
My Daily Life in the Two-Dimensional World in Those Years
那些年我在二次元世界里的日常
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 382k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Come on, nothing lasts forever, just seize the day.
Well, I was completely confused as I wrote this, and felt lonely after reading it. In one chapter, you can travel through several worlds and contact several female protagonists, and then immediately return to the main world that appears out of nowhere.
There is a problem with the author's setting. The protagonist has a sister, a house, and both parents died, but he did not take his sister with him during the time-travel. Or ask clearly before the time-travel, or after the explanation, you can just mention it in one stroke. Then if you meet the original characters, you need a little introduction, otherwise who will remember who they are? Also, the protagonist is obviously invincible but is forcibly restricted. Although I haven't read it later, I read the chapter title and found out that the first death happened later... It was probably the protagonist's death. What can I say... It's hopeless. Just revise it and rewrite it... Some details cannot be forgotten or ignored. If you don't care about your sister, then don't write about having a sister at the beginning. If you don't want the protagonist to have a hard time, don't give it all away, otherwise it will be a poisonous point if you don't handle it well.
There are only two posts with hundreds of thousands of words. Author, have you deleted them or not?