not teach at all.

The author himself doesn't even know what he's writing,🐶💩